[Fan-Fic]The Wise Old Mouse |
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CH 8 THE 3 DAYS Haru awoke, the sun in her eyes. She closed them, covered her eyes with her paw, and rolled over. ''Haru!'' Loukno shouted, from the mountain, Haru assumed. Haru got up and started to head towards it. ''Yes? Loukno?'' she said, looking up. ''C'mon up!'' Wom flashed Haru to the top, winking and going to his hole. ''Yeah?'' ''I really wanna go home... Whatta say?'' Haru sighed, and shook her head. ''We're barely trained, Loukno, i'm not going home.'' Loukno's eyes glistered in the sun, and nodded slightly as if she understood. ''Okay.'' she said, walking up to the mountain's hole and laying down. Haru shook her head slightly. She thought of home, but then again it was nice here. The forest looked amazing, and after what they'd been through, it had been worth it. She jumped down the mountain, using herself as a cushion to land. She ran to the grounds, and then the Wom flashed infront of her. ''Haru...'' he said, looking at her, his head tilted. ''Yes?'' she said picking up her bows. ''Loukno and you will go home in 3 days. I'll get Loukno to train. You'll see what will happen when you return, and only you and Loukno will have the power to fix it. Good luck.'' ''What! Wom-'' Haru said, running towards him. He flashed away. Haru rushed to the mountain, but Loukno said she never saw Wom after he left for Haru. ''Oh no..'' she said. Something must have been up with home, and she knew Loukno and her needed to get trained, and go home. Now. sorry for the triple post |
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CH 9. I DON'T KNOW. Haru awoke in a flash. She looked around. Wom was gone, Loukno by her side. What had happened to her? She rubbed her head, and shook it. She shook Loukno and silently said, ''Traning Grounds.'' Loukno smiled and they went down. They practiced everything they could think of. They practiced sword fencing, and more. Running, which Haru won, and sharp-shooting again. They did this in silence. For a while Haru wondered where Wom was. She wondered what was happening in Transformice, and shook her head. She needed to focus. ''Loukno.'' Haru said, looking at her slightly. ''What?'' Loukno said, running back and forth still. ''What about home?'' Haru said. ''What about it? I changed my mind about here. It's great. I'm staying.'' she said, pointing to the ground, her face a bit more serious. ''I wanna go home, Wom said there was something wrong there. Two days until we go home, but I want to go now. Something must be wrong.'' Loukno shook her head. ''Training takes longer.'' ''Loukno! Just come on.'' Haru protested, her face getting hot. ''Haru. It's probably not even that bad.'' ''It has to be SOMETHING. And I'll find out.'' Haru looked behind and said, ''It's where we should be, anyways. Wom is gone, and we never have been away from home just for nothing,'' Loukno stopped her racing and looked at Haru. ''This is something.'' Haru just starred, then dropped her bows and went away. The words echoed in her mind... ''This is something...'' Maybe it is. |
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CH 10 WERE GOING HOME. Loukno muttered to herself. ''Haru.. what is so bad about here?'' she wondered, being a bit angry. Still practicing, she thought of what Haru said. ~Wom is gone... 2 days...~ If Wom is gone, what chance would they have? Loukno threw her arms up in frustration. ''Stop thinking of it, you idiot, focus!'' she yelled at herself. Haru was at the mountain. She sat by the hole, still thinking, too. It was too much to process. Everything was falling. ''It was a puzzle, it was formed.'' she said. ''Now it's fallen apart.'' She put her head down, frustrated with what she couldn't process. Going home, yes, would be great. But staying here; no stupid mice, her and Loukno. The two of them, free from everybody. But would that be fun? Would that be what anyone would want? That'd be what Haru would want. But, there was Matt, there was mice. ''Home is far though,'' she said. Loukno popped up. ''We're going home Haru. I thought of what you said.'' Haru nodded and said, ''What about training?'' ''We know where this place is. We won't forget it, we can always come back. Great idea, eh?'' Haru thought of that. She then nodded again. ''Okay.'' she said, getting up. They jumped off, and walked passed the Training Grounds, and to the outside. Haru walked slowly, thinking of what they were doing. Her stomach started to hurt as she thought of what Wom said. Something bad at home; something only they could stop. Something he couldn't stop, otherwise he would do. Not anyone else but them. After a long while of walking, they came across a sign. ''Transformice, not far ahead. 3 miles.'' Haru and Loukno looked back at the road. The mountain, what they had climbed. They were gonna go home, and they were going to do the most important thing they could of ever done. The sunset came, and they went in the grass. They both lay down, and Loukno finally said, ''Good night Haru.'' ''Good night,'' Haru's mind swirled from all the thoughts. |
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You guys, this story should get more credit. Erika tries really hard with this, and it's a really good story ^^ I think you guys would like it. I know I do |
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Thanks Kia. ...I'm going to post the last chapter (#11) soon... |
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CH 11 WERE THE ONES Loukno woke up, still dark. She poked Haru. ''We need to get home as soon as possible. Let's go.'' Haru rolled around for a minute then replied, ''Okay.'' Haru got up, and started walking with Loukno. Soon, they reached a sign. ''Transformice, 1 mile''. Loukno's stomach whorled, thinking of home. What would be there? Loukno started running. Haru jogged, and soon, they made it. A hill covered what Transformice looked like. It was small, so they got on top of it. They saw the worst thing they could imagine. Shamans killing mice, fires spread, mice dying. And it was all caused by someone, and that someone looked like... like.. WOM?! Loukno started running, Haru in shock. She came to Wom and knocked him down, but he knocked her on a wooden plank. She almost fell off the map... but then she recovered herself. ''Why are you doing this?!'' she screamed, running again. Wom didn't answer, he still began to knock everything down, and made cannons run free. Haru came running in, sliding slightly and recovering to get her sword. They did this in silence, not talking. Mice screaming, cannons bolting. They both jumped at Wom, then held up there swords. But Haru, she got thrown back. She then got out her arrows, knowing this was the only thing that she could do. She remembered how she hit the middle. Wom was the middle, but he was moving. She never thought of training a moving board. She shot, but she missed. She hit another mouse. Cupping her mouth in shock, she tried again. It hit Wom, but he was still up. Haru then saw a sword by her. She grabbed it quickly, and threw it to Loukno, and Loukno put the sword through Wom. The mice cheered thankfully, and Loukno held up her sword, Wom done with. ''Why did he do this?'' Loukno asked. ''We might not ever know, but, atleast we saved our home.'' Mice cheered, ''Hurrah! Hurrah! Hurrah!'' ''All of that for no-'' Loukno said, then stopped suddenly. Haru looked at Loukno. ''It was something.'' Haru said, winking. |
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youre doing wonderful :) keep up the good work :* i love it, and my character is so cool omg |
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that was my last chapter, i hope everybody enjoyed it! <3 ~ thanks haru i really missed you posting ;_; people vanished after a while aaa aND YES OF COURSE YOU MUST BE C00L I MEAN EVERY WHOVIAN NEEDS TO BE A C00L MOUSE YO |
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;; i've kinda missed this place to be honest, sorry for disappearing please write more :D to be so young youre very talented |
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thank you haru that means so much i might make a new fan-fic or continue this one, i dunno and its no problem you disappeared haha |
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this is so old of a thread but heres something i just made ![]() even though the wise old mouse doesnt look like this i like it |
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Erikadeedee a dit : wow that looks reeeaallly good! |
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thanks!!! e: i just did the effects tho, i hope you dont think i drew it ha |