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Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1530115020000
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Woah. All I can say is.. Woah. |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1530115920000
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My character can join to the story? Before Currently Name: Sonic Age: 14 Gender: Male Personality: He really like freedom, and he is very happy. Because of his freedom, some people don't like him. Sometimes he will reckless, and he speak very fast. :3 Power/Ability: Backstory*: His real name is Unfield "Sonikku" McKendry. He raised by a black cat named Bigi, he left Unfield when killed by Cresser "Umbra" Chikal. This is a dramatic point for Unfield, so after this tragedy Unfield went alone. But he's adopted by a ginger cat Swiper, but Swiper betrayed him and took his gun to Cresser to shoot Unfield, but Unfield gained his powers and run away from them. When he get to school, he got a lot friends, and his friends nickname him Sonic. Skills*: He's an very good fighter at hand to hand combats. Because his enchanted legs, he can run at the speed of light. Extra*: He got a dark grey hoodie with light grey stripes on it. His hairstyle is similar to Sonic the Hedgehog's. He likes music, so always wear headphones. He got a golden ring in his hand. Also, he wears a reddish-orange wreath. His scars on his head is got by Swiper. Dernière modification le 1530116940000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1530319440000
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Absolutely fantastic. The suspense is growing quite well. Also, on a side note, I had to reread this chapter because I was on a computer (I'm so used to reading on my phone that I can't do it on a PC. Lmaoo) Can't wait for next chappie! |
Thesoundofdrums « Censeur » 1530396300000
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We need a practical joker... Lol Ref: Rickson But with a dragon headed cane in his left paw Name: Rickson 'Rick' Age: 17 Gender: male Personality: smart, cunning, a loner, trickster, fun - loving, and caring. Power/Ability: invisibility/intangibility Backstory*: ever since getting into an accident when he was 10, he's had to use a cane. This is because his left leg was broken in several areas from a car crash that almost killed him, but killed his baby sister. His parents were devastated, and they sued the drunken mouse for hundreds of dollars, winning, and using most of the money to hold little Sabrina's funeral, on her second birthday. Rick was hit the worst, always wanting a sibling, and protecting her fiercely from anything that would hurt her - mainly from angry - looking pets, which tried to attack her and hurt him. He didn't find out about his power until a few months after her funeral, and he hated himself for it. He hated a lot of things, anything that would remind him of how he failed his sister, mainly. Ever since, he's been closed off, playing pranks to hide the pain within. He joins the group after a long internal argument with himself, afterwards joining when he feels a prompting from a mind he never thought he'd feel again - his sister. Now he joins to protect, using his hatred of vile things to help the love and caring of two friends who have been separated by - what he thinks - the epitome of all evil. A dark crystal. Skills*: hearing the dead - even if its only his sister - and swordfighting. He has two canes, one of which has a beautifully crafted katana within, the dragon's head hilt having ruby eyes and emerald, amethyst, and garnet like scales. His other cane looks similar, but without the sword within it. He snuck in his cane sword in the dead of night, using his powers to make it intangible and invisible. Extra*: he can use his power to make other people and things invisible and/or intangible, as long as they are close by. Around 5ft is his current limit, he keeps pushing himself farther each and every day. |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1530653400000
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Chapter 5 Though they had a plan, Akira's team decided to slow down and do more research on the crystals before storming into Ayame's tower. They were unsure of what the crystals were capable of and didn't want any more unfortunate events to occur. Akira asked permission to check through the storage closet, which was the size of a regular room. Since nobody had been there in a while, everything was messy and disorganized. As others were experimenting on a test rabbit, Akira had the revelation that there might be something capable of undoing the crystal's effects. She hadn't seen the effects that the crystal truly had on life forms, but she had a preview when Ayame ran off. Her mind flew back to the time she glimpsed Ayame's soul before she disappeared. That dark... "crack" on it... Akira continued to sort through various scattered objects when something caught her eye - a glow. She turned to the light in time to find a crystal. Unlike Ayame's crystal, this one was a soft blue, glowing vibrantly. Akira found that in the presence of this crystal, she didn't have the same sense of unease she had when she's found Ayame's crystal. Hesitantly, she reached for the glowing crystal, ready to run if needed. But when her paw made contact, the crystal didn't glow or emit a mist like its darker counterparts. Holding it close, Akira felt a sense of enlightenment and hope. She wondered if it might have any effect on the corrupted crystal as she returned to her friends. She approached one of the tables, where the test rabbit was being held for experimentation. It began to act strangely as soon as it came into contact with the crystal. It was more aggressive, snapping menacingly at anyone who came near and trying desperately to escape. Its fur began to darken and its eyes dyed yellow, catlike with slit pupils. After the experiment was finished, Akira moved the dark crystal away with a pair of tweezers and carefully touched the blue crystal to the rabbit's head. This time, the crystal reacted with a bright light. Akira squinted against the flash, eventually opening her eyes when the light finally died down. The rabbit's fur was fading back to white, and its eyes were normal. Akira grinned. This could actually work! "Hey!" She called back to the other mice. "Something happened!" As they approached the test subject curiously, Akira moved aside to make room for them. "Wait... I thought that the rabbit was corrupted by the crystal." Jackson commented confusedly, raising an eyebrow at the perfectly normal rabbit sitting in the test cage. "It was," Akira responded with a nod. She held up the blue crystal. "but this purified it." The mice around her began to whisper excitedly to one another. As gathered around the planning table to discuss what they should do, someone called out, "Wait, where's Ari?" Akira looked around. Ari wasn't anywhere to be seen. Worry began to build up inside her. Did Ari go missing too...? The other mice in the room spread out to search for her, but nobody was successful in finding her. Akira sighed, dread resting on her chest like a heavy stone. "We have to do something before everyone's gone." The other mice nodded in agreement. Deciding that they should do something, the group of mice began to brainstorm for a plan - they had to do something before something worse happened. With the new knowledge that the blue crystal could undo the effects of the dark one, they now had something to fight against the darkness and save Ayame. Akira traveled back through her memories with Ayame. She remembered most of the layout of the tower - the different levels and rooms. She sketched a layout of the tower for the rest of the mice to see, mentally noting that Ayame might have changed some of its features as she did so. The group figured out different strategies, ways to sneak inside unnoticed. Using one of her many teammate's powers, Akira duplicated the light crystal to create more, which all tested to be legitimate. After all of the preparations, everyone in the room was eager to get Ayame back, each mouse equipped with a light crystal. Akira looked around at her teammates, seeing hope in their eyes. She felt pride well in her chest, replacing the dread from before. She knew something good would happen soon. Smiling, she announced; "Okay. I think we're ready to go!" |
Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1530723180000
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confetti And now onto where this could either terribly backfire or the more likely Akira saves leh day with her friends! insert Powerpuff girls outro |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1530790500000
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Yes, blue is purity ^-^ *TARDIS disappears* |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1530802140000
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Akira: Magical girl, make up! *glitter sparkles owo* |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1530876420000
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Xavier: *gets covered in sparkles* ... What? |
Thesoundofdrums « Censeur » 1531085760000
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Me: *is also covered in glitter sparkles from Akira* ... Really? Styx: - Me: *turns and glares* Don't you DARE say anything. *points laser screwdriver at her threateningly* or else. Styx: *meekly nods, cowed* |
Leeeeeeeeeevi « Consul » 1531126440000
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Me: huehue Ari is missing!! Ari: I'm right here, you uncultured swine... Me: A-I meant in the fanfic >:(!! Ari: Whatever.. Be more specific next time.. thanks for making Ari so stubborn <3 *adds to favorite topics* Dernière modification le 1531186320000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1531695060000
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Me: *wiats for next chapter* Jareth (Trapped): check your spelling :/ Me: ???... Oh, I mean *waits for next chapter* Jareth ( Trapped): that's better. |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1531704480000
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Me: Sorry! I'll get it done soon to review with Bas! Also me: *scrolls youtube for the next hour* |
Basgetti « Consul » 1531705020000
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Cookie_kitten a dit : mood |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1531741620000
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Still stuck? Please don't let this die.. ... Hello? Anyone out there? Dernière modification le 1537671780000 |
Leeeeeeeeeevi « Consul » 1538161740000
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*warps through fanfiction* .......and i'm lost, just great |
Basgetti « Consul » 1538166360000
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i need more to edit queen please i beg of you |
Leeeeeeeeeevi « Consul » 1538172540000
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i dont know if there are still any applications left, but i'd like you to add this as a "miner" character name: Simeon {pronounced sim-EE-un} ref: this boi age: 18 gender: male personality: talkative, very nerdy, kind and sweet to people he hasn't met, serious when needed, annoying when he keeps talking, social, active, loves sports, very addicted to building and reading, gEEEEK, basically the opposite of ari. power/ability: invisibility. he can turn invisible for only 3 hours or less. he must wait 30 minutes in order to turn back invisible if he has been invisible for 3 hours. backstory*: when him and ari were young, they met in the streets when they were arguing when they bumped into each other. simeon was the first to apologize and they soon became friends. ari taught some important skills in fighting. after a while, they both chose what they wanted to be and what they wanted to do and left eachother. skills: he is only good in using guns and other mechanical items. he is also very agile and sneaky, but unfortunately, he finds many serious and sometimes dumb things hilarious and gets everyone caught or in trouble. extra: he uses contacts instead of glasses and loves to invent things. (also annoys ari 24/7) Dernière modification le 1540662300000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1538875260000
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We could always do a back story type thing. Or how the different auras surrounding one can change. Or, you know, something. Just giving random ideas to help with your writer's block. |
Leeeeeeeeeevi « Consul » 1541866920000
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is this fanfic dead or smth? |