[ TFM Fanfiction ] Dimming Lights - A Neon Lights Sequel |
Nepence « Citoyen » 1487101920000
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SLAMS FIST ON TABLE another gift from the gods?? jesus--- ff i already feel like making fanart of this omg. this looks great so farrr ;o;; |
Little_soldr « Citoyen » 1487128260000
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Form o0o Narrator for some reason Sign Up Form Name: "Nick "Loki" Thistlestring. His title is from his petty, yet successful lies." Gender: "Male, yes." Personality: "Yes, he's a tricky fellow. He clamors around and steals things, but best interest is in his heart. He's also a liar, and can attempt to persuade. He does enjoy the fun things in life, yes, but a conversation and a cup of coffee is good enough for the little friend. He's a neutral player in sides, choosing whoever is the kindest or gives good pay. He loves a good game of cards." Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): "His eyes are bright yellow, and he dully sharpens his front teeth. He uses his sword as a secondary weapon, but usually uses his fists, being against killing." Family: "They died off long ago" Extra: "No, madam" |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1487145480000
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Nepence a dit : well well well ur art would make this beautiful place wonderful!! YES U AGREE? Loki1231 a dit : looks good, he should be able to be introduced by branch 2/3 |
Nepence « Citoyen » 1487156400000
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Eeveewings a dit : IGUESS--- ill make it after a few posts though, maybe draw a scene or something? this looks amAZINGG THO AAAAAIMSOEXCITED im making a char ASAP since all my old refs look really bad so be prepared B^) Dernière modification le 1487165640000 |
Little_soldr « Citoyen » 1487161860000
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Eeveewings a dit : Nice! I can't wait! |
Riiazu « Citoyen » 1487180580000
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can we add more characters |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1487215740000
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Bublamorce a dit : (e:) YES U CAN PLS anyway i quickly wrote a chapter bc lol. next tab .o. note: sorry if its poorly written or just boring, the introduction of characters is always boring for me. Branch 2 A loud gasp casted from a dark purple, almost lineless mouse. Pain seared from the mouse, it fidgeted in an almost seizure, before going limp. The mouse slowly faded from purple into a soft yellow, a bright glare casted from bright, bright white glasses. “What in the name of Tig,” the mouse groaned. “Gosh… Is this a dream? No, it can’t be,” The mouse was reminded of the pain that located near the eyes, the yellow mouse weakly lifted to a sitting position. “Wait,” the mouse suddenly halted, almost falling over. “I… I can see?” The mouse whispered. “Bruno, you stupid mouse, you can’t see, you’re... You’re just imagining things!” The mouse revealed its name, Bruno. Bruno struggled to get up but finally did, “Tig… can I really see? Am I just a lucky blind guy now?” He sighed, before taking off the white glasses. Looking down, he saw his blurry yellow paws, he jumped back and falling, his lines pulsing with dark purple, before fading to yellow again. Bruno began to breathe fast, “It’s so dark that it’s like being blind and,” He stopped. Something caught his dewy and doe eyes, he choked on bile that has been rising. A ball of orange, almost fiery looking, was nearing. Bruno gulped down more bile, fear was pulsing through him, if he was blind, he wouldn’t see this, we wouldn’t be scared. His eyes felt cold and fresh, and not a coated over feeling like when he was blind. They felt watery, and he was desperately trying to ignore the anxiety was was throbbing in his chest, was he going to die? A distant yowl was coming from the direction of the orange light. He could make out the words, “Hello?” His hearing clearing still amazing. Soon enough, the ball of light was a visible mouse. “Hello.. Are you okay?” The mouse responded. “I’m Justin.” Bruno was in shock, his tongue not moving, though he let out a painful and tiny nod. Justin leaned down, lifting his orange paws to Bruno’s purple neck, Justin flinched, Bruno wasn’t breathing. “Sir… I need you to breathe, please,” Justin has calmly said, Bruno has slowly begun to do so, his eyes dull and small, they had begun to fade white prior, but now he was a pale yellow. Justin didn’t dare to ask questions, he sat down next to Bruno but falling. And though he still was clearly understanding Bruno was in shock, he didn’t know how to help. After a while of sitting, Bruno finally let out a small squeak, loud gasps came from him. Justin was looking at him strangely, “Are you alright…Do you need help up?” Bruno shook his head. “No,” He breathed, “i’m Bruno, by the way,” Bruno wanted to pour out everything, though was very cautious. “Okay, are you seeing okay? Your eyes are super dilated,” Justin asked, staring through Bruno’s eyes. Bruno blinked. “I… I don’t know how, but, in-game, i’m blind, but I can see.” During the entire time the two weakly walked together, Justin was asking questions about Bruno’s blindness, and sometimes making jokes. “I heard on the news that mice were he before us,” Justin finally changed the subject. Bruno nodded. “I wonder if someone else is killing?” He remembered the population decrease the years before. “No, more mice are here than less,” Justin countered, he was a soft green-blue colour, it was pleasing to Bruno, he never knew what colours were, but always had an idea, he always thought the word ‘red’ was associated with salads. He never understood why, but they sounded like they matched. He looked at his own paws, they were a pale colour, close to the darkness the void contained. It looked like it was a gray, as he was told grey was lighter than black, but not entirely. Justin had also been teaching him colours as they talked, justin told him the colour he was when he was here was yellow, and he also turned purple sometimes. Justin said that he was orange when they both met. Justin reminded him of his dad, who taught him a lot. Justin was funny, and sort of clumsy like his dad too. Bruno was turning a different shade now, in which Justin said he was ‘green,’ but it quickly faded into a yellow-orange. He liked this colour. “Do you see that?” Bruno spoke, his voice rough from not speaking much. “I do, it’s orange.” Justin replied. “Is it another mouse?” Bruno assumed, before receiving a nod from Justin, who was calling out “Hello!” As the new found mouse met Justin and Bruno, they all were shades of orange. “Hello,” the mouse spoke. “I’m Nick, nice to meet you all. Do you know what this place is by chance?” “No,” Justin and Bruno said in sync. Bruno flinched, that was strange. “Hm, I’d better stay with you guys anyway, if that’s alright? After all, the more mice we have the more we can find out about this place and get out,” Nick blinked. Persuading the two, they all agreed. Bruno had begun to retell his story, Nick listened in, before sharing a bit about himself as well. As they continued forward, they spotted a blinding white light, with dark blue around it. The three called for the light, but the spots had given them no sign of hearing them. “This is strange, surely they’re mice,” Nick commented, before sitting down, they were all exhausted. “Perhaps they didn’t hear us, or didn’t care,” Justin shrugged. “Honestly they could’ve been bad.” Bruno blinked. “Should we follow them?” Dernière modification le 1487218920000 |
Digitalpanda « Consul » 1487640720000
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has just noticed the message was edited Oh quietly reads |
Little_soldr « Citoyen » 1487644080000
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Mm yes |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1489289100000
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oops this died :) |
Nepence « Citoyen » 1492446660000
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revives |