how do u draw on the computer hhhhh. im so used to drawing on my 3ds jsc8wj8q

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some critiques on the anatomy please? a redline would be appreciated

Hey Susan, I'm not on my laptop so I can't do a redline right now.
Anyways. I first want to talk about the headband, it looks like it's going into the scalp (into the middle part of the hair). I think you should make sure it goes fully around the hair. If what you are trying to achieve is bangs covering the headband than the bangs would have to probably be longer for that to work. As I'm looking at your drawing, I'm actually playing with my hair trying to see if bangs would actually cover a headband like that. I have not come up for a way yet lol..maybe you should try too. If it's not possible in real life, then you probably might want to tweak it.

I'm also not really sure if you are trying to come up with an "anime" drawing or a "realistic". Features of anime characters are often exaggerated and not as realistic.
For example, in your drawing the mouth is super tiny compared to how it would be if it were a real person. Though all mouth sizes vary, anatomy-wise I learned that the corners of the mouth should go at least to the inside corners of both eyes.


I hope that image link works, if not just c/p into your browser. Anyways, it show the different perspectives of the human head, You can use it to help with the anatomy.

Okay hoped I helped

please could i have a critique on:

the weird anatomy is my style, but the front paws still look sorta off to me. idk

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please could i have a critique on:

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the weird anatomy is my style, but the front paws still look sorta off to me. idk

Well, if the body is that long, I think there should be shoulders somewhere and the paws should be placed higher.
Just a small nitpick too, the neck is way too long for my liking and sort of gives it a strange giraffe style.
That tail is a little confusing about where it starts and ends too.

Hi mice! I finally found the line tool on Pixlr and decided to do a quick drawing of a mouse, I don't mind if you become harsh with it.

Sorry that there is not much depth, like I said it was a quick drawing.

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Hi mice! I finally found the line tool on Pixlr and decided to do a quick drawing of a mouse, I don't mind if you become harsh with it.

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Sorry that there is not much depth, like I said it was a quick drawing.

I personally don't like critiquing something like this because you say it's a quick drawing and want us to be harsh with it. If you really didn't go in depth with the drawing, I really don't know which is part of the "quick drawing" and which is part of you forgetting to draw something.

Anyways,
Mice ears are 3D, they have an inner ear and an outer part, if you get what I mean. Draw another semi-circle inside of the ear outline to mark the inside of the ear..hope that makes sense.
I mean there's other stuff but I can't put it into words and it might just be because of your personal style

Oh, well thanks I suppose '-'

I tried to edit according to your critique. I'm not trying to be too realistic but I want at least some good anatomy.


I don't know how to make the headband work.

Susanlwu a dit :

I tried to edit according to your critique. I'm not trying to be too realistic but I want at least some good anatomy.

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I don't know how to make the headband work.

headband looks better :)

Susanlwu a dit :

I tried to edit according to your critique. I'm not trying to be too realistic but I want at least some good anatomy.

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I don't know how to make the headband work.

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ah ok susan.
human arms fall mid-thigh. the way you drew your arms, they look like they'd fall around the knee o_o. in the redline i made the legs a bit longer mainly your left thigh, and the arms a tad shhorter. also, your shin and your upper thigh are roughly the same size, the shin being a little longer. if you bend your legs, your heel would fall at the top of your thigh, so either make the thigh longer or the shin shorter C:
also, since the character is falling, the hair would be flying upwards a bit too. along with the cat's tail and the skirt.

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I tried to edit according to your critique. I'm not trying to be too realistic but I want at least some good anatomy.

I don't know how to make the headband work.

The posture looks really awkward! Was she sitting on a swing? Or did she lose her balance while holding the toys in her hands?

I would suggest that you draw the flower (rose?) on the right hand side of the head. The face was a little too round and long. See the colour lines.

yo why are you redlining the hair

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Susanlwu a dit :VoirMasquer

I tried to edit according to your critique. I'm not trying to be too realistic but I want at least some good anatomy.

I don't know how to make the headband work.

The posture looks really awkward! Was she sitting on a swing? Or did she lose her balance while holding the toys in her hands?

I would suggest that you draw the flower (rose?) on the right hand side of the head. The face was a little too round and long. See the colour lines.

Actually the nose was pretty fine as it was, as was the hair.

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yo why are you redlining the hair

Cos it looks better that way. è, é

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Satash a dit :VoirMasquer

yo why are you redlining the hair

Cos it looks better that way. è, é

4.) Is this going to help them or is it going to help you?
This rule is here because sometimes people just don't like the art piece. Some will even try to get the artist to change what they don't like. If you are going to include what is annoying you in their art piece, say that it is YOUR PREFERENCE/ANNOYANCES.

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Satash a dit :VoirMasquer

yo why are you redlining the hair

Cos it looks better that way. è, é

actually it made it look flatter, less dynamic, more boring. It was better before; the flying hair gives it more visual, more movement. Idk if I'm making sense..
Sure it might look better to you as just a headshot but you need to look at the whole picture (does it blend in? does it work with it? how does it impact it? etc. etc.)
The flower is perfectly fine, that was just your own personal opinionated nit-pick.

i'm well aware the eyes are really off lmao

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Satash a dit :VoirMasquer

yo why are you redlining the hair

Cos it looks better that way. è, é

No. It looks dreadfully awful.
Listen to Satash.

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i'm well aware the eyes are really off lmao

That's... all I can really find, actually. Just the eyes.
Someone whose good with colors might disagree, but I think it's great besides the eyes.

Satash, if this thread allows non-Transformice related arts, you shall consider moving it to the new off-topic fanart section.

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Satash, if this thread allows non-Transformice related arts, you shall consider moving it to the new off-topic fanart section.

You can still have off topic art in your thread I'm pretty sure, so I don't see the need for Art Critique to get another thread when one is just fine.