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Tribu  Fierying  « Censeur »
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| small redline for some desperate little qties here griffincraft a dit :  universalmou a dit : Won't give much tips because I understand you are still exploring without the art fundamentals, so some nitpicky stuff.  chumimii a dit : Thefourthone a dit : I actually adore this flat style type of artworks of characters, it really makes the character looks soft and all, But if i was to give an advise, it is to at least think of some forms underneath than to straight up draw the character with all the fancy stuff up. This is to prevent weird anatomy where the ear or horn is not placed 'correctly' or like how the ear is not connected to the head because of the blockage of hair.  I think giving critiques here is a little hard, considering that many of you are young artist who draws from inspiration, which is totally fine! However normally to critic is to relate something from real life, which includes art fundamentals. To know that you guys might not be into that, I try to leave them out as much as possible, which is really difficult ^^" Sorry if my critics are vague or i miss out some of you guys, not that I don't care about your works but I just find it hard to think up of an advise to say to you which is something you can get a grip on. |
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Griffincraft  « Consul »
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Fierying a dit : Thank you so much! I'll make sure to make changes in the sketch |
Digitalpanda  « Consul »
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 Critique pls And thank you Fiery for critiquing my other drawing cx |
Digitalpanda Xprincessj  « Citoyen »
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| ah oops didn't realize there was another page ;-; universalmou a dit : here you go!! (NOTE: it is color coded, red has no meaning in this critique)  |
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ebotthegreat a dit : Still want a critique for this; its not my most recent art but I still like it and want to learn how to improve |
| Windmillz « Citoyen »
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| This?  it's mafuyu from ice scream, she is part seal part human? thing and i thought she was really cute to draw! One day i want to be a good artist <: |
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windmillz a dit : -the camera quality isn't the best, it's pretty difficult to even see the drawing- I suggest either getting a better camera or darkening your lined since they're rather light -the arms as well as the legs vary in thickness and aren't really consistent, try to make them so -the arms and legs are also drawn strangely, it might be part of the characters design but if not try to improve with the anatomy with limbs This is all I can think of at the moment, hope it helps |
Doticanny  « Censeur »
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| Could I get some constructive criticism on this? Thanks!  |
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ebotthegreat a dit : it's like 5AM here and i've been up way too long so sorry if this doesn't make sense or i start rambling. i'll try to make it short. okay so i don't see anything glaringly obvious so this is just going to be me nitpicking. maybe change the lineart colour of the eyelids and the nostril to the same colour as the cheekbones/ear (that darker skin colour) some of the strokes on the hair don't match up with the tips of the hair?? the shading is a bit barebones and inconsistent. the nose/airbrush/ear shading fades out softly but the shading under the chin and on the hair doesn't. some shading that i would usually expect to see from the hair, the nose, the glasses and on the clothes is missing. i see a bit of colour leak in some places but it's not really a big deal, i only noticed it because i was looking for it. honestly i don't really see much wrong with it. maybe just experiment more with the colours/shading and the art style??? |
Begacheesy  « Citoyen »
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| Windmillz « Citoyen »
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ebotthegreat a dit : ah ok, i wish i had a better camera ;; but, thank you for the help! i'll try to focus on the legs more, i made the arms big on purpose sense that's her design :) |
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Zetsuen a dit : Aaa ok, thank you very much! I'll try to fix these issues in my future art! |
| Doticanny « Censeur »
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digitalpanda a dit :  Your color choice and design is nice but I believe that your art suffers in some areas such as anatomy and line art.   |
| Digitalpanda « Consul »
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doticanny a dit : Thank you so much! Helped a lot owo |
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| TYSM (thank you so much) for reading ^^; I’m really bad at anime-style hair, neck proportions and anatomy (╥﹏╥) and I wish any of you artists would help me a bit! Below are the links to my artwork(s): Links (sorry they all suck ;-;): https://www.instagram.com/doodling_artist/ http://doodlingartist.deviantart.com/ Recent Artwork:   (will be removed if non-TFM art is not allowed) |
