CHAPTER 3: Wind and Ice

DAKOTA'S P.O.V

It was evening,I was still chasing cheese.I did feel something weird,like vibrations and electric zaps all over my body.The air was so dense you could almost cut it with a knife.It was quiet,if you would exclude the squeaking and shouting coming from mice in the room.This evening was...odd.Very odd.Something over the usial warm or chilly evenings,depends.
"Does anybody else feel the zaps?" I muttered under my breath as I climbed a a wood wall.
"Noob shaman!" some mouse shouted at the current shaman,who was slow.Ignorance,I murmured to myself.

ELI'S P.O.V
I tipped my wizard hat as I skipped towards the hole with the cheese on my back.After pushing myself into the a bit full hole I loosened my bandana due to the heat from all the mice bodies in the hole,nomming and nibbling on their cheese.Pling,said the bell and a new,fresh and seemingly new vanilla map came on.The air,there was something about the air.It was dense,and very a that.Feeling of the ground was like walking on thousands of isicles turned up and down,it stuck and strangely vibrated.I decided to throw those thoughts away and continue my daily chase for cheese.The sun on my tail jewelry clinged on it's thin silver chain.I left the room.
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I repeat the air and ground to show what each character thinks about how it's feeling. :3

[AUTHOR'S NOTE] Susan,you're gonna be in ch4. -v-

HUZZAH

Name : Haditamagica (ofc.)
Shaman : Easymode
Eye Color : Dark blue (like Superman's suit xD)
Age (Transformice//real): 14 / 11 (really, I made a journal for my mouse irl and they way I made her act is sorta' the age of 14 xD )
Favorite things (irl): 80's music, bloody stuff, fiction.
Hair Color: Light blue
Accesories: Thief mask (black), cheese earring, sword.

*P.S.: Can I be a sorta' murderer in the story? I don't mind being caught in the end but :P I should be chasing you aroundor something (making illusions to get you close to me to kill you). PLEASE! ;-;

Haditamagica a dit :

Name : Haditamagica (ofc.)
Shaman : Easymode
Eye Color : Dark blue (like Superman's suit xD)
Age (Transformice//real): 14 / 11 (really, I made a journal for my mouse irl and they way I made her act is sorta' the age of 14 xD )
Favorite things (irl): 80's music, bloody stuff, fiction.
Hair Color: Light blue
Accesories: Thief mask (black), cheese earring, sword.

*P.S.: Can I be a sorta' murderer in the story? I don't mind being caught in the end but :P I should be chasing you aroundor something (making illusions to get you close to me to kill you). PLEASE! ;-;

Didn't you fucking.They are all full.

Sirusthemice a dit :

Didn't you fucking.They are all full.

*Hands Siri a cookie* Calm down my lovely c;

ah
i like how you show the views of each character's p.o.v's

Sirusthemice a dit :

Didn't you fucking.They are all full.

Full what?

Haditamagica a dit :

Full what?

T h e s l o t s. >8I

Sorry I'm not writing any chapters yet,I'm low on inspiration and I also want to write a longer chapter dfedyifgs

Oki... I loves u storys so *_* Awesome

You may want to work on your grammar. Maybe put your chapters in the OP for easier reading. :)

Sirusthemice a dit :

Didn't you fucking.They are all full.

Poor Siri, story line is so good everyone wants in hue

Satash a dit :

You may want to work on your grammar. Maybe put your chapters in the OP for easier reading. :)

Yeh I know,English is my third launguage and I still mix words because of my Russian origin 8U And I probably should.

Sirusthemice a dit :

Yeh I know,English is my third launguage and I still mix words because of my Russian origin 8U And I probably should.

Third language!?
Way to go.

Satash a dit :

Third language!?
Way to go.

I plan on learning German; too.Maybe some other ones later on.I have big goals lol

Immagetcheez a dit :

Poor Siri, story line is so good everyone wants in hue

sjhhdkhgd jg ok true

Sirusthemice a dit :

Yeh I know,English is my third launguage and I still mix words because of my Russian origin 8U And I probably should.

I love you now; you go girl

Immagetcheez a dit :

I love you now; you go girl

Oh my god I have a feeling I'm gon' chat with you 2 like there's no end.

Praise the Sirus.
Bow down to the Sirus.

Satash a dit :

Praise the Sirus.
Bow down to the Sirus.

Siri* and I HAve bEEN told that tWICE Now.