Wingedmousie a dit :

lol so adding shox in this

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Part 2------Anna rubbed her paw over her face is disbelief. "Maybe we are chosen ones....of something?" Kimi assumed. "N-no.... it can't be... i'm just a regular mouse..... how could this be?" Kimi knew she was right. We are all just every day mice suffering under Tigrounette's wrath, how could we unite? " What does this mean..? Like, why do we unite?" Anna interupted. " Who knows, lets just find the others." Kimi snapped. " How? There are hundreds of thousands of mice in Vanillavile. Surely this note of paper doesn't count on us to find them on our own..?" "Lets check our pockets." Kimi checked her natural pockets and found nothing but the endless confetti. " Anyways, what are we going to do if we unite? Throw a party then let Tig kill us all?" said Anna. " I don't know", Kimi admitted "but lets just ask a few people." Anna and Kimi walked down the barren road under the dying light of the sky. Anna walked up to a tall, ugly mouse. " Hi, check your pockets and see if you have a mysterious note."
The strange mouse looked at her for a few seconds, then snorted, spit at Anna's paws and slowly went back to its stroll. Kimi smacked her foot on the back of his head when he wasn't looking and pinned him down. "CHECK YOUR DAMN POCKETS, AND GET SOME PLASTIC SURGERY." The mouse turned his head a little as he she sunk her mouse nails into his spine. He checked his pockets with his shaky hands and only pulled out confetti. Kimi pulled her hands away and he fleed in a matter of seconds, crying. " Um... well. Then." Anna awkwardly responded. They asked a few more people. None had the note. Kimi was growing extremely frustrated. She got so angered she stomped up to a brown mouse and screamed in her face, " CHECK YOUR GODDAMN POCKETS!!!!!!!" She huffed madly after the sentence and watched the brown mouse shrivel up like aluminuim foil, crying. Anna elbowed her hard in the rib, and Kimi then realized what she done. Anna calmly told her to check her pockets, and everything will be ok. The shaky mouse slowly pushed her hands in her pockets and pulled out a note."T-this wa-asn't in here be-ff-ore... is this a si-ick magic trick? I'm call-ling the police!" The mouse staggered between breathing sobs. "Don't! We all got this note. It just popped up in our pockets. What is your name?" Anna asked. "Lucy....."
the mouse hissed while reading the note. Suddenly the mean shrivel on her face dissapeared and it looks like it all made sense to her now. " So we are supposed to meet like this...? I'm confused."
Kimi smiled. "Only Tig knows........"

Shardpixel a dit :

Nice so far, I really mean it.
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(YESSSSSSSSSSS)

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"CHECK YOUR DAMN POCKETS, AND GET SOME PLASTIC SURGERY."

Wingedmousie a dit :

17, 18, basically same crap lol

Ejaffa a dit :

joihfoisajdfofgro

No one cares about de age difference, I was supposed to change the age to 23 instead tho

Mandymuis a dit :

I love the story! Only by some parts of the story, I didn't know who was saying it.

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The three mice walked across Vanillavile in the dark. Kimi pulled out a cheese sandwhich in a baggy from her pocket in great hunger. Lucy pulled out some pretzels and carrots, imitating Kimi. Anna shoved her hands in her pockets and pulled out confetti, grumbling. Kimi ripped her sandwhich in half and gave it to Anna without speaking, and Lucy opened her baggy of pretzels to give to Anna. Anna gave cuffed her hands and put the sandwhich slice in her mouth and mumbled a thanks. They walked to the edges of Vanillaville, famished. They stopped at a forest/park hiking area at a bench and sat down to eat in the dark. It was 1:09 am, and everyone looked exhausted from the traveling looking for other mice with the note, failing. " Alright, lets eat, then sleep somewhere in this park." Lucy announced. " Good idea." Kimi replied. " Is that enough food, Anna?" Kimi asked concerningly. " I'm fine, thanks" Anna replied. Anna bit into the grilled cheese and widened her eyes. "This is great!" Anna shouted. " Shhhhh!!!!" Kimi snapped, " We don't know who or what is out here. Especially when Vanillaville is in this condition." Lucy rolled her eyes and quietly ripped out her bag of carrots, and dug in. Then, Kimi noticed something. " Hey, guys. Did you notice this forest and park isn't destroyed?" Anna and Lucy looked around and realized she was right. " Wow, I was so tired I didn't even notice." Anna replied. "Well, lets find somewhere to sleep." She finished. " "Lets look around." Anna thought out loud. " Certainly we're not sleeping in that creepy forest." Lucy protested. "Gross, of course not. Poor little Lucy." Anna sneered. Lucy wrinkled her nose and the three mice decided they would sleep under a bench. " We COULD sleep in the parking lot." Kimi wondered. "But then the lights might reveal us." Anna pointed out. "That picnic table we ate on doesn't seem to have gum on it, and it has plenty of grass under it, making it not dirty." Lucy added. "Alright.." Kimi agreed.
They settled under the picnic table. " I have a white fashion cape, but we could use it to sleep on for the night. Its fairly big, we could all sleep on it." Lucy sparked. She dug in her pockets to pull out a huge brown cloth, so massive she wondered how it fit in there. " Big enough we could even roll ourselves around in it like a cocoon, so we're warm"
Lucy added. Kimi shook her head, she didn't like the thought of being so close to mice she barely knows. " Fine.. be cold!" Lucy snapped. " Hmm, one mouse can be in the middle, and two mice can be on the sides, and wrap themselves around, while one volunteers to be in the middle-" Kimi said, " I volunteer." Anna cut Kimi. " You sure, you don't have much clothi-" Kimi asked worringly "Yes." Anna grumbled, cutting again. " I have thick fur." She fussed.
The three mice worked about 3 minutes to lay the blanket on the ground. Anna plopped in the middle and curled into a ball as the two other mice layed on their backed and wrapped themselves with the cape. Morning soon came, and Kimi woke up at 10:00 am. The rubbed her eyes to a very messy blanket, but she didnt care. kimi seemed to have her limbs on parts of the bare ground, but she didnt care. Kimi wiped grass stains off her arm and leg, which are the parts that were most likely not on the blanket. She crawled from the bench to stretch, and woke up Lucy and Anna.
" Good morning." Kimi greeted. " Hey." Anna replied. Anna crouched by a curb to sink mud on her paw. Lucy picked up the blanket and noticed grass stains on the white cape, and pouted a bit, but stayed silent and folded it to put it back in her natural mouse pocket. " Lets explore the forest a little." Kimi broke the silence. " Okay. Sounds about right for the morning." Anna agreed. The mice went out into the forest, then Kimi stopped, and thought again. "Why isn't this forest destroyed?" Kimi stopped. The other two stopped and thought about it too, but were interupted by a tapping noise, and turned around to see a mouse hitting a knife against a tree trunk.

Wingedmousie a dit :

wait if fox is 18 and shard is 27...

wtf

Shardpixel a dit :

SHHHH I THOUGHT OF THAT A WHILE AGO AND TRIED HIDING IT e3e

Dammit people noticed.

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But it's a good fanfic and I like it so far.

Wingedmousie a dit :

chapter 3
woah i had WAY too much fun with this. Okay, to sum this up, this is the forest and bench and parking lot:
click it

Micefamilies a dit :

that park tho
totally different than what i imagined

Wingedmousie a dit :

lel was a park i went to in 2009 in montana