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Sirusthemice
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http://i.imgur.com/kGsPELQ.png
sigh.
more churian.
heeeeeere we go.
inspired by this song
( what happened to churel's coffin )
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http://i.imgur.com/lfMGMzJ.png
I was listening to sad music and I started to cry ;U;

I suck at drawing.. :(

Edit: Lol not really I just forget to put the background on sai sometimes XDD
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Chapter 2
The sky and stars

The others walked through the city for a good 20 minutes, trying to avoid the presence of Terbian at every corner.
Shard was leading the group, suddenly, he stopped right in his tracks, which in turn, made the others stop as well, Shard listened to his surroundings.
Foxie leapt in front, willing to sacrifice herself if anything were to attack. The sound of footsteps echoed through the walls of the surrounding buildings.
Abrielle grabbed onto Foxies arm, Foxie squinted at her, shrugging her off. Shard and Foxie continued to look around, when they saw something walking out of the shadows of a nearby building.
A tan-coloured mouse with dark blue hair and headphones, spotted the group and immediately leapt back, seeing their serious faces.
Foxie stood to her full height, "Oh, we thought you were someone else, come on out.". The mouse walked slowly towards the group, an uneasy look on her face.
She stammered a little, "I-I u-um.... Hi" Foxie noticed that the mouse wasn't as old as the rest of the group, "Hey, what's your name?", Foxie asked.
The mouse looked around, still uneasy, "Uh, I'm Luna...", at this, the other Luna's face, who was with them before, lit up, the mouse continued, "But, please, call me Starzie"
Foxie considered a thought, "Hey, you want to come with us? It's really not safe here." Starzie nodded, "I was attacked by some purple shadows, not sure what they were."
Churel and Galax were hiding in a nearby building, listening to their conversation, "Ok, when I give you the signal, jump out of this window.", Churel instructed.
Galax looked at her in disgust, "Why?! Won't I hurt myself?". Churel shrugged, "Nah, Terbian will give you a nice fluffy purple pillow to land on."
Galax lit up, "R-really?", at this, Churel laughed, "Nope, not really", and before Galax could react, Churel shoved him out the window.
Foxie detected something falling, she flew as fast as she could and caught Galax from mid air, Churel witnessed this and gave Terbian the signal that the plan was in motion.
Terbian flew down to meet Churel, he stood next to her and observed the commotion below the building. He laughed menacingly at the sight.
"Finally, our plan is in motion, even better, the plan is with you...", Terbian smiled at Churel. She shot him an unamused look.
"Terbian, that's not funny", she snapped. Terbian looked down, "I meant, this plan wouldn't be as good if I weren't carrying it out with you..."
"Nice joke, anyway, keep focused, please.",Churel smirked. They both looked down at the group, to find they were gone. Churel angrily stared at Terbian, baring her teeth.
Foxie flew down, Galax grasping to her for dear life. Shard didn't look at all pleased at this sight. He brushed Galax off Foxie, quickly.
Galax coughed, "Sorry for the abrupt entrance, but, I was chased by those horrible purple things!", Galax whined. Abrielle and Cherry looked at one another.
"Well uh, do you wanna like, come with us?", Abrielle suggested. Cherry nodded along with her suggestion.
Galax smiled, "Of course! I'd love to fight against that horrible mouse, creating those purple things."
Foxie muttered under her breath, "Gosh, it's like he's too enthusiastic"
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oh my god this is turNING INTO ABSOLUTE PERFECTION oh my god
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Watch out Foxie's team o.o
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Galax can't be trusted! But I suppose it's Terbian controlling him, didn't he possess him?

Anyway, nice chapter!
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Evil plan is evil.. I just love Churel's personality .. .. so frickin epic
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Smalltoes a dit :
Galax can't be trusted! But I suppose it's Terbian controlling him, didn't he possess him?

Anyway, nice chapter!

he acts pretty terrified so i hope they'll let is slip.
or else shit will most likely go down.

Ilingirl a dit :
Evil plan is evil.. I just love Churel's personality .. .. so frickin epic

everybody loves evil plans mhmm
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Sirusthemice a dit :


he acts pretty terrified so i hope they'll let is slip.
or else shit will most likely go down.
everybody loves evil plans mhmm

Shit will indeed go down, yes.

(Evil plans FTW!)
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#SHOX, REALIZE THAT FRAUD.

REALIZE.
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Shardpixel a dit :
#SHOX, REALIZE THAT FRAUD.

REALIZE.

nah, shox ain't going to have all of the stage time.
churian will get some too.

step up yer game, twit. ♥
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Sirusthemice a dit :


nah, shox ain't going to have all of the stage time.
churian will get some too.

step up yer game, twit. ♥

.____________.
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Shardpixel a dit :


.____________.

lel shard dat poker face
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Chapter 3
Suspicions

As they walked on, deeper into the heart of the city, Galax couldn't stop asking questions, Foxie grew tired, trying to contain her anger.
She decided to do a head-count, before they went any further, "Ok! Gather round, I need to check we're all here!", Foxie announced.
Everyone lined up, to make it easier for Foxie to count. She walked down the line, counting each mouse, until she realised something.
Foxie looked around, "Hey, has anyone seen Abrielle?", the others looked around, some shrugged and others started to panic.
Skylar thought for a moment, then spoke up, "Abrielle is very attracted to pretty things, I suggest we search near gardens and anything else that she might find interesting."
The rest of the group nodded, and decided to split up, Foxie and Shard headed to a nearby garden, Cream, Luna and Starzie headed to the monument, located at the heart of the city and Galax, Skylar and Cherry went to a gallery. Foxie and Shard looked around for a while, then sat down on the garden bench, to think.
Foxie sighed, "All this stress, just to bring down one guy..."
Shard held her hand, "We can do this, you need to loosen up."
"I suppose, I mean, I haven't been able to even talk to you alone, for a while.", Foxie sighed again.
"Well, we can talk here, it seems that Abrielle isn't here, but she could be coming, so we can talk while we wait.", Shard suggested, then kissed her.
She squeaked, as she wasn't expecting it, but soon got used to it. She giggled a little.
Meanwhile, Cream, Luna and Starzie, were heading to the central monument, Cream couldn't resist a little bit of small talk.
"So... how are you guys", Cream said, Luna stared at her, unsure of what to say, her feelings were mixed about the situation at hand.
"I guess I'm sorta worried for Abrielle...", Luna muttered. Starzie put her paw on Luna's shoulder, a look of deep sadness on her face.
"Well, um, when I get sad, I look up at the stars...", Starzie said, looking up at the sky, unaware she was about to walk straight into a pole.
Starzie rubbed her head, then started crying. Luna and Cream ran over to help her, Cream went off to find a bandage, as Starzie was bleeding quite a bit.
At this time, Galax, Skylar and Cherry were in the gallery, calling Abrielle's name. Skylar sighed, "We'll never find her."
Galax muttered, "Maybe we're better off without her...", Skylar and Cherry gasped at the same time.
Cherry couldn't believe what he said, "How could you say something like that?! Are you crazy?", Galax laughed.
"Well maybe I am, but if you really want to find her, I ain't got no problem with that", Galax sighed.
Skylar looked out of the window, to find Abrielle with another mouse, who looked almost similar to Abrielle.
"Guys! Out there! She's over there!", Skylar shouted.
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Suspense. e.e

Can't wait for chapter 4!

-Squeels-
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can i be in it? i wana be a person they found and i helped them :I
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Jaedee a dit :
can i be in it? i wana be a person they found and i helped them :I

Im pretty sure they don't need anymore charatcers..Tho I really want to be one because I love this Fanfic..
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OGOD I NOTICED THE CHAPTER HERE. .
Hope ish there .o.
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Chapter 4
New companions

Skylar pushed her way through the glass doors of the gallery and ran to Abrielle.
Abrielle was busy, talking and gossiping with the cream coloured mouse walking by her side, unaware of Skylar approaching quickly.
Galax and Cherry stared out of the windows, still standing within the gallery and open-mouthed by Skylar's incredible speed.
When Skylar had reached the pair, she bent down on her knees, gasping for breath. Abrielle stared down at Skylar, along with the cream mouse standing with her.
Skylar stood up after a few minutes of gasping, then began her sentence, "Hey, we've been searching everywhere for you!"
She turned to face the cream mouse, "And you are...?"
The cream mouse replied, her powerful voice made Skylar jump, "Oh heyyyy! I'm Hope!"
The echo of Hopes voice rang throughout the entire city, Skylar analysed the similarities between Abrielle and Hope, not much differences were obvious to her.
Skylar stood, slightly absent minded for a few seconds, but after a short while, she realised that Hope could be of some use to their group.
Meanwhile, Shard and Foxie were still waiting on the park bench, still kissing. Foxie broke apart from Shard and her ears twitched.
She rose to her full height, eyes widened and her ears still searching. She could hear the echo of a loud, sassy voice in the distance.
Shard nudged her slightly, unaware of the voice that Foxie could hear.
"Are you ok?", Shard questioned, still oblivious of what Foxie was hearing.
Foxies eyes became relaxed, then turned to Shard, "I think Skylars team found Abrielle."
Shard stood up, unstable on his feet, he had become stiff from sitting on the bench, "Well, lead the way!"
At this moment, Starzie was being bandaged carefully by Cream, her chicken handing her a new roll each time she ran out.
Cream was thankful for her chicken, sticking by her through the worst of times, she considered that the chicken could have just left her at any time, but she was lucky enough for it to stay.
Once Cream was done, she stared, admiring her handiwork. Starzie patted her forehead and could only mutter, "Thank you"
Starzie had grown slightly weak from blood loss, but Cream knew she would quickly recover.
Luna looked up at the sky, it was darkening at an alarming rate, "Guys we should probably find the others before dark, it's not safe at night."
Starzie and Cream also looked up, then agreed to search for the rest of the group.
Luna started to lead the group, Cream and Starzie following closely behind. Luna knew the city like the back of her paw and she knew the safest places to stay.
However, what the three of them didn't know, is that they were always being watched.

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Sorry it's been a long time, I totally forgot I still had a fanfic O.O"
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First one to see the 4th chapter!
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