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Micefamilies
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I'm sorry, but why do I feel like this isn't suppose to be in fanarts? o3o

Well the story is TFM related
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Vodid a dit :
I'm sorry, but why do I feel like this isn't suppose to be in fanarts? o3o

it does go in fanarts.

alright time to do this for realzies this time

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Part 4--------------- Kimi stood breathless, watching the mouse with red eyes continuessly stab the tree trunk. The mouse walked forward, a crooked smile on his face. He suddenly seemed harmless once in the light and Kimi dropped her hard gaze in relief. " More mice. I smell you have the note." The mouse said plainly. "H-how?!" Lucy stammered, a little frightened. " Magic." The mouse blurted sarcastically. "I'm Shard." He added.
"Hi shard. We're the group with the note." Kimi replied. Shard smirked and looked away for a few seconds. " Okay. I can sniff out people with this note, so lets get to it." So the mice set off.

this chapter was lazy but shut up
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Wingedmousie a dit :
ADDING ONE MORE SLOT FOR FUN! Vincin and Kimi are my characters.

I claim it yusss

Name: Kaiota (Kay-Oh-Ta)
Age (human yrs): 17
Gender: Female
Mouse pic (as off cheeseformice):
http://i.imgur.com/S6A8fdY.png
Personality: Super artsy and creative. She's extremely nice since she's an artist and has to live through harsh art critiques and etc. She does stand up for her friends, but she's very quiet and usually isn't even heard when she's trying to back her friends up. But her friends apreciate her for trying. But also, she's extremely smart and good with computers. She can code HTML, games, anything. Though she has a really bad fear she HATES! Stagefright!
Likes: Art, arts and crafts, computers, coding, speed arts.
Dislikes: Being on a stage, being mean to her friends, innapropriate stuff
Anything else?: She LOVES green and blue and often uses them in her art such as pottery, painting, drawing, sketching, coloring, etc.
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Holy shit.

I just realized this whole time I gave the wrong ref of Shard.
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ok the reason i didnt get to finish that chapter is because i have a virus called "incredibar" and after that nap i went to type and i typed for some time but it shut off google chrome and set mystart back. But then i remembered i have tfm downloaded so back to typing
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Wingedmousie a dit :
ok the reason i didnt get to finish that chapter is because i have a virus called "incredibar" and after that nap i went to type and i typed for some time but it shut off google chrome and set mystart back. But then i remembered i have tfm downloaded so back to typing

Can't wait for Shard to see Foxie >:D
-saunters in and stares at shard >:)-
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Yeah soon

soon
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Ok writing next chapter sorry this got so sunk

excuse my laziness
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Part 5------------------Kimi kicked a fat rock across the leafy forest and looked up at the bright white, stormy morning sky. " I hate these types of clouds." Kimi commented, " They're not what we exactly need..." yet noone cared enough to reply. Suddenly a painful blood rush smacked her in the head. Kimi squeezed her eyes very tightly and coughed. Suddenly, she saw an opposite image of her. A mouse with her hair, except without a frog hat. A fake cat hat, a moon tail instead, with blood on the corners of the moon. Her collar was black and the bell was crusty with blood. "I'm the anti you." she laughed. Then the vision dissapeared from her view and Kimi fell to her knees. " Are you okay!?" Lucy asked, worringly. "I'm fine." Kimi coughed.

The gang walked for another 2 or 3 hours, then finally hit the end of the forest. " It seems the trees are dying down." Shard commented," And I smell a town, with a mouse with the note."
"Race ya there, Shard!" Anna cackled to Shard, tripping him purposely.
Kimi was still wide eyed of the image in her head of the anti her. She really didn't know what it meant.
About 10 minutes later, they arrived. Lucy flinched as a raindrop fell onto her nose. " I see a hotdog stand!" Shard sparked. " Lunch- I'm starving." Then Shard stopped dead and stared a mouse waiting in line, paying for a pretzel.
He inhaled deeply and his eyes grew even wider. " YOU HAVE THE NOTE!" He yelled at the mouse. She gritted her teeth as she dropped her pretzel and a few seconds later picked it up and tossed it at Shard. " Yeah, I do. What about it?" She replied in a sassy, monotone voice with a hint of fury. " You guys owe me a pretzel." She then added. "It's all on me." Shard added. Kimi had loads of dollars from the dog walking games her little cousin begged her to do. Shard then handed the white mouse $1.25 and she got the pretzel and bit into it. " So.. what about the note?" She asked after swallowing her mouthful. " It's a note meaning you have to come with us." The mouse's face sudddenly turned into a fury and she shouted " Aw hell naw!". " You have to. Otherwise this world will become uglier than it is. Every town is being destroyed one by one. Trust us." The mouse rolled her eyes and said, " Fine. I'm Foxie." Everyone then got in line and bought their junk food to sit in the park and devour.
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shame that noone likes this anymore
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Wingedmousie a dit :
shame that noone likes this anymore

Nooo I just didn't see the new chapter ;;

Yes. I love Foxie's attitude.

Shard bought her a pretzel.

SO SMOOTH ;D
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ikr XD
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Shardpixel a dit :


Nooo I just didn't see the new chapter ;;

Yes. I love Foxie's attitude.

Shard bought her a pretzel.

SO SMOOTH ;D

I'm so god dayum sassay!
"Aw heallll naw!"
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dude im loving this i cant wait till you get it finsished! im loving the story...i didnt start reading it until today but i just have to read chapter 5 and i love it! i kinda sounded a little dumb and cheesy at first but this is really great! continue plz :D ill keep looking for more


just read it lol that was funny when he said she had to come with them...shes so sassy
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yes ikr XDD


okay writing next chapter! :D
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The group started walking after eating their junk-food morsels in the park and went to a more city area, with destroyed shopping plazas and a large road for cars, except not one in sight. They went down "swiss avenue" to find a series of houses, which were completely obliberated. " I-I don't like it here...." Lucy whimpered. " I don't either. It looks like a tornado came here or something." Shard admitted.
"Let's keep going." Kimi sighed.

The mice found a house that wasn't as destroyed to settle in, as it was getting very dark. It was eerie, yet better than the other houses, since they weren't totally demolished. They set down on the cold floor, which was creepily unusal for June, yet noone complained since they were so exhausted from all the walking and junk food, other than the one and only Foxie, which is totally expected for her sassy attitude. " I'm so tired..." Lucy cried as she drooled onto the floor in pure sleepiness. " Yeah, same here." Kimi sighed. " I DON'T! YOU BETTER SHUT UP BEFORE I BREAK OF YOUR NASTY CHICKEN FINGERS AND EAT THEM FOR BREAKFAST OR I MIGHT JUST SHOVE THEM UP YOUR LARDY BUTTS! " Yelled Fox at the top of her lungs.
" Stop it with the sassy talk." Shard snapped
"Aw screw this! Foxie growled, walking up the stairs, angrily.
"Don't go there! What if someone lives here and has a gun, and is too terrified to come down and shoot us, then shoots you?" Lucy yelled.
"I don't give a crap!" Foxie snarled.
"Let her be." Kimi mumbled... as she slowly fell asleep. But about 10 seconds later a scream came and it was a new one. " Oh god no.." Shard murmured. " Lets go get her." Kimi requested, worried.
The pack ran upstairs, worried, and saw a mother cover up her daughter with a gun in her hand, pointing at Foxie.
The daughter's antlers shook so much, everyone thought they might be fake and literally fall off. But oddly enough, her pale brown eyes remained calm.Then Kimi's head hurt again and she saw it. The vision.

the next chapter will be tomorrow
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purely amazing! i like the excitement! :D

and foxie is getting sassier each chapter....I DON'T! YOU BETTER SHUT UP BEFORE I BREAK OF YOUR NASTY CHICKEN FINGERS AND EAT THEM FOR BREAKFAST OR I MIGHT JUST SHOVE THEM UP YOUR LARDY BUTTS! " Yelled Fox at the top of her lungs.
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Wingedmousie a dit :

the next chapter will be tomorrow

Dat sassiness omo
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Just a question, when will my character bein the fanfic (sorry for complaing) but I feel like almost every character is already in the story but me
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The mouse with the antlers is you
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