I could just edit Chapter 6... but nah.


[url=]Chapter 7[/url]
Kittywing's POV

11:01 pm... Better go to sleep now. After 12 minutes of sleeping I heard something really loud; which woke me up! I quickly ran to my mom's room.

"MOM!!"
"What? It's 11:13 go back to sleep"
"Can't you here the noise though?!??!?! Ugh! Take off your ear plugs!"

So my mom toke of her ear plugs and could hear the strange noise.

"Oh my gosh! What is that noise?!?" She then ran quickly outside

I, of course didn't follow her. I mean I don't wanna die! After a few minutes the noise stopped. My mom walked back in the house and said it was just a prank from our neighbors. So everyone got back to sleep after that.

The next morning Vivihi and I woke up to the mell of delicious cheese-waffles. Both of us walked downstairs to see mom making of course, cheese-waffles! They looked SO good! So we sat right down at the dinner table and started eating. While we were eating though, there was a knock on the door. I got up and opened the door and it was, Cute! We all welcomed her in and asked if she wanted some cheese-waffles. She said no, which is sad because these cheese-waffles are awesome! Did I tell you that my mom is also a chief? Anyways, I finished up eating breakfast so I could hang with Cute. We both went to the living room.

"Good morning Kitty! How are you?" Cute said
"I'm good! You?"
"Perfect! So I was wondering if you wanted to go to Mice Mall with me to spend our giftcards!"
"That's a great idea! When do you wanna go Cute?"
"After lunch maybe?"
"Sure!"

Yay! I get to go to Mice Mall with Cute! I just hope Ruby doesn't come with her boyfriend Zack. If she did this would be HORRIBLE! Well while we were waiting until 1:00 pm, we were drawing pictures of each other.

"Okay I'm done Kitty! What about you?"
"Hold on, I just need outline your hair then I'm done! Annnd done!"
"I'll show mine first"

So Cute showed her drawing of me and Oh my gosh it was beautiful! Now I'm just going to look like a fool when i show her my drawing. She has so much talent in that body! Well here I go...

"H-here's my drawing."
"OMG! That looks epic Kitty! You have certainly improved alot!"
"Stop. Your just saying that so I'll be happy."
"No I'm not. Listen Kitty, your a great artist. Stop bringing yourself down. You have nothing to worry about with your art because it's perfect."
"Oh, look at the time! It's 12:58. We better get going!"

So we both got in the car and Cute drove since she has her drivers licence. When we got to Mice Mall there were hundreds of mice! When I looked at the sign it was Mice Mall's Anniversary for being opened for 10 years! That's probably why there were alot of mice. When you walked in there was free samples, discounts for clothing and much more! The bad news was that Ruby was at Mice Mall! I could easily spot her blinged out phone! And her boyfriend, Zack was with her also! Let's hope Cute and I don't run into them....

nice story!

looks like u got ur comment. SO MNY FANFIC-NESS

More please!!!

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I could just edit Chapter 6... but nah.


[url=]Chapter 7[/url]
Kittywing's POV

11:01 pm... Better go to sleep now. After 12 minutes of sleeping I heard something really loud; which woke me up! I quickly ran to my mom's room.

"MOM!!"
"What? It's 11:13 go back to sleep"
"Can't you here the noise though?!??!?! Ugh! Take off your ear plugs!"

So my mom toke of her ear plugs and could hear the strange noise.

"Oh my gosh! What is that noise?!?" She then ran quickly outside

I, of course didn't follow her. I mean I don't wanan die! After a few minutes the noise stopped. My mom walked back in the house and said it was just a prank from our neighbors. So everyone got back to sleep after that.

Wanna die*
AWESOOME STORY! :D

Micefamilies a dit :

While we were eating though, there was a knock on the door. I got up and opened hte door and it was, Cute!

The door*

Vivihi a dit :

Wanna die*
AWESOOME STORY! :D
The door*

Dun you dare fix my spelling. In fanfic world there is no mistakes

jk thanks :p

HEH Welcome.

XD
Maybe you should use some writing program like Microsoft Word or something to check your spelling ;o Then copy and paste.

I SAW DAT EDIT!

And great idea. :p

LOL

Ofc I use Microsoft Word 2007. :p

I don't have Microsoft Word. :/ I'll just re-read to see if I mess anything up.

Okay then :p What other programs do you have?

I have WordPad.. I think I can use that

edit:It doesn't correct D:

I have that too. But idk if it can correct grammar and spelling mistakes D:

what an awesome story mice i cant wait till chapter 8

[url=]Chapter 8[/url]
Kittywing's POV

As we were walking to our fave store (Mouser Land) Cute bumped into Zack on accident.

"Oops! I'm sorry Zack!" Cute said
"It's okay"
"WHAT? IT'S NOT OKAY ZACKIE! Watch where you go next time idiot!" Ruby said rudely to Cute

Then Zack and Ruby kept on walking. Cute started to cry a little. I tried to comfort her.

"Cute please don't cry!"
"I'm s-sorry it's just that Ruby is SO mean!" Cute said still crying
"Well let's forget about her. It's Kitty and Cute day! Not Kitty, Cute, Ruby and Zack day!"
"Your right!"

So after that pep talk we walked into Mouser Land. But after a few hours it closed! We loved being there so much that we forgot about the time! But don't you think they would atleast kick us out of there?!?

"How are we ever getting out Kitty??"
"I don't know! We'll find a way though."

While we were finding a way to get out I saw some cute cheese bags for only $1.99!

"CUTE! CUTE!"

Huh, no response. I keep saying her name hopping she would finally say "What." But now, I'm REALLY scared! Where in the world of cheese is she?!?
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Sorry it's short >.< btw I added a flag on what the characters look like

o yus.

Thank you for all the nice comments *3*

Will post Chapter 9 later or tomorrow morning.

[url=]Chapter 9[/url]
Cutemckitten's POV

HOLY- Where am I?!? It looks like I went through a portal or something... but I can't remember. Well I guess I should start exploring I mean- I need to get out somehow!

Kittywing's POV

Maybe I should text Cute! That should get her attention

Cute where R U?!? Im worried about U!
I don't know! I'm just exploring this werid cave thingy...
Well how did you even get in to the werid cave thingy??
I think behind the front desk!"
Okay! I'm following you!

Then I turned off my cheese phone and put it in my pocket. Here I go... WHOOSH WOOSH! That was the sound as I jumped in the portal.
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Whoa!! This does look like a werid cave thingy! Now I have to find Cute. Shouting should do it.

"CUTE! TELL ME WHERE YOU ARE!!"
"IM OVER HERE!" She yelled back.

She was obviously close by becuase I could hear good. When I finally got near her she was staring at a crystal on a rock that was kinda tall


"What is this Kitty?"
"Looks like a crystal to me. Hey, there's some writen underneath the crystal!"
"I'll read it."


~End of Chapter 9~

P.S What do you think the message should be? :p

;o c: luv it

Xxxrubyxxx a dit :

;o c: luv it

lol thanks.

Micefamilies a dit :

P.S What do you think the message should be? :p

I needz a few ideas because I dunno what .o. sooo....