Seeteegee a dit :

I would prefer if someone who actually knows his P6 stuff actually applied. I'm tempted to add a map quota, but that seems to go against our primary objective of helping people. Perhaps we could put that up for a vote?

Haven't there been several p6 applicants?
Or am i having hallucinations?

Dunald a dit :

Haven't there been several p6 applicants?
Or am i having hallucinations?

There have, but I've yet to find someone who's actually helpful with reviews.

Seeteegee a dit :

There have, but I've yet to find someone who's actually helpful with reviews.

Oh .
Ok then C:
Hehe

Issssa a dit :

@2907918
P5

I'm no really happy with it.

Pretty.


Pretty simple gameplay, you should move the cheese to the red circle located on the image, this means more of the mermaid will be used and mice should have to use cj skills. Also I think you should change the beige ground that the yellow arrow is pointing at, to a sand ground, it will look more underwater, finally I think you should add more decorations, its underwater so there are tons of things you can add, seaweed,plants treasure, starfishes and more!
As for the mermaid, the right shoulder is a bit pointy (shown by the blue arrow) and I think this circle should go behind the mermaid? It doesnt look very natural, as you tend to see their belly buttons.
One more thing.


Make sure you make that shorter, so it doesnt pop out of the screen.

Elvismousee a dit :

Pretty.

Pretty simple gameplay, you should move the cheese to the red circle located on the image, this means more of the mermaid will be used and mice should have to use cj skills. Also I think you should change the beige ground that the yellow arrow is pointing at, to a sand ground, it will look more underwater, finally I think you should add more decorations, its underwater so there are tons of things you can add, seaweed,plants treasure, starfishes and more!

I like the overall shading, shape and hair of the mermaid so you dont need to tamper with that.

One more thing.

Make sure you make that shorter, so it doesnt pop out of the screen.

I swear there is a map that already is similar to that. (whut I personally think and I applied :C)

Starshipbay - @2887852

First of all, P4 maps are supposed to require a shaman. This map doesn’t.
I’m not sure if you’re unaware of this, or if you just submitted it in the wrong category.
If this is supposed to be a shaman map, this is something you should do:


Dark Green : Either remove the ice grounds, put them closer to the grass, or follow ‘’Blue’’
Blue : Remove this entire grass ground.
Light Green : Shorten this ground, or make the ground below the tramp longer.
Red : Remove the trampoline, with the ice.
Purple: Remove the upper ice ground.
You should also add a roof. Either just above the cheese area, or the entire map. (Personally, I think that a roof above the entire map would fit better)
You can then also add some decorations such as flowers and maybe a tree.

Dddin a dit :

@2377248 - P22

Go Ctg!~

Pretty map, I loved the left 800 pixels of the map, the text was beautifully made, and the colors look awesomee.


However the right side has a few problems. The yellow arrows point at the furniture, the colors clash alot, they do not go well together at all. I think you should choose a specific color like yellow or something, and use that color for the sofas, or say, different shades of blue. (Up to you)
Blue arrow points at the background, now this background doesnt go well either, make it something more bright, say light blue or white infact, so it contrasts the other side. Green arrow points at the TV screen, make this background, not foreground.
Finally the actual decorations, move them down a bit so they are touching the floor and choose specific colors to go with the house.

The trick to a nice looking house are matching colors, even if it has bad gameplay, if the colors look good, it makes you feel good. ^-^

I'll try to give you a hand for P6 I'm gonna send an application.:)

someone pls apply for p6 as i need help

Sent an app for a P22 [tribe houses!]

Iluvhetalia a dit :

someone pls apply for p6 as i need help

CTG Does P6, you can submit your map. ^-^ I think others do P6 too.

Dddin a dit :

@1274986 (edited) by Maxxzinnn

Hmm ok. Remove the verticle black ground on the top right corner and make the mice stand on black ground. That's the best I can suggest. It's not really that hopeful a map as it does not offer something new. It's just simple BUILDING. But yeah.

I have added that black ground to stop the trolls (its ice)

@2889606 by Zakros

I seem to remember this map from somewhere before. Anyway, I think the concept is nice, but there are some things to it:



First, I think the ground raising in this map to the yellow circle isn't really necessary for the gameplay. It seems to be just "filler" for me and can be done away with. I recommend taking it out.

Second, I have an issue with the top of the cage in the red circle since it's a lying ground. If you want it to be an ice ground, then please use an ice ground, not a wood ground with zero friction.

Third is the ice ground in the blue circle. Remember that you're making a mechanism map here, not a bootcamp. The anti-walljump isn't necessary for the map, I think, and it'd be better to do away with it.

Fourth is the gate that opens the mice. I don't believe that it's actually an essential part of the map. First of all because the rest of the map is a platforming challenge, squeezing in the shaman's button press seems more like a filler than anything else, but if that's really what you want to do with your map, then I can't stop you.

If you still want to go with the button push, I recommend something like this. That one allows the entire map to be played just by the mice themselves.

@2890104 - P22

I really like the tips and ideas! Thanks a lot.

Elvismousee a dit :

change the beige ground that the yellow arrow is pointing at, to a sand ground, it will look more underwater, .

First! It's not meant to be underwater, just a beach, i totally understand that it may looks like that ;; Also, changing to sand would be more difficult for me to form the mermaid, and i have to use more grounds. (I've already used 49/50, cries)
I can for sure make something out of that by deleting and adding.

Elvismousee a dit :

its underwater so .

It's not underwater 8D
But i could make something like this to make it clear... http://i.imgur.com/CkvNK.png
Or just let it be and people can belive what they want.
Or this... http://i.imgur.com/EhuRt.png

Elvismousee a dit :

there are tons of things you can add, seaweed,plants treasure, starfishes and more!

Yes, i think i may.

As in the begining I were creating a mermaid from the back, which ended out bad, as the unskilled creature i am >_> So then i just made some boobies and stuff.

Hidudelol a dit :

I swear there is a map that already is similar to that. (whut I personally think and I applied :C)

I'm not the one looking through whole cfm looking if there are a map like my next. ;) Then if my map is suckish, it just is.


FORGOT; THANK YOU ELVIS <3

@2897376 - P7
Previously been review by Betel.
I want it to be flawless, so don't mind review again.

Iluvhetalia a dit :

someone pls apply for p6 as i need help

oops meant p10 :L

Iluvhetalia a dit :

oops meant p10 :L

I've been thinking about seeing if i can do P10 maps, though i'm not sure.
Also, i heard something about Seete adding P10 and P11 maps in applications

@1971937 for p9

I need some opinions to use the mech in a better way .

@1630980 P4 or P6