P3: @694479

Holomouse a dit :

P3: @694479

Holo I think your maps are good...

Zarner a dit :

Is not luck , he is a very good reviewer that's why he is in the team. As he said , be patient because you are not the only client. I recommend you to stop with that mean attitude.

I apoligize, but i do not agree with posting stupid pics intstead of reviewing the maps that this thread was made for.
Stupid pics can be found in the "Off topic"sub-forum.

Fatsexybeast a dit :

I apoligize, but i do not agree with posting stupid pics intstead of reviewing the maps that this thread was made for.
Stupid pics can be found in the "Off topic"sub-forum.

Err.. that picture takes three minutes to find off imgur.com He was reviewing maps while posting "stupid pictures".
Do not backseat mod, you sound like a tight ass snob, there are no rules on pictures unless it contains explicit content. *COUGH* Ctg *COUGH c: or racism etc.

Elvismousee a dit :

@2277652 - Wecwec

Very nice theatre tribehouse map, modern and I like the darkness, it makes the video stand out once its played, great job! Love the lights, the simplicity of the thing, the use of tones of gray, the abstract shape and the huge background that made the background get interesting shapes. *-*

As you can see, it has a light gray thing in the middle, I just think it makes it easier to know its a lift, I don't know..

Apart from that, flawless map, nothing else I can say, its great!

Thanks for the feedback, I was curious how you guys would review this. As for your idea for the side lifts, I mentioned in my previous post that I was at 49/50 grounds. I would love to have a more creative way to get to get to the next level, however I had to improvise. Nonetheless, thanks Elvis ^^

Elvismousee a dit :

Err.. that picture takes three minutes to find off imgur.com He was reviewing maps while posting "stupid pictures".
Do not backseat mod, you sound like a tight ass snob.

Sorry... i guess

@2819876 - p3

Elvismousee a dit :

Lovestrucked - @2798675
I dont know what this is but the colors are good.

a plane thingy. c; (no wings due to ground limit) D:<

Elvismousee a dit :

The Yellow Arrows Point at the high restitution tramps, those are insta death for most mice who dont realise its high restitution. Thats a no no for most maps.

i would need a whole new different gameplay if i were to change this. gdfgjlkgdgr

Elvismousee a dit :

Red arrow points at that little speckle of blue ground you havent covered up, it's not that big but its still peeking out and its bugging me Q~Q.

fixed. <3

Elvismousee a dit :

Finally, the White arrow Points at the actual triangle art bit, its the main focal point of the map but you cannot touch it..which is a shame, try to get it more involved in the gameplay.

now..you can touch it. a bit involved in gameplay >.<

Wecwec a dit :

Thanks for the feedback, I was curious how you guys would review this. As for your idea for the side lifts, I mentioned in my previous post that I was at 49/50 grounds. I would love to have a more creative way to get to get to the next level, however I had to improvise. Nonetheless, thanks Elvis ^^

Oh sorry, I didn't see your post, I view map codes from a document, not from the forums, so it just shows me the map code not the actual comment after it ^^".

Lovestrucked a dit :

a plane thingy. c; (no wings due to ground limit)


i would need a whole new different gameplay if i were to change this. gdfgjlkgdgr
fixed.
now..you can touch it. a bit involved in gameplay

Oic, but you do not need to change the gameplay, it doesnt affect it much, the only difference is, less mice die. c:

Guess I got ignored then

Elvismousee a dit :

Oic, but you do not need to change the gameplay, it doesnt affect it much, the only difference is, less mice die. c:

alright c;
is it better if i just put two rectangles under the bottom of it so it makes it seem like its going up.

Bethdacat a dit :

Holo I think your maps are good...

Thank you. c:

Wangos - @2819876 Took me a while to get the first part down consistently but once I got it I really liked it. I’m not sure what else to say. I liked all of it. Fun map.

Bethdacat - @2922355



Red X - Please do not use fake grounds.
Green line - You can get on top of the ice ground by wjing up the wood block, making the whole right side of the map worthless.
Green Circle - Make those ice into one ground instead of separating them.
Red Circle - I’m not sure why this is here. It's not really needed.

Just a couple notes~
• Make sure each of your grounds has a purpose and test for shortcuts.
• The map is a little too easy for bootcamp.
• Next time export your map as a tribe house so it’s easier to test.
• Work on alignment.
• Aesthetically, try not to use grounds with 10 pixels in length or width.

Carlcruz - @2744259 The stone looks a lot better just make sure all the ice is visible. Im not sure what to do about the tramp part so I’d just set it back to the cj into trampoline combo you used originally.

Nhokw - @1360599


Red X - You should probably change these parts in your map. Vertical trampoline grounds tend to be very luck based and depend on the animation when you hit them. Quite a simple map.

@2722600

Category 3.

Me too Holo, I think your maps are good!!1!!1


Starshipbay - @2904934


This is a good map. ^^ It’s great to see the shaman have some room for building here. Plenty One thing I think you could fix is this ground.



This ground is rather inconsistent (In terms of gameplay) with the rest of the map due to the length. I would suggest shortening it.
Since you appear to be going for a “vanilla” look, a few mice item decorations wouldn’t hurt either.
Otherwise, I don’t particularly see any flaws in this map. c:

Fatsexybeast a dit :

Reply reply reply.

First of all, I can review maps whenever I damn well please. Infact, you're lucky I even take time out of MY DAY to help you improve your maps. I honestly don't have too and could skip every single map you post just because I didn't feel like doing it. But you know what, I don't.

I am doing my job in this thread, i'm the most active so far according to the stats CtG has posted. I try to be fair and review everyones map in order so no ones skipped. The only time anyone is, is when I don't have enough tribemates to review a map because it requires more then 1 mouse. I want to test it right so I don't get my reviews wrong.

Posting stupid pictures? You do relise this is a group of somewhat friends reviewing maps together. No reason to bite my head off for having a little fun. Who knows, maybe those pictures I post here make people smile and maybe even laugh. And that's what I want to do. Bring people up if they feel down about there map or are still waiting for there's to be reviewed.

And lucky i'm on the team? Yeah, I was surprised I even got accepted at first. I try to write long detailed reviews and play the maps over and over, sometimes spending over hours playing the same map to point out every single thing that should be improved. Hell I even stay up all night checking your's and everyone else's maps. 8 - 10 reviews in a couple posts don't just fall out of the sky.

Lastly, I don't see you getting onto anyone else but me. Why is that? I'm curious. Also, tell me again. Am I still lucky, not allowed to post pictures, and am supposed to dedicate all my time to reviewing maps?

Edit:


Sorry I couldn't resist.

@2744259 - Xen, I did the cj to tramp thing. I think its shortcutabble with the tramp though. Im not sure what else to put there.

Yep it is shortcutabble with the tramp, i tried it..

Xendeavor a dit :

Red X - Please do not use fake grounds.
Green line - You can get on top of the ice ground by wjing up the wood block, making the whole right side of the map worthless.
Green Circle - Make those ice into one ground instead of separating them.
Red Circle - I’m not sure why this is here. It's not really needed.

:c

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