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[ Fanfiction ] Neon Lights ! (WARNING BRIGHT COLOURS)
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So hyped for this :D
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  • hehe
  • Chapter Red
your prayers have be answered

also

Ps:
I tried

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%201&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=FF0000


Copycat's heavy hood pounded against her teal hair, and finally as she looked up, a black wall stood affront of her. She looked to see if she could go past it, guessing it was a simple black building. Although, it was like a space cut the world, and she slowly went up to it, her bagged eyes showing little emotion as she heaved a sigh, her entire chest flopped down as she exhaled. she lifted her brown paw into the void, and a grey 2D outline showed. She threw a puzzled look as she swung her arm back, falling backwards as she stared into the cold place. More outlines swam against the gasoline sky. And finally, Copycat decided to take her one-millionth risk.
As she stepped into the abyss, her thick chipmunk fur frosted into gray crystals, and soon outlined into 2D art. Her voice echoed as she piped out a squeak. "H-hello!?" She cringed at her scared voice, and the wavered rainbow of mice flew back at her, curved lines showed they were happy to know they had more mice coming.
"Who are you?" One of the mice echoed, they were a thin indigo lining. The mouse had a soft chirping voice gave them a impression of pure positive vibes.
"I'm C-Copycat." Copycat hesitated, her grey lines vibrating.
"Oh! I'm Lily." The indigo mouse smiled.
The other mice held back, besides a blue one, they stepped next to Lily. Their proud smile showed they were a happy mouse.
"I'm Lotus." She giggled. "Funny how me and Lily have flower names, huh?" She smiled.
The other two mice slowly introduced themselves, one Wind, the other Cipher.
After a while, Wind spoke up. "Why're you grey anyways? Are you just so devoid of personality you can't even have a colour?" And Copycat just glared. "Why are you yellow anyways? Are you just so bright and cheery, you can't even have a dark colour?" She copied back, flicking her grey tail as she jumped into a sitting position.
Wind glared back. "I guess you do live up to your name Copy-" "Copycat." Copycat finished, proud of her name she had given herself.
Cipher stared ahead, his lime glow powdered against the black waves that they were in. "did you guys notice the green lines...they have been throbbing into colour for a while now..." He quietly remarked, and everyone looked down at their lined paws. "There is... green lining..." Copycat noticed aloud, stumbling back. "Of course there is idiot," Wind barked at her, her yellow bright.

"How do we leave?" Lily tilted her head. "I'm not saying I don't like any of you, it's just... I don't like this place.." She smiled positively. "Yeah, I'm wondering..." Lotus added. "I'll go check." Cipher mumbled and buzzed away.
"I'm gonna go torwards the border... where is the border?" Wind sighed impatiently. "No clue..." Lotus shrugged. "Yeah, I have no clue either." Copycat shrugged along as well. "Well, I'll let you ponder to yourselves, I'm going to go find the end of this misery." Wind prodded off, leaving only Lily, Lotus, and Copycat.
"So uh... I guess we need to figure this out." Lotus looked up into the black sky. "I guess each colour represents a personality." She obviously stated. "Besides that... I guess our lines vibrating means nervousness.." She was cut off by Lily. "And our colours brightening mean our personality is anticipating." She smiled.
Copycat nodded. "And our lines blurring is us uh..." She quickly realized. "It means we are bored or like... thinking." She supposed.

"Nothing! No border, no nothing!" Wind deceivingly came back. "All I can say is we're stuck here, and dead." She smirked under her breath, then drew her head up again for her to not look suspicious.
Copycat flicked her head out of her face so she could see. "Hey, look in front of us." She blandly worded.
"What the..." Cipher looked up, he seemed to be doing something with the green lines.
"White mice!?" Lily inhaled deeply, the black void seemed to have thick air.
Soon, white outlines of mice traveled to the 5 mice, they all had blankets and wings.
"They're deceased mice?" Lotus assumed, and most of the living mice agreed with soft murmurs.
"They seem to be heading somewhere." Copycat noticed, although, she copied Cipher's whisper.
"Should we follow them?" Wind sighed, she had been complaining of being bored for the remaining time they had in the abyss.
"I suppose." Cipher raised his voice, not wanting Copycat to copy him no more.
"Well lets go then!" Lily let out a fresh smile, and pounded after them, her fluffy tail following after her.

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Woo, loved it! \o/ I just realized Blue and I have a flower name in this story xD
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bublamorce a dit :
I will add a character soon,when i have a name for him http://img.atelier801.com/04a4f17c.png

Same -x-

except i have nothing for my character yet...
It's alright, I have everyone's characters tho :o

E: I have a character !
I also won't be able to write on Thursday like I planned (I have the rest of my root canal), should I write tomorrow or Friday?

E2:

Copycat: Grey

Lily: Indigo

Lotus: Blue (not because of Bluecrest, just cause it fits hehe)

Wind: Yellow

Cipher: Yellow Green

I'm sorry if you didn't get your desired colour... I just thought these fit better :)
Although, if you do have a problem with it, just let me know ;o

why did i not read the yellow XDD Ty! that sounds just like her!
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windknives a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
bublamorce a dit :
I will add a character soon,when i have a name for him http://img.atelier801.com/04a4f17c.png

Same -x-

except i have nothing for my character yet...
It's alright, I have everyone's characters tho :o

E: I have a character !
I also won't be able to write on Thursday like I planned (I have the rest of my root canal), should I write tomorrow or Friday?

E2:

Copycat: Grey

Lily: Indigo

Lotus: Blue (not because of Bluecrest, just cause it fits hehe)

Wind: Yellow

Cipher: Yellow Green

I'm sorry if you didn't get your desired colour... I just thought these fit better :)
Although, if you do have a problem with it, just let me know ;o

why did i not read the yellow XDD Ty! that sounds just like her!

Yeah, I thought an angry personality wouldn't match as well heh.

Bipolar personalities can switch from any colour now !

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eeveewings a dit :
Basgetti a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
Basgetti a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
Oo ! I'm so glad this got entries !
I will be writing soon enough, maybe later in this week, or a bit after, I need some rest after many months of school, heh.

Anyway, I don't mind anyone sneakily posting forms without informing me here, I'll check anyway !

Thank you so much, guys ! It's means a lot, I have a new crowd to watch me in my journey of writing :o

If you want you can put the answers in the OP, yeah
along with the picture of Cipher owo
E//
I'm so hyped for this story omg

Will do ^^

is it bad that i'm hyped for my own story o.o

Nope! I've been there before, haha.
...
alot.

good to know i'm not alone hehe

still sad that the tfm generator wont fucking work

Ikr
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Basgetti a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
Basgetti a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
Basgetti a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
Oo ! I'm so glad this got entries !
I will be writing soon enough, maybe later in this week, or a bit after, I need some rest after many months of school, heh.

Anyway, I don't mind anyone sneakily posting forms without informing me here, I'll check anyway !

Thank you so much, guys ! It's means a lot, I have a new crowd to watch me in my journey of writing :o

If you want you can put the answers in the OP, yeah
along with the picture of Cipher owo
E//
I'm so hyped for this story omg

Will do ^^

is it bad that i'm hyped for my own story o.o

Nope! I've been there before, haha.
...
alot.

good to know i'm not alone hehe

still sad that the tfm generator wont fucking work

Ikr

^^
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O mai gerudd
I loafed dat Chapturr
(Bluecrest is offically on crack right now)

Oh by the way, if you don't mind, I'm gonna add something about Lotus.
Instead of eating cheese, Lotus prefers chicken.

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bluecrest a dit :

O mai gerudd
I loafed dat Chapturr
(Bluecrest is offically on crack right now)

Oh by the way, if you don't mind, I'm gonna add something about Lotus.
Instead of eating cheese, Lotus prefers chicken.


i know why too hehe
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eeveewings a dit :
[#hehe]your prayers have be answered

also

Ps:
I tried[/#hehe]
[# Chapter Red]

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%201&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=FF0000


Copycat's heavy hood pounded against her teal hair, and finally as she looked up, a black wall stood affront of her. She looked to see if she could go past it, guessing it was a simple black building. Although, it was like a space cut the world, and she slowly went up to it, her bagged eyes showing little emotion as she heaved a sigh, her entire chest flopped down as she exhaled. she lifted her brown paw into the void, and a grey 2D outline showed. She threw a puzzled look as she swung her arm back, falling backwards as she stared into the cold place. More outlines swam against the gasoline sky. And finally, Copycat decided to take her one-millionth risk.
As she stepped into the abyss, her thick chipmunk fur frosted into gray crystals, and soon outlined into 2D art. Her voice echoed as she piped out a squeak. "H-hello!?" She cringed at her scared voice, and the wavered rainbow of mice flew back at her, curved lines showed they were happy to know they had more mice coming.
"Who are you?" One of the mice echoed, they were a thin indigo lining. The mouse had a soft chirping voice gave them a impression of pure positive vibes.
"I'm C-Copycat." Copycat hesitated, her grey lines vibrating.
"Oh! I'm Lily." The indigo mouse smiled.
The other mice held back, besides a blue one, they stepped next to Lily. Their proud smile showed they were a happy mouse.
"I'm Lotus." She giggled. "Funny how me and Lily have flower names, huh?" She smiled.
The other two mice slowly introduced themselves, one Wind, the other Cipher.
After a while, Wind spoke up. "Why're you grey anyways? Are you just so devoid of personality you can't even have a colour?" And Copycat just glared. "Why are you yellow anyways? Are you just so bright and cheery, you can't even have a dark colour?" She copied back, flicking her grey tail as she jumped into a sitting position.
Wind glared back. "I guess you do live up to your name Copy-" "Copycat." Copycat finished, proud of her name she had given herself.
Cipher stared ahead, his lime glow powdered against the black waves that they were in. "did you guys notice the green lines...they have been throbbing into colour for a while now..." He quietly remarked, and everyone looked down at their lined paws. "There is... green lining..." Copycat noticed aloud, stumbling back. "Of course there is idiot," Wind barked at her, her yellow bright.

"How do we leave?" Lily tilted her head. "I'm not saying I don't like any of you, it's just... I don't like this place.." She smiled positively. "Yeah, I'm wondering..." Lotus added. "I'll go check." Cipher mumbled and buzzed away.
"I'm gonna go torwards the border... where is the border?" Wind sighed impatiently. "No clue..." Lotus shrugged. "Yeah, I have no clue either." Copycat shrugged along as well. "Well, I'll let you ponder to yourselves, I'm going to go find the end of this misery." Wind prodded off, leaving only Lily, Lotus, and Copycat.
"So uh... I guess we need to figure this out." Lotus looked up into the black sky. "I guess each colour represents a personality." She obviously stated. "Besides that... I guess our lines vibrating means nervousness.." She was cut off by Lily. "And our colours brightening mean our personality is anticipating." She smiled.
Copycat nodded. "And our lines blurring is us uh..." She quickly realized. "It means we are bored or like... thinking." She supposed.

"Nothing! No border, no nothing!" Wind deceivingly came back. "All I can say is we're stuck here, and dead." She smirked under her breath, then drew her head up again for her to not look suspicious.
Copycat flicked her head out of her face so she could see. "Hey, look in front of us." She blandly worded.
"What the..." Cipher looked up, he seemed to be doing something with the green lines.
"White mice!?" Lily inhaled deeply, the black void seemed to have thick air.
Soon, white outlines of mice traveled to the 5 mice, they all had blankets and wings.
"They're deceased mice?" Lotus assumed, and most of the living mice agreed with soft murmurs.
"They seem to be heading somewhere." Copycat noticed, although, she copied Cipher's whisper.
"Should we follow them?" Wind sighed, she had been complaining of being bored for the remaining time they had in the abyss.
"I suppose." Cipher raised his voice, not wanting Copycat to copy him no more.
"Well lets go then!" Lily let out a fresh smile, and pounded after them, her fluffy tail following after her.

[/# Chapter Red]

HEHE I LOVE MY EXPRESSION <333

Also when I was being suspicious I expected to grab my knife XD But it doesn't matter
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windknives a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
[#hehe]your prayers have be answered

also

Ps:
I tried[/#hehe]
[# Chapter Red]

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%201&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=FF0000


Copycat's heavy hood pounded against her teal hair, and finally as she looked up, a black wall stood affront of her. She looked to see if she could go past it, guessing it was a simple black building. Although, it was like a space cut the world, and she slowly went up to it, her bagged eyes showing little emotion as she heaved a sigh, her entire chest flopped down as she exhaled. she lifted her brown paw into the void, and a grey 2D outline showed. She threw a puzzled look as she swung her arm back, falling backwards as she stared into the cold place. More outlines swam against the gasoline sky. And finally, Copycat decided to take her one-millionth risk.
As she stepped into the abyss, her thick chipmunk fur frosted into gray crystals, and soon outlined into 2D art. Her voice echoed as she piped out a squeak. "H-hello!?" She cringed at her scared voice, and the wavered rainbow of mice flew back at her, curved lines showed they were happy to know they had more mice coming.
"Who are you?" One of the mice echoed, they were a thin indigo lining. The mouse had a soft chirping voice gave them a impression of pure positive vibes.
"I'm C-Copycat." Copycat hesitated, her grey lines vibrating.
"Oh! I'm Lily." The indigo mouse smiled.
The other mice held back, besides a blue one, they stepped next to Lily. Their proud smile showed they were a happy mouse.
"I'm Lotus." She giggled. "Funny how me and Lily have flower names, huh?" She smiled.
The other two mice slowly introduced themselves, one Wind, the other Cipher.
After a while, Wind spoke up. "Why're you grey anyways? Are you just so devoid of personality you can't even have a colour?" And Copycat just glared. "Why are you yellow anyways? Are you just so bright and cheery, you can't even have a dark colour?" She copied back, flicking her grey tail as she jumped into a sitting position.
Wind glared back. "I guess you do live up to your name Copy-" "Copycat." Copycat finished, proud of her name she had given herself.
Cipher stared ahead, his lime glow powdered against the black waves that they were in. "did you guys notice the green lines...they have been throbbing into colour for a while now..." He quietly remarked, and everyone looked down at their lined paws. "There is... green lining..." Copycat noticed aloud, stumbling back. "Of course there is idiot," Wind barked at her, her yellow bright.

"How do we leave?" Lily tilted her head. "I'm not saying I don't like any of you, it's just... I don't like this place.." She smiled positively. "Yeah, I'm wondering..." Lotus added. "I'll go check." Cipher mumbled and buzzed away.
"I'm gonna go torwards the border... where is the border?" Wind sighed impatiently. "No clue..." Lotus shrugged. "Yeah, I have no clue either." Copycat shrugged along as well. "Well, I'll let you ponder to yourselves, I'm going to go find the end of this misery." Wind prodded off, leaving only Lily, Lotus, and Copycat.
"So uh... I guess we need to figure this out." Lotus looked up into the black sky. "I guess each colour represents a personality." She obviously stated. "Besides that... I guess our lines vibrating means nervousness.." She was cut off by Lily. "And our colours brightening mean our personality is anticipating." She smiled.
Copycat nodded. "And our lines blurring is us uh..." She quickly realized. "It means we are bored or like... thinking." She supposed.

"Nothing! No border, no nothing!" Wind deceivingly came back. "All I can say is we're stuck here, and dead." She smirked under her breath, then drew her head up again for her to not look suspicious.
Copycat flicked her head out of her face so she could see. "Hey, look in front of us." She blandly worded.
"What the..." Cipher looked up, he seemed to be doing something with the green lines.
"White mice!?" Lily inhaled deeply, the black void seemed to have thick air.
Soon, white outlines of mice traveled to the 5 mice, they all had blankets and wings.
"They're deceased mice?" Lotus assumed, and most of the living mice agreed with soft murmurs.
"They seem to be heading somewhere." Copycat noticed, although, she copied Cipher's whisper.
"Should we follow them?" Wind sighed, she had been complaining of being bored for the remaining time they had in the abyss.
"I suppose." Cipher raised his voice, not wanting Copycat to copy him no more.
"Well lets go then!" Lily let out a fresh smile, and pounded after them, her fluffy tail following after her.

[/# Chapter Red]

HEHE I LOVE MY EXPRESSION <333

Also when I was being suspicious I expected to grab my knife XD But it doesn't matter

i always thought she just carried her knife like no big deal tbh

i mean
irl i would freak the fck out but y'know?
TFM LIFE IS NORMAL
(plus, a mouse cant physically die in the TFM world, only this little little void!)
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eeveewings a dit :
windknives a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
[#hehe]your prayers have be answered

also

Ps:
I tried[/#hehe]
[# Chapter Red]

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%201&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=FF0000


Copycat's heavy hood pounded against her teal hair, and finally as she looked up, a black wall stood affront of her. She looked to see if she could go past it, guessing it was a simple black building. Although, it was like a space cut the world, and she slowly went up to it, her bagged eyes showing little emotion as she heaved a sigh, her entire chest flopped down as she exhaled. she lifted her brown paw into the void, and a grey 2D outline showed. She threw a puzzled look as she swung her arm back, falling backwards as she stared into the cold place. More outlines swam against the gasoline sky. And finally, Copycat decided to take her one-millionth risk.
As she stepped into the abyss, her thick chipmunk fur frosted into gray crystals, and soon outlined into 2D art. Her voice echoed as she piped out a squeak. "H-hello!?" She cringed at her scared voice, and the wavered rainbow of mice flew back at her, curved lines showed they were happy to know they had more mice coming.
"Who are you?" One of the mice echoed, they were a thin indigo lining. The mouse had a soft chirping voice gave them a impression of pure positive vibes.
"I'm C-Copycat." Copycat hesitated, her grey lines vibrating.
"Oh! I'm Lily." The indigo mouse smiled.
The other mice held back, besides a blue one, they stepped next to Lily. Their proud smile showed they were a happy mouse.
"I'm Lotus." She giggled. "Funny how me and Lily have flower names, huh?" She smiled.
The other two mice slowly introduced themselves, one Wind, the other Cipher.
After a while, Wind spoke up. "Why're you grey anyways? Are you just so devoid of personality you can't even have a colour?" And Copycat just glared. "Why are you yellow anyways? Are you just so bright and cheery, you can't even have a dark colour?" She copied back, flicking her grey tail as she jumped into a sitting position.
Wind glared back. "I guess you do live up to your name Copy-" "Copycat." Copycat finished, proud of her name she had given herself.
Cipher stared ahead, his lime glow powdered against the black waves that they were in. "did you guys notice the green lines...they have been throbbing into colour for a while now..." He quietly remarked, and everyone looked down at their lined paws. "There is... green lining..." Copycat noticed aloud, stumbling back. "Of course there is idiot," Wind barked at her, her yellow bright.

"How do we leave?" Lily tilted her head. "I'm not saying I don't like any of you, it's just... I don't like this place.." She smiled positively. "Yeah, I'm wondering..." Lotus added. "I'll go check." Cipher mumbled and buzzed away.
"I'm gonna go torwards the border... where is the border?" Wind sighed impatiently. "No clue..." Lotus shrugged. "Yeah, I have no clue either." Copycat shrugged along as well. "Well, I'll let you ponder to yourselves, I'm going to go find the end of this misery." Wind prodded off, leaving only Lily, Lotus, and Copycat.
"So uh... I guess we need to figure this out." Lotus looked up into the black sky. "I guess each colour represents a personality." She obviously stated. "Besides that... I guess our lines vibrating means nervousness.." She was cut off by Lily. "And our colours brightening mean our personality is anticipating." She smiled.
Copycat nodded. "And our lines blurring is us uh..." She quickly realized. "It means we are bored or like... thinking." She supposed.

"Nothing! No border, no nothing!" Wind deceivingly came back. "All I can say is we're stuck here, and dead." She smirked under her breath, then drew her head up again for her to not look suspicious.
Copycat flicked her head out of her face so she could see. "Hey, look in front of us." She blandly worded.
"What the..." Cipher looked up, he seemed to be doing something with the green lines.
"White mice!?" Lily inhaled deeply, the black void seemed to have thick air.
Soon, white outlines of mice traveled to the 5 mice, they all had blankets and wings.
"They're deceased mice?" Lotus assumed, and most of the living mice agreed with soft murmurs.
"They seem to be heading somewhere." Copycat noticed, although, she copied Cipher's whisper.
"Should we follow them?" Wind sighed, she had been complaining of being bored for the remaining time they had in the abyss.
"I suppose." Cipher raised his voice, not wanting Copycat to copy him no more.
"Well lets go then!" Lily let out a fresh smile, and pounded after them, her fluffy tail following after her.

[/# Chapter Red]

HEHE I LOVE MY EXPRESSION <333

Also when I was being suspicious I expected to grab my knife XD But it doesn't matter

i always thought she just carried her knife like no big deal tbh

i mean
irl i would freak the fck out but y'know?
TFM LIFE IS NORMAL
(plus, a mouse cant physically die in the TFM world, only this little little void!)

true true but she does like to take it out and threaten people if she either feels threatened or is just mad like crazy
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windknives a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
windknives a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
[#hehe]your prayers have be answered

also

Ps:
I tried[/#hehe]
[# Chapter Red]

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%201&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=FF0000


Copycat's heavy hood pounded against her teal hair, and finally as she looked up, a black wall stood affront of her. She looked to see if she could go past it, guessing it was a simple black building. Although, it was like a space cut the world, and she slowly went up to it, her bagged eyes showing little emotion as she heaved a sigh, her entire chest flopped down as she exhaled. she lifted her brown paw into the void, and a grey 2D outline showed. She threw a puzzled look as she swung her arm back, falling backwards as she stared into the cold place. More outlines swam against the gasoline sky. And finally, Copycat decided to take her one-millionth risk.
As she stepped into the abyss, her thick chipmunk fur frosted into gray crystals, and soon outlined into 2D art. Her voice echoed as she piped out a squeak. "H-hello!?" She cringed at her scared voice, and the wavered rainbow of mice flew back at her, curved lines showed they were happy to know they had more mice coming.
"Who are you?" One of the mice echoed, they were a thin indigo lining. The mouse had a soft chirping voice gave them a impression of pure positive vibes.
"I'm C-Copycat." Copycat hesitated, her grey lines vibrating.
"Oh! I'm Lily." The indigo mouse smiled.
The other mice held back, besides a blue one, they stepped next to Lily. Their proud smile showed they were a happy mouse.
"I'm Lotus." She giggled. "Funny how me and Lily have flower names, huh?" She smiled.
The other two mice slowly introduced themselves, one Wind, the other Cipher.
After a while, Wind spoke up. "Why're you grey anyways? Are you just so devoid of personality you can't even have a colour?" And Copycat just glared. "Why are you yellow anyways? Are you just so bright and cheery, you can't even have a dark colour?" She copied back, flicking her grey tail as she jumped into a sitting position.
Wind glared back. "I guess you do live up to your name Copy-" "Copycat." Copycat finished, proud of her name she had given herself.
Cipher stared ahead, his lime glow powdered against the black waves that they were in. "did you guys notice the green lines...they have been throbbing into colour for a while now..." He quietly remarked, and everyone looked down at their lined paws. "There is... green lining..." Copycat noticed aloud, stumbling back. "Of course there is idiot," Wind barked at her, her yellow bright.

"How do we leave?" Lily tilted her head. "I'm not saying I don't like any of you, it's just... I don't like this place.." She smiled positively. "Yeah, I'm wondering..." Lotus added. "I'll go check." Cipher mumbled and buzzed away.
"I'm gonna go torwards the border... where is the border?" Wind sighed impatiently. "No clue..." Lotus shrugged. "Yeah, I have no clue either." Copycat shrugged along as well. "Well, I'll let you ponder to yourselves, I'm going to go find the end of this misery." Wind prodded off, leaving only Lily, Lotus, and Copycat.
"So uh... I guess we need to figure this out." Lotus looked up into the black sky. "I guess each colour represents a personality." She obviously stated. "Besides that... I guess our lines vibrating means nervousness.." She was cut off by Lily. "And our colours brightening mean our personality is anticipating." She smiled.
Copycat nodded. "And our lines blurring is us uh..." She quickly realized. "It means we are bored or like... thinking." She supposed.

"Nothing! No border, no nothing!" Wind deceivingly came back. "All I can say is we're stuck here, and dead." She smirked under her breath, then drew her head up again for her to not look suspicious.
Copycat flicked her head out of her face so she could see. "Hey, look in front of us." She blandly worded.
"What the..." Cipher looked up, he seemed to be doing something with the green lines.
"White mice!?" Lily inhaled deeply, the black void seemed to have thick air.
Soon, white outlines of mice traveled to the 5 mice, they all had blankets and wings.
"They're deceased mice?" Lotus assumed, and most of the living mice agreed with soft murmurs.
"They seem to be heading somewhere." Copycat noticed, although, she copied Cipher's whisper.
"Should we follow them?" Wind sighed, she had been complaining of being bored for the remaining time they had in the abyss.
"I suppose." Cipher raised his voice, not wanting Copycat to copy him no more.
"Well lets go then!" Lily let out a fresh smile, and pounded after them, her fluffy tail following after her.

[/# Chapter Red]

HEHE I LOVE MY EXPRESSION <333

Also when I was being suspicious I expected to grab my knife XD But it doesn't matter

i always thought she just carried her knife like no big deal tbh

i mean
irl i would freak the fck out but y'know?
TFM LIFE IS NORMAL
(plus, a mouse cant physically die in the TFM world, only this little little void!)

true true but she does like to take it out and threaten people if she either feels threatened or is just mad like crazy

Ahh! I see!
Thank you <3

ps. um.. so, the ending is me explaining her new outfit, YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ IT HEH

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%202&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=FF7700


After what seemed like a thousand days, the lined mice finally found themselves a gathering of white mice. "Woah..." Lotus gasped. "They're trapped here?" Wind let out a "pf" noise.
"Mice can't die.. not in Transformice? So surely they're not dead mice," Copycat shrugged, her grey ice-cream outline clamped in her jaws as she sucked on the silver chocolate lining.
"Maybe your dead, but living. You are completely out of colour like the rest of these corpses." Wind smirked at her, flicking her orange tail and padding with the rest of the group, leaving Copycat behind, a glare making her grey eyes blur out more than ever.
"Lily! Come here~" Lotus smiled, tugging on her paw over to a group of milky mice. Lily obediently followed. "Say, why are they staring at you...?" Cipher nudged at Wind, being the fact he barely spoke this whole time.
"Dunno." Wind shrugged. "I guess they're looking past me at Miss. No-colour." Wind giggled, and bounded off towards Lotus and Lily.
Cipher drifted back to Copycat, she was sitting on the grid-patterned void, drawing little shapes in the black, they disappeared slowly after each mark.
"She seems odd, eh?" He stood next to her as she got up. "Odd won't explain how incredibly rude she is!" Copycat sighed, forcing herself to walk forward. "Why're you grey anyways?" Cipher bobbed up and down as he floated like most of the white mice. "I don't know, okay!?" Copycat flashed a glance at him. "You're starting to act like her now." He sighed. "I'm... i'm not." Copycat heaved a sigh as she straightened her back and started to float like him. She automatically let her personality copy his smooth reactions. He sighed, fleeing away from her. She flew past him, a grey voltage following past her. "Whoa..." She breathed out, White mice were talking to Lotus and Lily, Wind was no where to be seen, And Copycat began to worry.
She decided to travel over to the two mice, they were stuck together like glue. "Are you two like sisters... or twins?" She blurted, and Lotus and Lily took a minute to stare at Copycat shift her eyes and shrug.
Suddenly, the two yelled out into laughter, their colours brightening. "No-no!" Lily pauses from her laughter, breathing heavy as if she ran a 5k.
"We're not sisters.I just guess our personalities match up!" She finally sounded slightly normal. "Oh.. that makes since.." Copycat smiled. Suddenly, a white mouse nudged her. "Huh?" Copycat turned and faced the mouse. "Hi." They gleamed a smile. "Are you wondering why there are-" Wind finally appeared, "only 4 colored mice and the rest are white and...grey?" Wind smirked, biting the tip of her knife. "I guess all these dead mice are just here to be different. Kinda like you, Copier." Wind giggled, waiting for copycats reaction.
"I-I..." Copycat shifted her weight onto each paw as she waiting for an answer to fly out. "I like b-being different!" She heaved her chest out, red flaring in her vacant eyes.
then, a bright white broke out into the black abyss, it splattered across the grid, and leaked in front of the coloured mice. It poured like wine under the mice, and they glanced at each other, and the white mice, who shook their heads intently, the barren white mice seemed to almost beg them to leave, had they not wanted them to die?
Copycat was the first one to shoot out the cave of nothingness, and she was back where she had once been. She dug her way into the dirt as she planted into the grass, her mint hoodie stained with brown soil.
"What the..." She glanced back, and it was just skies with mice playing long fully. "I'll need to change this up.." She stared at hoodie as she peeled it off of her.

Once she made it home, she shoved her close door open, glancing at what was available. She snatched a black bandanna, and seized a dark ball cap from the back of her dirty laundry pile. She pierced her virgin ears with silver rings and glanced in the mirror. She seemed fine, but something still bothered her. Maybe if she changed her teal hair, (which she realized wasn't apart of the colour spectrum for the Neon Lights) that she'd be that colour, she decided purple! She hadn't seen any purple, so hopefully it was apart of the colours.
After she was done, she was different person.
She liked the style, although!


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Wait...

"White mice were talking to Lotus and Lily,"

OMG!
"Lotus Lily" ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED.
Search it up and your results will be another flower!
The Lotus Lily flower.
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bluecrest a dit :
Wait...

"White mice were talking to Lotus and Lily,"

OMG!
"Lotus Lily" ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED.
Search it up and your results will be another flower!
The Lotus Lily flower.

DUN DUN DUN
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tibisho a dit :
bluecrest a dit :
Wait...

"White mice were talking to Lotus and Lily,"

OMG!
"Lotus Lily" ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED.
Search it up and your results will be another flower!
The Lotus Lily flower.

DUN DUN DUN

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wowie
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Can we be a helper and a character?
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Can we be a helper and a character?

Yep!
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*MAKES FanaRTT*

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*MAKES FanaRTT*

omg

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