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 Lolokizka  « Consul »
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| critique on this?? (also help with the hands oh god)  it's still lowkey a wip thing tho |
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Tribu Shardpixel  « Consul »
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Basgetti a dit :  I apologize if anything is nitpicky / stylistic / incorrect but here's my two cents -There's something about that ear that bugs me. I'm not totally sure, but I'm pretty sure it's because it has both an odd shape and doesn't start at the right point in the head. -The hair should probably go over the collar. As of right now, it's in front of the side of his face and then behind the collar, making it appear as a 2d piece of paper that was pushed / folded back -Watch out for varying arm lengths -The mouse has hips and a fat ass butt. I also changed the shape of the legs because they should have a definable joint in them. The current legs have a bit of a (forgive me) chicken leg shape where it's fat at the thigh but gets very thin and the whole thing is straight. It would be very hard to use those legs in a dynamic pose where they would need to bend. -The head might be a bit too big but like i do the same thing so |
Wolfonwinds  « Citoyen »
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| Could i please get some critique on this?  |
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Wolfonwinds a dit :  posting some more of my art here  |
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| Still would like this to be critiqued large image  |
Walianna  « Citoyen »
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| please this  and this  |
Lobolove  « Consul »
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xiangwa a dit : Hi Xiangwa ! I went ahead and checked your DA gallery out. ;) I see that you're making mostly headshots, your face anatomy is alright, you don't really need criticism about that in my opinion, and well I don't see what's wrong with your necks ? They are fairly drawn. Good job on that, but I do have some tips for you about anime hair. First I'd like to point out that Kasumi's hair is really nice here, but I wonder why I doesn't quite look that good on your villain drawing ? You seem to draw haircuts that have a hair parting that are not lines, but more like a dot on top of the head. (Does that make sense ?) ... it's like a sad Oddish. The leaves pretty much come out from the same central point and then gravity makes them fall down.  So how does that help you ? Well, when you're shading your hair, think about those leaves. My point is, basically, you have shades at the base and at the end of the lock of hair, lighter shades in the lock of hair, and highlights.  Look at cosplay or wig pictures for example ;D. Also, you should really shade harder, it's too light ! And also, don't hesitate to move the hue bar while shading, it looks more natural than if you're shading with the same hue. Add more colours ! See my paintover below.  "Stay aware of your surroundings", I mean, if there is a shoulder or a boob on the way, don't just let the hair lay flat, make it follow the curves of other body parts. I'm thinking about Starry Night, well there isn't a shoulder, but it's just a reminder, if someday you have to draw long hair with a body (you should try doing more than just a headshot and ask for criticism so you can improve fast !).  Well, huh, that's all. Also, really like the colouring of your last drawing. Keep going ! *should I put this in a big spoiler tho ?* E D I T : So the forums crashed, but I have a redline for Ebot :  And one for Lolo (we meet again) :  |
Eric_cartman  « Citoyen »
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Funpaws a dit : |
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| Please red line this. btw my character is a male , and I dont know why i never added an Adams apple. This was from 2015  I will remove if non-tfm art is not allowed. |
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Lobolove a dit : Thank you so much, this was really helpful!! |
Souscared  « Citoyen »
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 i know that's not how tails work, and my line art is incredibly lazy haha. I definitely need to learn how to draw mouse legs though, I'm having a hard time since i mostly drew humans before ahaha- |
Doticanny  « Censeur »
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| Can I have some critique on this?  |
Xprincessj  « Citoyen »
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| my lines are extremely shaky today whoops doticanny a dit : one for doticanny  walianna a dit : and one for walianna(sorry i didn't critique the other one)  |
| Doticanny « Censeur »
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Xprincessj a dit : Thanks! |
| Walianna « Citoyen »
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Xprincessj a dit : thanks) |
Atearatareta  « Censeur »
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 help does this look good |
Youngness  « Citoyen »
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Milkandsurreal a dit : Hi! It's really good you didn't use tool shapes as many do the few main problems I see are that you have shaky and uneven lines, colour bleeds as well as empty spots, no shading and the ears are just fused with the head for the colours & line, a good art software will do the trick (Paint Tool SAI is well known and used just as well by beginners as well as professionals so I recommend it for it's flexibilty) For shading there are billions of tutorials out there and you can easily find something that suits you |
| Atearatareta « Censeur »
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Youngness a dit : meh, i'll just stay with firealpaca anubislk is my idol for drawing ty anyway (i can't do anything about the uneven lines since i have a touchpad tho) |
| Youngness « Citoyen »
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 can has critique pls |
