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 Doticanny  « Censeur »
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Fierying a dit : Thanks! This was really helpful!! |
Soricfetita  « Censeur »
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Tribu Shardpixel  « Consul »
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soricfetita a dit : Can't do a red line atm but I'll give you some notes: -the tail has an inconsistent thickness -the head and neck don't align -the arms are differing lengths -there really aren't distinguished hands or legs on him -the head just kinda stretches back into the ear -the ears are not shaped like those of a mouse -that fluff on his head is pretty unrealistic, though you may just say it's part of your style |
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shardpixel a dit : thanks a lot! |
Walianna  « Citoyen »
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soricfetita a dit : critique  |
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walianna a dit : thanks for the redline, it made me understand some things.even though i think that the left ear (his right one) looks kinda strange.it may be just me after looking through this topic a little, and reading shard's review, i decided to change how i draw mice sooo here's a thing, i don't like how the shading and lighting turned out  what do you guys think? |
| Walianna « Citoyen »
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| Critique on this please.  (It's only sketch) |
| Shardpixel « Consul »
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soricfetita a dit : awesome amount of improvement! nice job!  -just to add a sense of realism, id have his tail and foot rest on a distinguishable line (as in the ground) -mouse ears dont attach to the sides of the head. they are attached at a single point, and the rest of it is free -add a joints to show more weight being put onto the arms -mice have really long tails, so id make it a bit longer |
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Begacheesy  « Citoyen »
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| A critique would be nice.  Thank you! (it's old) |
Glowsticksss  « Citoyen »
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| Can I get some critique on this please?  |
Fierying  « Censeur »
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| very vague critic time, is more of small types of even they might be nitpicky OTL I am really sorry for the poor critic this time but hopefully this can still be beneficial in some way walianna a dit :  Will be straight forward: huge anatomy errors like how the bones bend is not an excuse I understand that some of us like to hybrid other animals like canine/feline anatomy to their mouse artworks, which its understandable but that leg and arm bones are bend in the way that the animal can't seems to be able to stand stably. do look at references, it can really help you out! universalmou a dit :  is more of referencing back to the original work, but one thing I would like to add is that for feline, their eyes a pretty front of the skull, so the eyes are more towards the front than in the middle. crystal_clod a dit :  begacheesy a dit :  |
| Walianna « Citoyen »
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Fierying a dit : thanks ^^ can someone crtique this please?  |
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Fierying a dit : thanks :-) |
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glowsticksss a dit : Right so the head of the mouse is disproportionate The legs are wonky The lining of the mouth needs to be correct The overall lining of the mouse needs to be in line and straight. i think you should make the lining straight i think your in the next level to start shading |
| Begacheesy « Citoyen »
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Fierying a dit : Thanks! |
| Glowsticksss « Citoyen »
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berryspecial a dit : Thank you! |
Creepinwolf  « Citoyen »
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| Critique on this maybe? I know it's off topic, but I can't draw mice very good, I just do it sometimes. And I also know that the lines are sketchy and I didn't shade good on some places, so you don't have to tell me.  |