@2539042 - Karimthebest.



First off, I think you should switch the hole and cheese, and make mice spawn on the cheese. It'll make the map harder then it is right now. It may make it a bit unfair for the newer mice but I feel like the maps already too easy.

The brown arrows I thinnk you should add chocolate to those sides because mice are going to have cheese and be a bit heavier now, and for the yellow arrows I think you should add 5 pixels to that ice's rotation making it so mice can't run up it. Making them have to walljump up.

Lastly. I think you should choose a different ground then sand. Sand and ice are both pretty bright colors and kind of blend in when only a few pixels of it are showing. Maybe try a darker color ground or use the customizable color grounds (Rectangles).

Dddin's aesthetics tips

Dealing with fat ice


Please try not to use too much of the kind of ice on the left. Change it to the right instead. (Swap the length and width and rotate it 90 degrees)
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When dealing with many big ass ice grounds
You'll see that big ice grounds don't go well with each other.
Align them with grass or stone instead. Don't worry, if you can't get the width to be divisible by 40 (to get the 3 sides grass thingy), you can always elongate the ice a bit.



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@2915403 by Graecus



Short map. Too short.
In P7 maps, wall jumping are to be kept to minimum. Your map is 99% wall jump.
I'm not sure about racingminigame's judgement for this map.
Add the grounds I drew in.
Black arrow: INB4 FAKE GROUND! But mice should get it anyway so I don't really know of any good suggestions here.
Black boxes: Holes here instead. Makes the map a little longer (and more biased to the left, which is good.)
Try to add more parts to the map.
Lul.

@2897628 - p8

ALL SOULMATE!!
@2914135 P9
@2918706 P9
@2918717 P9

@2840737 by Starshipbay


Pretty good map already.
Black arrows: Why you make it different grounds?

That's all. But you can consider raising the ice a bit higher cause normal mice wouldn't make it I guess. It's pretty luck-based too so I'm not sure of that.

Try to lower the restitution ;c

LOOK GUYS THIS IS THE TYPE OF MAP THAT IS SUPPOSED TO BE SUBMITTED FOR P7. NOT HARDCORE RACING MAPS. RESERVE THOSE FOR RACING MINIGAME.

@2844100 P9 - Wangos.


I'll start off with the white arrows. I think you should put 10 pixel L and match the H of the wood ground with ice, having it only stick 5 pixels out from the wood though. This kind of makes shaman have to build up/out a bit more.

The brown arrows I want you to add again 10 L and match the hieght of those ice grounds with chocolate, once again having only 5 pixels stick out. This makes it harder for mice to fall through but the mice can also get back up after getting cheese and try and cornerjump the ice to the hole. This way being faster and also rewarding to those who can pull it off.

Lastly, the orange arrows is where I think you should add 20 L 10 H chocolate with only 5 pixels sticking out of the ground. This makes it so if the mice mess up there cornerjump, they can't just easiely get over to the wood ground over there. They would either try them selves and most likely die, or wait for the shaman to help them. Which of course makes the shaman more useful.

@2916595 P9 - Arber.

I don't have very much to say about this map so I won't be posting an image. I think you should add some friction to the lava to make it easier on map. I know that may defeat the point of the map a bit but it doesn't need to feel like a bootcamp for normal rooms. After you get cheese the map gets a bit too difficult.

Either way, I still feel even if friction added to the lava, the map would still be kind of hard, and still require shamans help for newer mice.

@2887852 P9 - Starshipbay.

Again, not very much to say and doesn't require a image to review. I only have 1 thing to say about this map really since I feel like it's alreadyy been edited once.

I think you should add a roof instead of just the infinit walljump till you go off screen and hit an iceground. That can cause a lot of mice to fail and i'm pretty sure that corner jump back is near impossible which is okay.

@2916731 P9 - Starshipbay.
(Not a Review).

I don't feel like mice can solo this and it feels more like a shaman map to me. I'm not sure of what you can do here other then make the map a bit easier.

@2904934 P9 - Starshipbay.
(Not a Review).

I feel like this is more of a P4 then a P9.

@2892303 P9 - Starshipbay.

It's not a good idea using ONLY shaman items for a map. Shaman items can sometimes spawn in late and since your map is made with only them, it would kill off all the mice if this happened. I suggest remaking the map with normal grounds and such because the planks already do so for wood ground etc. For the balls you could use circles.

@2897174 P9 - Asquerit.
(Not a Review).

I quite like the mechanism you used here, it's simple and gets the job done but.. I'll have to run this by one of our Mechanisms reviewers to see if they can improve it in anyway. That's all I can really do for you, sorry ^^;


@ P9 - Dddin.
(Not a Review).

I'll get to work on reviewing your soulmate maps as soon as I have someone on to review with ^^

Uhh Xendeavor, which grounds should I change to Stone? (For @2744259) Im not sure which ones I should change. ;;' And the ur supposed to use the tramp to get back up.

@2918132
P5?

@1622339 p7/p9

Asquerit a dit :

@1622339 p7/p9

Fun map which has a racing element in it. Though try not to overdo water.

Black arrows: Make grass. Will look better.
Green arrows: Make same height. Doesn't look aligned.
Red arrow: Please align the hole by moving it up a little. Also, remove that little bush. Do not block hole. (Plus the bush is protruding on the side too anyway :P)
Yellow arrow: Move the whole thing left. It's too far. Plus, the water is unaligned so make sure you align it. Remove the bush too. It blocks the cheese.
Green box: Add a grass here. We'll catch falling mice so that they can try again.

Instead of overlapping ice with ice, can you try adding Earth grounds instead, in the ice?
Something I missed: The funny vines on hidden between the ice, remove them please.

Protectable I guess
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@1768463 by Carlcruz


Ew i hate retro bootcamp ._. I don't know how to judge. But based on what I know..
Black arrow: Remove
Red arrow: Try to avoid 10px grounds. But yet again this is retrobootcamp so I have NO IDEA.
Black line: Can you align the wood. But yet again this is retrobootcamp so I have NO IDEA.
The cheese bit: Can you make it prettier. But yet again this is retrobootcamp so I have NO IDEA.
Green arrow: Align to the left. But yet again this is retrobootcamp so I have NO IDEA.
The two ~30px by ~180px wood on the two sides. Can you make them same height and same width thanks
ALIGN EVERYTHING

The concept revolves around CJ, pegs, and TA. I don't like them I'm sorry. To improve, you should swap some TA with other concepts. Make use of other grounds too. Remember 10px grounds are disgusting.

You're welcome

Seeteegee a dit :

STATUS REPORT:

LOTS OF TALKING AND STUFF. KKKKKK

No fair! ; ;
Not many people post P5 maps.. its harder to make Q~Q

I've asked several members of this group if it's ok for me to review P11 maps aswell.
So far, i've asked 6 members, where i've gotten 6 yes.
If someone in the group do not want me to review P11 maps, please come to me, ok? C:

As for now.

Zakros - @2889767
First thing i noticed, was the teleportation system.
It’s great, though it got some flaws. The names are barely visible above the tubes, and it can easily be a good hiding place.
The upper and lower tubes, are also a bit obnoxious. You have very little control when falling down, as you can’t even see yourself. The walls are also a bit gameplay destroying.
The background is a bit too light-ish. So i suggest making it darker, possibly with a shading effect. Make sure they don’t blend in with the tubes.


Blue : Remove these walls and roof. They don’t really do anything, and the fact that the stone walls are ice, is just not good.
Red : Remove these cheese. It’s too many, and block of way too much of the map.
Purple : I noticed on the lower tube that the blockage and opening is very odd. Having the purple areas completely open, whereof the non purple are grounds, would make it a bit easier to understand.
Yellow : Removing these light green grounds, would maybe be a good thing to do. It’d make the mice visible, when they’re inside the tubes.
Pink : Add extra grounds here. This is because right now the map got very few places to ‘stay’ at.
Orange : Why is this tube in the front of the stone? Not pretty. Making the Z value on the tube lower would work
To finish of the review, i suggest adding a few flower-grass decoration, to make it look a bit smoother.

Elvismousee a dit :

No fair! ; ;
Not many people post P5 maps.. its harder to make Q~Q

Shh, you should be honored to test something of harder qaulity ! Almost like mechanisms.. I'll post an art map when ever I can make one okay.

I feel like submitting my flag map for p5 in this thread.
Just to make elvis feel better ok

Shadowwinter a dit :

Shh, you should be honored to test something of harder qaulity ! Almost like mechanisms.. I'll post an art map when ever I can make one okay.

No pls I dont want to review more stuff Im tired pls.

Dunald a dit :

I feel like submitting my flag map for p5 in this thread.
Just to make elvis feel better ok

No pls I dont want to review more stuff Im tired pls.

Elvismousee a dit :

No pls I dont want to review more stuff Im tired pls.
No pls I dont want to review more stuff Im tired pls.

Elvis pls.
You can review whenever you want.
If you wanna take 5 months off. That's ok.
I'll probably go sad panda, but it's ok

Dunald a dit :

Elvis pls.
You can review whenever you want.
If you wanna take 5 months off. That's ok.
I'll probably go sad panda, but it's ok

Okay Ill review for you bby xoxoxo <3

Elvismousee a dit :

Okay Ill review for you bby xoxoxo &amp;amp;lt;3

Oh I see how it is, cheating on me like that. HMPH! -stomps away like a angry mouse then goes sad panda-

Elvismousee a dit :

No fair! ; ;
Not many people post P5 maps.. its harder to make Q~Q

I POSTED A P5, OPEN YOUR EYES YOU..

Elvismousee a dit :

Okay Ill review for you bby xoxoxo &amp;lt;3

@2491618 P5.
Not really made to get into P5 rotation AT ALL.
But still C:

Todorovski a dit :

I POSTED A P5, OPEN YOUR EYES YOU..

There are 5-6 P5 maps that aren't reviewed yet.
Don't worry, it's not just you C:

Can anyone look it again please :/
@2915403