shardpixel a dit :

May I also say that it's better to put full art here or at least lineart rather than an unfinished sketch

FUCKING PLEASE SO WE CAN STOP WITH THIS BULLSHIT

http://sketchtoy.com/63560608

critique please? redline if you can

Zakryah a dit :

shardpixel a dit :VoirMasquer

May I also say that it's better to put full art here or at least lineart rather than an unfinished sketch

FUCKING PLEASE SO WE CAN STOP WITH THIS BULLSHIT

they are only trying to help you so you understand later on when you want some more help
don't get angry because they are trying to offer you some assistance.

can u plz crit this? it's my TFM mouse btw
http://sketchtoy.com/63563957

:)) <3333

Can someone criteque this drawing[lineart]? I’m trying to draw BRVR. I’d also like help on the right front paw, I want to draw it like the left one but I cant seem to find a good area to draw it on, so that’d help



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Though I do know the legs might be a bit long for BRVR, I’m kind of looking at drawings of him on google and a few have him with longer paws... I suppose?

griffincraft a dit :

Can someone criteque this drawing[lineart]? I’m trying to draw BRVR. I’d also like help on the right front paw, I want to draw it like the left one but I cant seem to find a good area to draw it on, so that’d help



E//

Though I do know the legs might be a bit long for BRVR, I’m kind of looking at drawings of him on google and a few have him with longer paws... I suppose?

Sorry this isn't a full critique I just wanted to suggest something for the front right leg pose. Maybe trying laying it flat even though you wanted it like the other one I think it would be more natural and would flow better.

Im just going to bump this because I havent had a complete critique

[Btw +Shastabby I dont know, I wanted to make the paw like that.. But if there’s a different way.. ...Idk?]

hold on what animal is that first of all?

satash a dit :

hold on what animal is that first of all?

BRVR, or just a Creepypasta with a more or less demonic Pikachu in it xP

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Not everyone draws BRVR as “Demonic”, sometimes just depressed
Which is what I’m doing

E2//
Im trying to draw the right front paw under the left one, kind of why I raised the paw a bit [Forgot to add that >_<]

shadebluhart a dit :

Zakryah a dit :VoirMasquer

shardpixel a dit :VoirMasquer

May I also say that it's better to put full art here or at least lineart rather than an unfinished sketch

FUCKING PLEASE SO WE CAN STOP WITH THIS BULLSHIT

they are only trying to help you so you understand later on when you want some more help
don't get angry because they are trying to offer you some assistance.

u literally missed my point

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6.) Try not to post non-tfm art.
This is a Transformice related subforum. It is encouraged to post Transformice related art pieces here.

Since we have an off-topic arts forum now, would it be okay to have a separate critique thread for that? o3o

[size=7]Sorry just wondering cuz yeah.

sunnyweathr a dit :

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6.) Try not to post non-tfm art.
This is a Transformice related subforum. It is encouraged to post Transformice related art pieces here.

Since we have an off-topic arts forum now, would it be okay to have a separate critique thread for that? o3o

[size=7]Sorry just wondering cuz yeah.

I believe this was discussed before, and most posters agreed to keep this thread and not have two separate ones, though I don't know if opinions had changed

Personally I think we should just keep this one because the TFM fanart subforum has more traffic than the Offtopic fanart.

musicaholic a dit :

sunnyweathr a dit :VoirMasquer

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6.) Try not to post non-tfm art.
This is a Transformice related subforum. It is encouraged to post Transformice related art pieces here.

Since we have an off-topic arts forum now, would it be okay to have a separate critique thread for that? o3o

[size=7]Sorry just wondering cuz yeah.

I believe this was discussed before, and most posters agreed to keep this thread and not have two separate ones, though I don't know if opinions had changed

Personally I think we should just keep this one because the TFM fanart subforum has more traffic than the Offtopic fanart.

I never saw, oops.

I guess I see your point

Can I get some anatomy critiques on this?

It's just lineart that I'll never color since it's for practice only.



Please help me fix the feet my god.

shardpixel a dit :

Can I get some anatomy critiques on this?

It's just lineart that I'll never color since it's for practice only.



Please help me fix the feet my god.

sorry for turning it around


eh well, if you want to draw mice with more realistic look into them, i think you should draw for example arms with a more mouse-looking anatomy, (compare those arms i drew) since i can see you drew yours with a human-ish anatomy. Also, i think the neck is really thin, compared to the head's size and also, those shoulders make it look like you just drew a human torso, with a mouse head.
Andd i think you should try making the lower body bigger since if you look at mouse reference pics, you notice that they're not shaped like sausages, more like pears.
And lastly, those ears are really pointy, they look more like a bats ears more than a mouses, so i suggest making them more round-ish.

hh i hope this was helpful in some way though doing the critique was pretty tough, since our personal styles look nothing alike tbh.

mistalee a dit :

shardpixel a dit :VoirMasquer

Can I get some anatomy critiques on this?

It's just lineart that I'll never color since it's for practice only.



Please help me fix the feet my god.

sorry for turning it around

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eh well, if you want to draw mice with more realistic look into them, i think you should draw for example arms with a more mouse-looking anatomy, (compare those arms i drew) since i can see you drew yours with a human-ish anatomy. Also, i think the neck is really thin, compared to the head's size and also, those shoulders make it look like you just drew a human torso, with a mouse head.
Andd i think you should try making the lower body bigger since if you look at mouse reference pics, you notice that they're not shaped like sausages, more like pears.
And lastly, those ears are really pointy, they look more like a bats ears more than a mouses, so i suggest making them more round-ish.

hh i hope this was helpful in some way though doing the critique was pretty tough, since our personal styles look nothing alike tbh.

aaa yeah you're right haha.

Thanks a lot though, I needed help with shoulders.

icegirlypro a dit :

:)) &lt;3333

The tail is uneven, try to make the tail more thin as it comes to an end. It looks like a ballerina, put the feet on the ground and not pointing up. It's also bleeding white, fix that. The lines are a little bit shaky too. The arms are a little odd, try to make it an elbow to improve it. It is also missing a nose, all animals have noses.

Please don't critique too harshly. :( It's my first digital art ever. :D

ears should be larger (looks like a bear imo)