Cursis a dit :

Is this good outline

What is that, exactly?

Cursis a dit :

Is this good outline

It needs ears.
And a face.
And tail.
And arms.

Then we can work on it.

Zetsuen a dit :

It needs ears.
And a face.

no it doesnt i dont add those till draw the mouse so if i drew the ears for nothing if theyre covered

Cursis a dit :

no it doesnt i dont add those till draw the mouse so if i drew the ears for nothing if theyre covered

Oh, okay.

Zetsuen a dit :

Oh, okay.

ok ty

Hetaliagal a dit :

oh, like an outline of the drawing without the anatomy joints and stuff? sure, i'll get it done sometime.

Thanks so much Emily

Go hard on me, my art is horrible anyways XD

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Hazeclaw a dit :

Go hard on me, my art is horrible anyways XD

Your art isn't horrible uh the first thing I noticed is that the mouse's head is facing to the side but the rest of the body is to the front except for the feet so it kinda lacks consistency

also the arms / shoulders area is just really awkward and skinny

The tail is kinda fat and it should be really skinny and without little furry marks on it since there's no fur on the tail

The feet should be the same color as the tail

The fact that it has breasts is just awkward in itself, but, it's just kinda incorrect since the breasts are exposed and there are no nipples ANYWAY I just wouldn't do breasts on mice

Also the feet are really big and look like a kangaroo (I'm kinda guilty of this myself sometimes)

Other than these things I think it's cute and I wouldn't get discouraged because you're a good artist

^^; Thank you for helping.

Hazeclaw a dit :

^^; Thank you for helping.

No problem, you don't have to take any of my critiques if you don't want to, anyway, please don't feel pressured to do so

Your art style is very cute :3

i need tips on how to draw arms, sorry it looks messy
edit i forgot to draw a foot, wow

Shoot me with it: http://i.imgur.com/yKW27uL.png

Soakitup a dit :

No problem, you don't have to take any of my critiques if you don't want to, anyway, please don't feel pressured to do soYour art style is very cute :3

^^; Dont worry, it will only help.

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[/url] Dont worry, my art is bad, go hard on it. X3

Vulli a dit :

The arm is way too low, try to imagine where the shoulders would be on the mouse

Also try to keep the tail a more uniform width, it shouldn't be so fat on the bottom and that thin towards the end, mouse tails are generally the same amount of skinny throughout

thanks i erased the tail, im going to redo it later.
http://i.imgur.com/RLJA42t.png

now im having trouble placing the ears and feet

Morpmorp a dit :

thanks i erased the tail, im going to redo it later.
http://i.imgur.com/RLJA42t.png

now im having trouble placing the ears and feet

I think it would be useful to try practising mouse anatomy, by tracing on outline of a photograph of a mouse.

1) Thighs should be smaller. Also, the butt should stick out more (I'm assuming it's sitting down).
2) If you compare the photograph of the mouse, its ears are a lot smaller. They're also round, rather than pointy. Try drawing different sizes and types of ears to see what suits your style of drawing best.
3) Not really helpful, but placement of arms tends to be around the middle (or a bit higher) of the mouse's body.
4) Mice don't really have necks, it's more half-body, half-head. A lot of people draw necks on mice, so if that's your style, then just ignore my corrections.
5) Again, not really helpful, but I found that the ears tend to be further up the mouse's head.

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Also, I'd really appreciate it if someone could drop some CC on this, your comments were really helpful last time. ;w;

Hmm, so I went through this thread and I didn't find any criticism(can'tspell) on that artwork I posted, soo maybe I can have some on this one?


I'm really trying to improve and everything and these critiques here are all very thorough so...

idk wut to think, it looks good except the nose/mouth area looks weird

May I please have a critique?


I'm still looking forward to shading critiques and hints, but I think I would like an anatomy critique too please? I am trying to improve after all.