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pyrubble a dit :
alikha a dit :
Can I have a critique on this - http://sta.sh/05b441jxven

I'm gonna follow the Praise-Question-Polish format for this critique.

✓ The colors you used for shading (or the layer mode used to blend it) works well for the color scheme.
✓ I also love the smooth feel of the lines, especially the fact that they're colored lines instead of black.
✓ The face is probably the best bit of the drawing. It's well-shaped and downright adorable.

? Did you use a line tool for the lineart or is it freehanded?

✗ I think you need to work on limbs; they don't appear to have joints or much structure.
✗ Two things appear to be missing: the insides of the ears and eyebrows.
✗ Small nitpick: Place the gem tail item a little higher on the tail. It looks like it could fall off any moment when it's hung right at the tip.

Here are some visuals:

Also (and I'm not sure that this is the appropriate place to ask) but would you all be interested in some sort of tutorial from me? If so, specify what kind (lines, coloring, painting, etc) and I'll see what I can do.

Thank you :D

#4322

Could I have another critique?
~ Maybe the neck is fat but I'm not sure.
(The hair is not a mistake)

#4323

Critique needed, ima noob C:

Hmm it got a tiny bit of blur some how

#4324

foxytherobot a dit :
Critique needed, ima noob C:

Hmm it got a tiny bit of blur some how

it got blurry because of the way you saved it as jpg

#4325

satash a dit :
foxytherobot a dit :
Critique needed, ima noob C:

Hmm it got a tiny bit of blur some how

it got blurry because of the way you saved it as jpg

Ahh, i see.

#4326

satash a dit :
foxytherobot a dit :
Critique needed, ima noob C:

Hmm it got a tiny bit of blur some how

it got blurry because of the way you saved it as jpg

I love it :3
You draw way better than me xD
Like everybody else in like.. the whole world.

#4327

basgetti a dit :
satash a dit :
foxytherobot a dit :
Critique needed, ima noob C:

Hmm it got a tiny bit of blur some how

it got blurry because of the way you saved it as jpg

I love it :3
You draw way better than me xD
Like everybody else in like.. the whole world.

this thread is for critiques, don't post if you're not going to critique or say anything helpful
there's an inbox feature for compliments

#4328

foxytherobot a dit :
Critique needed, ima noob C:

Hmm it got a tiny bit of blur some how

I think you should make the head look less like a perfect circle, make the eyepatch a bit bigger, and the silver stuff are supposed to be what attaches the ears to the head and it should be a bit underneath but then it looks like it's on top of the ear and head. It would also look neater if you colored the lines. Would you like a redline? (Or blueline, since it probably won't be seen). It's pretty good though, it took me some time to find something wrong with it

edit:

Here you go!

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#4329

jevjev a dit :
Could I have another critique?
~ Maybe the neck is fat but I'm not sure.
(The hair is not a mistake)

hh so i changed the legs' position because if dog's are lying in that kind of position on their stomachs, the legs aren't usually stretched out, mainly because it's kinda uncomfortable for them to be stretched out in that position.
And i think the neck is fine, as it looks like the dog has a very thick fur. Also, the jaw looks really weird to me, because it's not as straight as it should be.
The eyes too, try checking someone's eyes from the front, and then from the side. You'll see that their shape from the side isn't like from the front, they'll have a more triangel-like shape, as you see from my redline. I get it that it might just be your style, the big eyes and their shape, but i'm just saying that don't draw eyes from the side the same way you draw them from the front if you want them to look more realistic.

i hope this was somewhat helpful `v´

mistalee a dit :
mistalee a dit :

i know this is a sketch but you can critique it as some sort of lineart if you want, since i've noticed sketches are kinda unwanted here.
psst it's supposed to be sneaking, that's why the position is so crouched

still would like a critique for this

yet again dumping this here

#4330

mistalee a dit :

mistalee a dit :
mistalee a dit :

i know this is a sketch but you can critique it as some sort of lineart if you want, since i've noticed sketches are kinda unwanted here.
psst it's supposed to be sneaking, that's why the position is so crouched

still would like a critique for this

yet again dumping this here

I don't know what animal it really is, but it seems more like a fox/wolf to me so i'm just going to go on that :'x
In case it's a wolf,
It'll be a bit closer to the ground with it's head carried lower or maybe a bit more forwards-going with it's legs further behind it.
In case it's a fox I would say that it's definitely much closer to the ground. :3
And in any case, it's taken weight off 2 legs, so it's front leg has more weight in it so... The "elbow" would be much higher like if it's leg was taller than it is, if you see what i mean. :/
[size=7]Those toes are confusing me, they're on the side of his paw ;-;
If I had the skill i would try show you but I'm only ever good theoretically :')

v I did owe you a critique in some way ;u;

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#4331

Thanks for the critique, Giginne <<:
[size=8]and about the toes, i guess it's just a bad habit since i always try to remember to make them look normal

#4332

It's time to request a mouse critique again

#4333

If the hat was on the head in that position, you'd probably be able to see the other section of the brim of the hat behind the ears.
The ears themselves seem very long, thing, and seem more like they belong to a bunny than a mouse. This could be due to how you placed the ears. This may be a nitpick, but you could try drawing them a bit more rounded.
This may also be a nitpick, however, the (taco? burger?) is drawn really small and thin and you can't exactly tell what it is.
Those are the things I can immediately pick up on, I'm not exactly sure how to help you with the feet.

#4334

Alikha a dit :
foxytherobot a dit :
Critique needed, ima noob C:

Hmm it got a tiny bit of blur some how

I think you should make the head look less like a perfect circle, make the eyepatch a bit bigger, and the silver stuff are supposed to be what attaches the ears to the head and it should be a bit underneath but then it looks like it's on top of the ear and head. It would also look neater if you colored the lines. Would you like a redline? (Or blueline, since it probably won't be seen). It's pretty good though, it took me some time to find something wrong with it

edit:

Here you go!

Wow thanks! That helps a lot, i don't usually draw FNAF that much so that is very helpful, thank you.

#4335

i need help with shading pixel art. there is a little shading on the face, i dont know how to shade well.

#4336

Wingedmousie a dit :

i need help with shading pixel art. there is a little shading on the face, i dont know how to shade well.

I can help you with advice. but i'm not very good at it.
So i'm gonna start with the lines of what you can use of shading. If it's pixel art I would choose the thinner one.

Okay if your gonna make pixel art like this:
(example)

Then I would choose the thinnest line from all the others.
So on your shading it looked like you used pencil. It doesn't look straight.
So it would look like this if you used the thin lines:

And bend the line a little then you can use the fill bucket to color the shades
And it will turn out like the shadings of this art:
(this is not mine)

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/325/7/f/pixel_eye_shading_tutorial_by_imonakoi-d4gx2p1.png

And the shading should look like the shading up above ^
I hoped this helped.

#4337

angelrange a dit :
Wingedmousie a dit :

i need help with shading pixel art. there is a little shading on the face, i dont know how to shade well.

I can help you with advice. but i'm not very good at it.
So i'm gonna start with the lines of what you can use of shading. If it's pixel art I would choose the thinner one.

Okay if your gonna make pixel art like this:
(example)

Then I would choose the thinnest line from all the others.
So on your shading it looked like you used pencil. It doesn't look straight.
So it would look like this if you used the thin lines:

And bend the line a little then you can use the fill bucket to color the shades
And it will turn out like the shadings of this art:
(this is not mine)

And the shading should look like the shading up above ^
I hoped this helped.

I know. Thin lines, use illuminated colors for icons, etc. Tutorials never go in depth on how to get spots that dont require lots of shading.. i need an expert on this kind of stuff

#4338

Be as harsh as you wish.

#4339

I wanna be the very best...
Like no one ever was...

That ear on the right is bugging me and I know I placed it wrong huehue x3

#4340

critic please

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