@2353553 p6 @2935935 p6 @2915805 p5

Hidudelol a dit :

Trying hard to make maps, keeping getting rejected D:

We've all been there and done that, infact alot of us are still trying hard to get a higher perm as well (I am !). It's just a long hard road, eventually you'll make it ^^

Mousechris a dit :

This team doesn't want me in because how I may be good at reviewing and making maps I am also hated by pretty much every person in this team, but you can PM me the code and i'll review it ingame

This isn't the place to discuss how you were denied, aren't you in another group anyways? Also, a little advice, and excuse me for being blunt.

Mousechris a dit :

How I may be good at reviewing and making maps

If we liked your reviews you would be on the team, now wouldn't you? I don't think your reviews were good and I don't really feel like going back to explain why. Your attitude annoys me.

Mousechris a dit :

I am also hated by pretty much every person in this team

Maybe you should spend more time thinking over why people dislike you. Instead of making enemies you should try and make allies. Besides, you weren't denied because people "dislike you". So please stop making false assumptions without having evidence. Fxie isn't legit evidence either.

Hidudelol a dit :

Explain please? D: also it's been a while, can you review my maps?

Mousechris a dit :

You can PM me the code and i'll review it ingame

Lastly, and once again. It's just plane damn rude to come into our thread and ask someone else that isn't even on the team to review your maps knowing that we're here for the same purpose. This isn't the place to discuss such things so next time, for fucks sakes just pm him in-game, or take it to another group of reviewers.

Sorry, I got a little "unprofessional" there. It's just annoying, have a nice day.

Thanks Shadow, well said. :)

@694479 - Holomouse



Red X - Not consistent. The amount of bounce you get from vertical tramps or even slightly rotated tramps tend to be luck based. I have a suggestion on how to improve it but I’m not sure how to explain so I'll tell you in-game. (same tribu o/)
Green line (Path to cheese) - this didn’t seem consistent either. Try rotating the tramp maybe 3 - 7 degrees. Other than that, fun map.

@2921830 - Gameplaygeek
The beginning is luck and the line of cheese are unaligned. Looks like a Hulktitan map. Other than that there isn’t even much in the map to begin with. Try adding more ideas.

Sorry I've been sorta slow. More P3 will be reviewed soon. Keep up the good mapmaking everyone.

@2941053 p3

Wow, everyone here is so hard working!
Wanted to put this map up because I need help with a design to get back to the hole. ;~;

@2830160
P7

@2943298 - p8

@2920605-Shaman by Darklanturn


This is all you get.

Black arrow: Make this wider and move the entire middle thing to the right so that there's more space to build in the N.A.Z. If not this map is pretty ok.

@2933333-P7/Racing by Harnagia
Please improve on the general aesthetics. The ice grounds don't look appealing at all. You can see unaligned grounds under the left ice. Try to use stone or grass interchangably with the ice where possible. Also, I would suggest removing the starting funny-pinball-ice thing at the spawn, and make the spawn a little tunnel where the dynamic pinball-ice is, adding racable-stuff.. -.- Yes I'm doing this for racing. P7 maps cannot just focus on hardcore racing. We need gameplay too. Next, either make the pinball-ice on the top slower or just remove it completely. IMO it doesn't contribute much to gameplay and is very noob/newb-unfriendly. Align everything and improve on aesthetics. Nuff said.

@1299864-P7/P9 by Garybro


Black boxes: Try to elongate the grass like this (along with the tramp and move the ice). More newb friendly.


Some aesthetic improvements here.. Instead of the type of grass on top, make 2 of them and arrange it like the one on the bottom.
If I were eligible to vote I'd vote yes for P7. (No P9 cuz sham too nub for antigrav building :3)

@2930003-P7/P9 by Shadowwinter
Oh wow best map no improvements needed good bye.
P.S. this is P9 cuz collision :P

thanks dddin. so i should move the entire right half over a bit, should i also extend the NAZ with it?

Could Anyone test my map please ? :c

I hope this wont be ignored.
@2953073 P4

Sorry I haven't reviewed anything today. I kind of decided to just "take the day off' xD Everyone needs a break sometime so please don't bite my head off. I'll put out alot of reviews tomorrow to make up for today !

@2954318

Category: P4

Is there new members?

Mousechris a dit :

This team doesn't want me in because how I may be good at reviewing and making maps I am also hated by pretty much every person in this team, but you can PM me the code and i'll review it ingame

Im sorry but I had to say..
Your reviews were not that good to be honest, you may have the map making skill, but that does not mean that you can review maps to the same standard of your map making.
I dont hate you, not everyone in the group does, we just focus on the quality of the review, not personal things..

ALSO, sorry I havent reviewed maps in like a few days, school stuff. ; ;
Ill review a batch tomorrow or the day after hopefully!

Darklantern a dit :

thanks dddin. so i should move the entire right half over a bit, should i also extend the NAZ with it?

Yes please

People haven't check my p6 for a while, hint, hint?

@2955394
P7

@2955047 p7
@2952075 p7

700th post. :)