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| @2816998-P7 by Xabq Shorten the ice on the top right corner before hitting the tramp. If not that's all. (Or you can improve on the aesthetics as it looks pretty plain.) The bottom area is wasted so you may want to add something there.. Maybe lava can be a part of this map? I don't know. Interesting map that can be completed by normal mice.. :P @2590800-P7 by Imangrybird This concept is generally done countless times. So anyway, aesthetics here, you may want to lay a grass or stone ground in the big ice grounds as they aren't n-ice (get the pun?). Also, for the floor, try to perhaps make it a grass/stone ground, but insert a ice ground of the same width 5 pixels above it, under it. (I don't think you'll get what i mean). There is always a problem that the mice can get stuck (so this is very noob-unfriendly). I'm not sure how you can edit that (perhaps make a hole, or don't join the few ice grounds.. @2916595 (2)-P7/P9 by Arber  What I meant was, as you can see, the lava on the left touches mice but not grounds and the plain ground touches grounds but not mice. After that, you join them exactly at the same place, with the plain ground underneath the lava, on the right. Colour is too dark this time lol :3 Cool map. (pls don't submit again for 3rd time :C) |
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| @2722600 - Delatex The first thing I should actually point out is the scrolling. I think this map can be smaller. Scrolling on this map is very unneccessary. About the Alignements, please take a look at the Paint picture I made:  Now, to improve the Gameplay, you should think of improving the cheese part. I recommand you add some lava there or something that makes the map harder on the cheese part. Also, I don't see the Importance of the water on the end of the map. It might kill mice unfairly as long as it can just do nothing. Water Wjing is not very hard for Bootcamp players. You might want to remove it OR add a lava ground instead of the Chocolate ground so if they touch the lava they will be thrown to the Ice ground and fall into the Wood ground and if they jump in the right time, they can re-do it. Or else... Game over! :p Finally, I recommand that you remove the Top ground... It's just ugly to see and not neccessary on this kind of maps. Don't forget to larger the max left Wj ground so mice won't be able to pass through it just like that. @2930368 - Todorovski Honestly, most of this map is luck-based. And luck-based maps are not appreciated on the Bootcamp Rotation... So, I'll try to help you improve this... First, take a look at the picture and notice:  Red Circles means that this part of the map is just done very badly. For the max left Circle: On this part of the map you can simply jump into the Trampoline to reach the water part. I dunno if you made that on purpose. The second Red circle: this seems to be grounds spamming. Or at least the ground on that postion: _ Orange circles shows the lucky parts of the map. You can notice how a very bug part of the map is just luck-based. You can improve this by lowering the Lava's power. Or by changing that whole part. The max right part of the map is also luck-based and may Rage-quit too many players. Probably make it easier by making the distance between the two water grounds closer? Green circles are the original parts of the map, doesn't need any improvements. Finally, Black circles are there to point out missalignements. I think after all, this map is fine. Great chance to become a P3 after the edits. :] @2744259 - Carlcruz I think this map can just survive thanks to the last part of it (The part before the getting the cheese), but it still needs Tons of updates.  Red Circles show how badly this part of map was done. The max left part shows how easy it can be done... Make it harder by either adding more obstacles or lowering their lengh. The Red circle between the 2 Ice grounds if there to point out to unused space you left open. I believe if you close it up it would make the map harder which is good. Also, the Water Ground can be done without even going into the Tramp, sliding then touching the Ground under the cheese... I passed it by jumping right to the water and It wasn't that hard. Probably make the water ground higher (move it to the up). The max right red circles means that this part of the map is just too hard/ annoying. You should make the Chocolate ground bigger so even if someone Fails Wjing they can Wj over again and continue doing the map. It would be too boring to lose on such an easy part of the map and doing it all over again... Green Circles means that this part of the map is just fine, doesn't need Improvement. Black circles points out missaligenements and especially grounds that need to be shown. The ice grounds you putted are not very clear, unlike some others... Not too nice to see. The Thickness of some grounds are more than some others... And finally I would like to point out that the Return way doesn't seem to be very nice. I cannot exactly tell you what obstacles to add, that's where you should do your best and bring up original Ideas! :) @2921830 - Gameplaygeek Doesn't seem like a Completed bootcamp map for me. And I cannot create the half of the map for you neither, but I'll point out the most Important things on the map and edits you should add.  Red Circles shows how badly this part of the map was done. Putting 4 Cheese is spam. Spam is bad. Bad is deleted. The grounds that you can see under the Ice makes the map look noob-ish... The Ice Ground on the half of the Lava (on the 1st part of the map) is not very clear... Just move it up a little bit. JUST A LITTLE. The 2nd Ice block is just too big, looks like spam too. You might want to make it smaller or just remove it and complete making the map. The Black Circles demands you to add some decoration to them (Add a Ground into them like what you've done with the lava on the 1st part of the map). Green circles points out good parts of the map. After all, this map seems to be taking a lot of space... Move it to the right and continue building or else, this has no chance to be P3'ed! :/ @2941840 - Wangos Wow... Ummm... I never seen a more luck-based map than this '-'  Orange colored parts shows the luck-based parts of the map... To avoid these parts, I believe you will have to Re-create the whole part... And this is exactly what you won't do. So, let's see.. For the max left part I suggest that you either make the Trampoline's power lower, remove a bit of the Chocolate Ground or make the wood ground bigger. For the second part (max right) I think it's okay... Probably add a ground so they won't fall away and die because I can 100% guarentee you an empty room. For the last Orange part, this is just horrible. You should make it possible to go back throu a lava wall or I dunno. Because failing this part will require you to redo the very hard and annoying part just before it. I don't see anything special to improve on this map excpet that... Probably someone else might see a better way to improve this so ask a Map Crew member about this map to see how much he will rate it. U.U |
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