I'm waiting for Chapter 3...
I hope she comes on and writes it soon.

Appleloom a dit :

I'm waiting for Chapter 2...
I hope she comes on and writes it soon.

Don't you mean chapter 3?

Smalltoes a dit :

Don't you mean chapter 3?

Woops yeah Chapter 3.

is it too late to make a character? the fanfic sounds interesting.

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

is it too late to make a character? the fanfic sounds interesting.

The slots are all taken D:

Appleloom a dit :

The slots are all taken D:

No, 2 slots are remaining now..

Oops, forgot to update the OP.

Anniebuscus a dit :

No, 2 slots are remaining now..

Oops, forgot to update the OP.

I left a character ref, so I thought I took a slot..
Well, me and Small thought we took the last slots.
On the 1st page

Anniebuscus a dit :

No, 2 slots are remaining now..

Oops, forgot to update the OP.

Ah, okay, I'll edit my post with the filled form.

Chapter 3

Please, please, please, I wish I wasn't caught by Sananie!
She FINALLY saw me writing my diary. She was like this: "Ohmygosh, Sieling, you're a sore noob and a loser! How about go write your silly diary somewhere else? Your green jumper isn't cool for my lipgloss taste. I'm gonna barf!!" HOW can't a color look cool with a taste?! These are 2 different things! Geez!
But, at least I got more friends!
So we met in lunch once again in table number 9. One looked pretty creepy. No wonder she creeps behind and listens to other's conversations. "The name's Zeena." The other one hides her face, but I'm the only one who had saw what hides behind the mask of Foxie J. And I have "barely friends". One is rich and nice, a know-it-all. "Hi, I'm Appie Wooz, but you can just call me Appie." The other one looked kind of like she came from a carnival. But I don't judge students by their fashion style. Unlike Sananie! That girl can't shut up!!
By the way, her name is Snowy.
While we were eating lunch, Zeena said: "I've heard that Sananie is going to participate in an art contest. I've seen her fashion drawings. Honestly, she draws AWESOME clothes. But, I saw yours too, Sieling. You're more talented than Sananie!"
I can't believe she said that! Thanks to her, I have no longer low self-esteem, when it comes to judge drawings of mine.
Angel heard us and scoffed. "Geez. I bet your fashion drawings are SEXIER than Sieling's, Sannie."
Foxie J was about to facepaw. "By the way, I saw your drawings too. They are AWESOME!"
So, my friends made me participate in the art contest, which happens after 2 weeks. The prize is 1000 cheese! SWEET!
I can make a new tribe, more like 2 with 1000 cheese!
I would DEFINETLY kick out all the PPA (popular, pro and awesome) students and Sananie.

Anniebuscus a dit :

Chapter 3

Please, please, please, I wish I wasn't caught by Sananie!
She FINALLY saw me writing my diary. She was like this: "Ohmygosh, Sieling, you're a sore noob and a loser! How about go write your silly diary somewhere else? Your green jumper isn't cool for my lipgloss taste. I'm gonna barf!!" HOW can't a color look cool with a taste?! These are 2 different things! Geez!
But, at least I got more friends!
So we met in lunch once again in table number 9. One looked pretty creepy. No wonder she creeps behind and listens to other's conversations. "The name's Zeena." The other one hides her face, but I'm the only one who had saw what hides behing the mask of Foxie J. And I have "barely friends". One is rich and nice, a know-it-all. "Hi, I'm Appie Wooz, but you can just call me Appie." The other one looked kind of like she came from a carnival. But I don't judge students by their fashion style. Unlike Sananie! That girl can't shut up!!

WORK IN PROGRESS

cant wait for chapter 4.


youre doing a good job on this, Annie

And now here comes Chapter 4!

Chapter 4

So I went to fill the form for participating in the art contest. There was a long queue. And guess who was waiting for the form? Yes, it was SANANIE!
Like always, she just talks about being a fashion designer, celebrities might buy her clothes that cost MILLIONS of cheese, blahblahblah....
When I was suppossed to fill the form, Sananie looked at me with her blue eyes with a coldhearted look. I got goosebumps and I remembered what my grandma said:
"You can be scared or win,
It's your choice!"
Now I know what I'll be. A SCARED CHICK! I clucked like a chicken, when I got the form. Sananie laughed at me, like my participation in the contest was the biggest joke. I saw a poster which said that the school library needs helpers. So I actually became a library helper and I DIDN'T participate in the art contest. THANKS TO SANANIE!
After the cheese gathering lesson I heard Sananie and Angel talking about the art contest.
"Tommorow is the last day for signing the form of participation though. See you there, Angel!"
"Sannie, I know you'll win in this contest. Your drawings are so SEXY!"
I can't believe Angel said that! Especially when because of Sananie I didn't participate! Anyways, everyday I go to the library in the 5th lesson and now I was SURPRISED! Why? Because my friends Foxie J and Zeena are helpers too! And we have a lot of fun in the library!

Nice Im loving this story :D
Gee I (Angel) Sound like a Stupidly Popular in no way whatsoever Girl XD
I love these chapters :) Keep up the good work!

awesome

*makes behind-the-chapter scenes*

Zeena: "Sananie is a *beep* to me."
Foxie J: "I hear ya!"
Sieling: "I gotta go sign the form of the participation."
And here it goes again, but Sieling hides behind a plant.
Sananie: "BLAHBLAHBLAHBLAH" *signs the form*
*Sieling signs the form after Sananie goes away*

This is actually a sneak peak of the next chapter.

A new character comes soon!

Reference:

Name: Doi
Age: 13
Teacher/student?: Student
If student, relation to the main character or the rival?: Sieling's classmate and crush
Personality: Always says "no" to Sananie the most popular girl, is very friendly and kind, especially to Sieling and her friends. He sometimes gets charmed by Sananie and is in "the dark side" - how Sieling calls it.

Chapter 5

After the 5th lesson, I went to sign the form for participation. There I saw Sananie AGAIN. But this time I hid behind a plant, so she couldn't see me. It's not like that I'm scared of her or I'm spying her. I just don't want to make Sananie think that I made my choice. After signing the form, apparently Sananie hid behind the same plant, so she could SPY ON ME! I can't believe she went so far to spy on me... That girl is SOOO SICK!
In the divine mode lesson, this was the first time I fell in love. With my classmate, which was one of the smartest students in our class. After that lesson, he went to my friends and told something to Zeena and Foxie J. Was he laughing at me? But this was the conversation I heard:

"Hey, who's that new girl over there? Is she your friend?"
"Yup. Her name is Sieling, by the way."
"Yea, Doi. How about go and meet her, she's friendly!"

So Doi went to meet me.
"Hey... Are you Sieling?" he asked.
I stammered: "Y-yes? What do you want from me?" Deep inside I felt surprised, because boys from our class act inadequate, when it comes to talk with new students like me.
"By the way, are you participating in the art contest?"
"Yes. But I think Sananie's fashion drawings will win..."
"Sananie's?! Are you joking? Don't be self-critical! I saw your drawings, they're more awesome than hers! In one of your farts there's more talent than all her body!"
I can't believe Doi said that! It sounded so rude, but very funny! I tried not to laugh. "I got to go to the hard mode lesson. See you there!" So I ran away, but apparently Doi followed me (note that he's my classmate and he has a hard mode lesson too). I saw Zeena and Foxie J. "Hey, did you like Doi, that guy?"
"Yes. He's cu..." I got stopped by.... Sananie.
Zeena scoffed. "Ew. It's her again." And the saga of my hate starts over.....

Chapter 6

Sananie couldn't shut up in the hard mode lesson! Why? Because Angel invited her to her birthday party... She thought that Doi might come with Sananie.
Now, thanks to her, even my ordinary classmates, who aren't my friends, couldn't learn! Ruby and Nannerl tried to tell the teacher that Sananie and Angel can't shut up, but the teacher didn't listen. Snowy and Appie couldn't just concentrate, because we had a HARD MODE TEST! I'll laugh, if Sananie will get an F in that test. Because she only PARTIES, hangs out with ANGEL, and at lunch, she tries to CHARM Doi, so he could join the dark side! That's just stupid!
Luckily, after the test Zeena heard this conversation between Sananie and Doi:

"Will you come with me to Angel's party?"
"No. I have things to do..."
"Pleeease...."
"But.."
"I just hope you won't hang out with Sieling. She's a filthy loser!"

I felt like Sannie would knock me with a metal bar. I even heard her calling me names near MY locker! Thanks to Zeena, now I always know these things:

- How she called me (especially when it comes with talking to Doi)
- Convos with her pals and Doi
- Secretly calling Doi in bad words just because he didn't want to go with her to a party.

By the way, today I got to stay home after school with my annoying little sister Demi! Despite her angel face and pink sport shoes, she's like a BABY TYRANNOSAURUS REX, which uses STEROIDS! Like always, Demi make ME get in trouble...
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Prepare for a new ship - Doiling xD
DOILING IS COMING SOON!

*kind of sad because Link isn't going to appear again in the story * well , the story is getting interesting :D

Ilingirl a dit :

*kind of sad because Link isn't going to appear again in the story * well , the story is getting interesting :D

Link will appear soon along with Doiling though. :D

i dont think i have appeared yet..>_<