@2951802 - P7

@2371153 - P4 or P9

@2921644 - P7
@2836687 - P9

@2974387 - P3

There's someone getting voted on now I think.

@2921012 - P5
@1514464 - P4

When will I know if I'm accepted?

@2969449 - P9

Ummmm. Reveiws please ?

Ricardotato - @2463313
Suggestions for the art:

Alignment!! There are several components in your art that appear to be misaligned.
- The eyes
- The “ear part” of the headphones are not aligned with each other
- The circle that makes up the top part of the earphones
- The yellow circle that makes up the upper shape of the smile.
- The face is unaligned with the smile

I’ve added some quick tips on how to align on the later part of this post. C:
Also, the headphones seem a little off to me somehow. Like they’re kind of… small? Your style works just fine with the map, although making the ear part of the headphones might make it feel more proportionate. ^^

If you’re interested in how I would make the headphones, here’s a sample XML:
http://pastebin.com/vKMMPWZ4

Here’s one more tip: Don’t make your art so large. D:

I know it’s hard to keep it tiny, but large statues really limit the kind of gameplay you can put in a map.
Sorry, I don’t have any ideas on gameplay for your map the way it is now. The art takes up so much room and due to its size; it’s hard to sham on the right side of the map without going off-screen.

PS. I like the music player in your map. <:

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Sapphiretnr - @1573459

A little alignment always takes maps a step further. :D


The ground marked with a blue X is a ground you can set to grass, because this ground looks nicer by itself than most of the other grounds, as well as set the X value to 400 and the width to 800 to be completely centered in the map. The entire map appears to be off-center, I suggest using Temple’s map shifter to move the entire “Hollywood” sign to the left. About -40 on the X value should do.

The area with a black circle shows where you can replace those grounds with one angled ground. Seeing as how you chose to do this method, here’s a quick tutorial on how to align grounds as well as add angles:


You can change any number you want.
X = Moves it left or right. (The lower the number, the more it shifts to the left)
Y = Moves up or down. (The lower the number, the higher up it moves)
Z = Moves on top or behind other grounds. (The lower the value, the more it is hidden)
L = Stands for the length. Makes a ground skinny/fat.
H = Stands for height. Makes a ground tall/short
Rotation = Allows you to give an angle to grounds. This should help you out the most in your map, so I underlined where you can change it in yellow.

All of the numbers can be changed by typing over them, with the exception of the Z value, which you will have to use the – and + buttons to change.

By manipulating the X and Y values, you can place grounds aligned with each other by giving them the same X value, but different Y values, or the same Y value, but different X values. I suggest experimenting with this in map editor since it’s tough to explain. x.x”

Also, here’s another Hollywood map I’ve seen: @2969209
You might be able to take a few ideas from it. ^^ I thought it was quite good. Note that the actual Hollywood sign is white and all the letters are in capitals.

@2869817
@2920586

Both p4, sorry for not being specific.

Metalxmusic a dit :

@2869817
@2920586

When subbmitting maps, use the correct format.
@code and what category the map is in.

Wecwec a dit :

When subbmitting maps, use the correct format.
@code and what category the map is in.

Don't worry. I'll sort these into the correct categories. Our deepest core value is to help other mapmakers. It seems like such a petty thing to deny someone just because his syntax is incorrect.

CtG when could i know if i am accepted? :C

I will post an announcement when there are enough votes.

i love this thread
@1561331 P4
@2981763 /room racing

@2790463 (racing)

Grace reviewing your map as soon as im finished studying

Zakros a dit :

You talk like if you were Picasso.
Could you draw one?

Ohgod, logos have atleast something to do with the actual thing, Apple has an apple icon, Windows has a window shape to its logo, even transformice has cheese/mice.
This is just a blade-thing with 3 circles in it.
Ps: Yes Im picasso
Ps2:Yes I could draw one, I suggest to draw one when I was in the team.