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Dusklightfur
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This looks like a fantastic story!
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Kenji approves
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Gacha approves.
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Shardu where are you
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Approves what? *^*
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Chapter 1



ABC“Ah, great. Someone’s finally awake here,” a voice mumbled in a half-hearted tone, “I was beginning to think I’d be all alone on this ride.”
ABCThe dazed mouse blinked a few times, then carefully squinted to the other end of the cage, seeing a mouse sitting straight up. He looked at her for a brief moment before answering, “Uh huh. Any idea where we are?”
ABC“You could say we were ‘drafted’ to come here for the better good, but I’d bet a better word would be kidnapped.” The mouse shifted awkwardly and then stood up, straightening out her shoulder-cut purple hair and adjusting the panda hat that matched the purple strands. She walked over to the still mouse and held out her paw. “Rose. And you are?”
ABCHe could see all of her features now. The hair, the hat, and the shining black earrings that fit with the charcoal color of a dead rose she held in her mouth. Her fur was white with brown splotches here and there, one very noticeable on her snout. Looking down now at her paw, he hesitantly shook it. “I’m Zipp. So where have we been ‘drafted’ to?” he asked, still puzzled by such a strange situation this all was.
ABCShe sighed in a pestered tone, though it didn’t seem to be directed towards Zipp. “Bootcamp.”
ABCIt felt like a wave of heat fell over Zipp. His mind was clouded with horrific thoughts, and his stomach churned. There was an agonizing silence in the cage, and the rushed beating of his heart rolled like thunder in his ears. He had always heard of the horrible stories from Bootcamp, and how it was beyond his worst fears to live there. He gulped, and then stammered, “B-Bootcamp? Are you sure?”
ABC“I’m sure as I’ll ever be about it. Never realized how often people get taken here—” she paused briefly, looking at the unconscious mice around them and letting out another sigh. “Never knew I’d be one of them.”
ABCZipp looked at the other mice, limp and bruised. It was awful looking at them all. 14-year-old girls and boys had been ripped from their families. And what about his sisters? What about his parents? Did they know he was taken here? He rubbed his burning face to wipe off any stray tears from his eyes, and swallowed. “I guess we gotta tough it out here,” he murmured solemnly. He turned to Rose, whose face was grim.
ABC“For the rest of our lives.”

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Ejaffa
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I want your writing skills
Shardpixel
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ejaffa a dit :
I want your writing skills

Take 'em.

*Throws a block of skills at you*
Ejaffa
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shardpixel a dit :
ejaffa a dit :
I want your writing skills

Take 'em.

*Throws a block of skills at you*

Now I can write like senpai
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ejaffa a dit :
shardpixel a dit :
ejaffa a dit :
I want your writing skills

Take 'em.

*Throws a block of skills at you*

Now I can write like senpai

-Sings pewdiepie's senpai suck my ___ song-
Shardpixel
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ejaffa a dit :
shardpixel a dit :
ejaffa a dit :
I want your writing skills

Take 'em.

*Throws a block of skills at you*

Now I can write like senpai

Yes

have fun


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ejaffa a dit :
I want your writing skills

Take 'em.

*Throws a block of skills at you*

Now I can write like senpai

-Sings pewdiepie's senpai suck my ___ song-

Please no
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beaut chapter pls
Corduroy
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Dem writing skillz bro.
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Reference: http://img1.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire4/826817bcda6466a94acbda374e99178f1411068887_full.png not a dumb blonde btw >:I
Name: Lilyith
Age: 13
Personality: talkative,funny,pretty annoying if you think about it
Brief back story: Lily was always a person that talked in chat,but sometimes when she was tired,she wodnt. She would just spam until she got silenced. Anyways,shes kind of caring if you become her freind.never understanded love.[size=7]blah blah blah The girl was first noob,then slowly went to pretty decent.Has about 5 bootcamps so far,but painfully getting more [size=8]oh god
[size=4]im bad a backstories wubwub

Rank: bootcamper [Newcomer or Bootcamper]

aWe yIsS
Queenlordess
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Bruhhhhh :p

Reference: http://i.imgur.com/ooFeuSe.png
Name: Roselina
Age: 24
Personality: Snob, crazy, likes a very hard challenge, bossy, fast, a dictator that likes to see everyone in misery, hardcore trainer, rude,
sometimes had a good side to give good tips to new comers. She is a heartbroken, fearless lady.

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Brief back story: Was a loving, caring, kind and helpful beautiful girl when she was 15. At the age of 19 she was to be engaged with a handsome man, but he had a very mischeivious plan. 8 weeks later, the wedding was held in a utility. It was soon the "I do, I dont" part. Before she could speak to the guy, he shouted "I DONT YOU FREAKISHLY UGLY BEAST!". She cried as her heart broke and her positive attitudes became negative. Thats when she started insulting, bullying, badmouthing some mice of the room 801. Many of them reported her so she ran away into the walls of bootcamp, where she belongs the most. Suddenly, her bright hair and bright accessories turned all into black and grey. She spends most time in her own bootcamp alone. As soon as she finds out, she was the oldest of all the bootcampers (Idk).
Rank: Bootcamper


*Was hoping this character get accepted even though she was mean*

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Shardpixel
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Chapter 2



ABC Zipp reached into the folds of his empty scarf and sighed. “You wouldn’t have a match by any chance, would you?”
ABC Rose glanced over to Zipp’s pipe. “I’m sixteen. I don’t smoke.”
ABC He let out another frustrated breath and told her, “I’m only a year older than you. You’re acting like you want to be twelve again!” He fiddled around with the pipe in his hand and he went back to looking at the other victims, who were being brought to Bootcamp against their will and didn’t even know it yet.
ABC Rose was sitting in front of a mouse that looked younger than fourteen. Her head drooped down a bit in a sadness that she could not rid herself of. “Maybe I do want to be twelve again. They say fourteen is the age you are eligible to come here,” she took a breath of silence, still staring at the innocent mouse that breathed calmly in her sleep, “yet maybe it wouldn’t make a difference anymore. Maybe they aren’t playing by the rules of age. This girl looks eleven, maybe twelve at the most. This isn’t right, nothing is.”
ABC She slowly stood up, feeling a bit light-headed now. They must’ve been knocked out without food or water for a while now. It only made her feel worse, and she glared at Zipp with no words.
ABC “Something wrong?” he asked her curiously, then mentally slapping himself for asking such a dumb question. “Something besides this whole thing?”
ABC She didn’t answer. She was too frustrated. Rose walked over to a still mouse, whose bright white hair shone bright in the cage, unlike her dark fur. She stood there, staring at this black-colored child, then snarled in such rage. “I don’t care about anything anymore!” she growled as she kicked the mouse nearly halfway across the large cage.
ABC Zipp ran over to Rose and grabbed her by the arm. “Stop! What do you think you’re doing?”
ABC “Oh, please! I’m sure they’d prefer anything over being stuck here for their whole lives!”
ABC Angered by her sudden outburst, he pushed her aside and hopped over to the now awake and coughing mouse.
ABC “Ow, wh- what was that for?” she whispered silently, her arm reaching for her aching side.
ABC Zipp tried to sit her up, though it took some patience. “I’m sorry. Rose, she’s dealing with a bit of frustration here. Are you okay?”
ABC She coughed a few more times as she glanced over to Rose, who was facing away and pouting cross-armed at the other end of the cage. “Yeah, I think so. Just give me some time,” she told Zipp, her voice growing a bit clearer, yet still very quiet from a hidden shyness. “Who are you?”
ABC “Zipp.”
ABC “Oh, okay,” she groaned at the aching pain in her side. “Just one more question. Where are we?”
ABC He tried to force an encouraging smile, but had no will to do so. His horrible visions of their destination returned as he softly said, “Bootcamp.”
ABC The little sparkles of a sense of security that shone faintly in her eyes disappeared altogether. Shaking from such mental and physical pain, she collapsed back onto the ground.
ABC Zipp couldn’t help but feel guilty for having to tell her so soon.

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looks like somebody isn't dealing with the situation right

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Shardpixel
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satash a dit :
looks like somebody isn't dealing with the situation right

I know right

Rose needs a good spank >:c


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Reference: http://img1.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire4/826817bcda6466a94acbda374e99178f1411068887_full.png not a dumb blonde btw >:I
Name: Lilyith
Age: 13
Personality: talkative,funny,pretty annoying if you think about it
Brief back story: Lily was always a person that talked in chat,but sometimes when she was tired,she wodnt. She would just spam until she got silenced. Anyways,shes kind of caring if you become her freind.never understanded love.[size=7]blah blah blah The girl was first noob,then slowly went to pretty decent.Has about 5 bootcamps so far,but painfully getting more [size=8]oh god
[size=4]im bad a backstories wubwub

Rank: bootcamper [Newcomer or Bootcamper]

aWe yIsS

queenlordess a dit :
Bruhhhhh :p

Reference: http://i.imgur.com/ooFeuSe.png
Name: Roselina
Age: 24
Personality: Snob, crazy, likes a very hard challenge, bossy, fast, a dictator that likes to see everyone in misery, hardcore trainer, rude,
sometimes had a good side to give good tips to new comers. She is a heartbroken, fearless lady.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Brief back story: Was a loving, caring, kind and helpful beautiful girl when she was 15. At the age of 19 she was to be engaged with a handsome man, but he had a very mischeivious plan. 8 weeks later, the wedding was held in a utility. It was soon the "I do, I dont" part. Before she could speak to the guy, he shouted "I DONT YOU FREAKISHLY UGLY BEAST!". She cried as her heart broke and her positive attitudes became negative. Thats when she started insulting, bullying, badmouthing some mice of the room 801. Many of them reported her so she ran away into the walls of bootcamp, where she belongs the most. Suddenly, her bright hair and bright accessories turned all into black and grey. She spends most time in her own bootcamp alone. As soon as she finds out, she was the oldest of all the bootcampers (Idk).
Rank: Bootcamper


*Was hoping this character get accepted even though she was mean*

Sorry guys, I forgot to mention that character slots were closed :c
Vullitic
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iS okiE bbU
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