The Humice: Dark Times |
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Charmwing a dit : *post So anyways... Chapter 24 might be a bit more epic and will have more events in one, so.... That only means that this chapter will be longer than ever. Edit: Pageget Edit2: Probably I will include scenes of Shard and Foxie "playing with fire" a.k.a #shox can't get along.. |
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Anniebuscus a dit : Hahahahaaa....cx Okayy. |
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Ok... So I planned that the next chapter will be next week. EEEEEYUP. EYUP. I have plans this week.... |
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Chapter 24: Playing with Fire "I still can't recover from the reversion..." Shard grunted, looking at his paws. "It's okay. You didn't know what kind of power it hid." said Foxie J. "I just hope no one else are affected." "No one..." Ursula's voice echoed. "Are you sure, Ursu?" asked Renisha. "I think. At least not yet." said Meifee. "Not yet?!" asked Noell. She saw a dark glow in... Foxie's eyes. "Fox? Are you okay?" asked Lillithia. "SHUT UP, YOU VAMPIRE!" shouted Foxie. "AND YOU, DEMON! YOU SHOULD HAVE BEEN STILL DARK AND JOINED ME." Shard sobbed. "Why... why did you have to say something that hurts me?" "Because... I can say the truth, whether it's sad, frightening or just making you hurt." Hailey sighed. "What we should do?!" Suddenly.... a humouse figure appeared. "Oh hey. Long time no see." "Destiny? Where are your mates? And what happened to you?" asked Noell. "Darkosteu has taken over me. Fully. Now I am Darko's servant forever. And don't call me Destiny anymore. Call me Fate. By the way, I got a new mate who worshipped Darko and cursed Selina. GIOVANNI!" Fate called out Giovanni. He was a black mouse with a dark lightsaber and black super saiyan hair, and he had shades too. "Why hello. Have you seen Meester?" he asked. Fate groaned. "Gio. Stop it. Let's get on-topic." "Want to play hard? Go on." said Cymru." Foxie walked up to Fate and whispered her: "Whatever you do, don't give up." "Are you sure about this? They might have become strong, once they had beaten Darko." Fate whispered back. After a few minutes the fight ended with Fate's loss, and Foxie's dark soul flew wildly away. "Can't you see... when I was dark.... we were playing with fire, Shard." "What do you mean?" "We couldn't get along... Sorry for calling you a demon." "It's okay. At least no one is hurt and I hope you'll recover quickly from the reversion." "And Lilli, sorry for calling you a vampire. At least you're not like Neatze." Ursula suddenly wanted to speak. "NEATZE?! That bastard? She was the one who betrayed Des... I mean, Fate first!" "Oh, nevermind." Foxie laughed. |
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So... I just thought that all 50 chapters will be split into 2 separated fanfics *because I don't have ideas of what would happen after all this madness*. That means - 25 here, 25 there. So, I think chapter 25 - the last chapter here, will be next week. |
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Chapter 25: Queen of Darkness After a long walk, all our team were... trapped. Trapped, exiled and forgotten. They were trapped and couldn't see the outer world now. "Well, looks like we will meet again." A figure smirked and revealed as Selina. "You monster... You'll pay.." Ursula growled. "The spirits.. had kill..." Ursula got stopped when Selina said: "Well that is what am I going to do. Kill, curse and possess all the humice until the end of their time." "But still... HOW DARE YOU?!" Foxie squealed and scratched the obsidian wall. "Soon. We will pay. THE WORLD WILL NOT BE TAKEN OVER BY DARKNESS. WE WON'T BE FORSAKEN." Selina dissappeared and turned into pure smoke of darkness and malevolence. But suddenly, a humouse boy appeared. He looked familiar. It was the boy who was lost in the arena. He walked to the cage and said: "You were my heroes. Even though you're locked in here, you'll soon probably get out. Because you're unstoppable! And oh, I'm locked in here too." He sobbed. "Why?" asked Lillithia and made a ponytail from her brown hair. "Because Selina thought I killed the spirit." Daniel the boy whimpered. "How cruel... How can she lock up an innocent humouse like you?!" Shard gasped. "I don't know... But seriously. Selina is cruel." "I gotta agree." Meifee groaned and sharpened her sword. "Get off the way! Gotta slash this cage down!" She slashed it with a power of 12 elemental swords. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" Selina appeared and hissed at everyone, even at Daniel. Meifee and Cymru transformed in their valkyrie forms. "Go on, you queen of darkness! Fear the servants of Dragostea!" "I'm not scared of him. More like Dumbostea." Selina evilly laughed. Meifee bursted into anger. "HOW DARE YOU CALL DRAGO LIKE THAT?! THE POWER OF DRAGOSTEA COMPELS YOU!" When she was swinging the sword, Selina said: "I'll be back." She evilly laughed and dissappeared as smoke. "Well. Soon we'll fight her again. But she might be stronger." snapped Hailey. "We'll prepare for darkness UNLEASHED." (ya, it's the conclusion, but this story will continue as the last part of the humice saga, lawl) "Darkness Unleashed", the 3rd and the last part of The Humice saga comes soon! |
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T O B E C O N T I N U E D >.> |
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Charmwing a dit : Y E P . D A R K N E S S S H A L L B E U N L E A S H E D S O O N . |
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Anniebuscus a dit : N O W W I T H 2 0 % M O R E D A R K N E S S B U Y N O W ! |
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Iwuvcheesed a dit : 20% more: - #shox - DARKNESS - Spirits - "eat grass" moments - Demonwatching /Noell/ - and so much more! Buy now with a 99% discount! xD Only.. ermm... idk. |
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Anniebuscus a dit : now buy our new game "PLS KILL THESE SPIRITSssssSS" , play now for another £0.01! play with parent's permission or else |
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Iwuvcheesed a dit : PLS KILL THESE SPIRITS > PLAY OPTIONS HOW TO PLAY EXIT *plays* LAWL. I killed Selina with Meifee's sword. Meifee's sword might be rare in this game. *completes the whole game* WOOOT I love this game. But. WHERE DAFUQ ARE SPIRITUALS?! Des... I mean... Fate will be angry D: |
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WELP THEN WHAT A GREAT CONCLUSION. |
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Anniebuscus a dit : i made like a ton of stuff for a game (i took this kind of seriously) but i'm afriad it might spam the thread so I NEED TO USE FLAGSS :< the only items I can think about: Shard's sword I MEAN BLADE elemental sword your broken magic brush Hailey's bamboo wand CURSED DEMON BLADE THING OF DEATH amazing quote of death Meifee's sword had to read all of the character info and chapters for bosses: Dark Lillithia cantthinkofanything Foxie (maybe i'll base it on error 404's evil foxie) Raged Renisha Demon Shard icantthinkofanameforthisbut Hailey's Dark-side Spirit Noell THE AUTHOR (ANNIE YOU'RE IMMORTALLL) The Enlighted Force I guess (but not Hailey) spirituals Darkosteu Reversed Shard (ithink) Destiny I MEAN FATE Selina |
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Correction in the CN flag the only items I can think about: Shard's sword I MEAN BLADE elemental sword Molbee's broken magic brush Hailey's bamboo wand CURSED DEMON BLADE THING OF DEATH amazing quote of death (wait, what?! you meant "eat grass", right?) Meifee's sword had to read all of the character info and chapters for bosses: Dark Lillithia cantthinkofanything Foxie (maybe i'll base it on error 404's evil foxie) Raged Renisha Demon Shard icantthinkofanameforthisbut Hailey's Dark-side Spirit Noell THE AUTHOR (LOL) The Enlighted Darksaber Force spirituals Darkosteu Reversed Shard (ithink) Destiny I MEAN FATE Giovanni Selina Dernière modification le 1417547880000 |
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Lel this thread wasn't closed although I ended this fanfic xD the only items I can think about: Shard's sword I MEAN BLADE elemental sword Molbee's broken magic brush Hailey's bamboo wand CURSED DEMON BLADE THING OF DEATH amazing quote of death Meifee's sword had to read all of the character info and chapters for bosses: Dark Lillithia cantthinkofanything Foxie (maybe i'll base it on error 404's evil foxie) Raged Renisha Demon Shard icantthinkofanameforthisbut Hailey's Dark-side Spirit Noell THE AUTHOR (ANNIE YOU'RE IMMORTALLL) The Enlighted Force I guess (but not Hailey) spirituals Darkosteu Reversed Shard (ithink) Destiny I MEAN FATE Giovanni Selina Gosh, what we were thinking more than a half a year ago. xD |
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![]() PLOT TWIST DARK NOELL |