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Holy shit that suspense.
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Chapter 9
Hidden strength

Skylar and Cherry prepared to fight the purple demons, who had most likely been summoned by Terbian. Cherry readied her fangs, ready to deliver some nasty bites.
Skylar only had her fists to fight with, but all of a sudden, she was picked up by Cherry, who flew in the air using the wings on her head.
Cherry swung Skylar around, to defeat a huge number of demons, then put Skylar down to recover from being spun around numerous times.
"Thanks for the warning" Skylar snapped. "Sorry" apologized Cherry. More demons spawned out of thin air, and both of the mice soon realised.
Terbian was in the same tunnel as they were, they just didn't know where, this pressurized them even more.
Cherry started to get afraid, Skylar saw her fear, but decided to be brave. She charged at a phantom at top speed, and Skylar started to glow green.
Cherry saw her bravery and also started to charge towards a phantom, and she as well glowed, but she glowed a light red color.
They saw each other glowing and decided to join their glowing auras together, so they did, and at this they glowed even brighter.
They created a huge explosion which took out all the phantoms and blasted the wall, revealing the other tunnels paths.
Abrielle, Cream and Luna were recovering from the damage Terbian did, when a huge blast knocked them back.
They looked through the hole the blast had created and saw Cherry and Skylar standing in the other tunnel.
"Did you guys do that?!" Cream said, surprised at what she had witnessed. "I- I think so?" Skylar said, slightly shaken from the action she had performed.
Cherry started to receive a painful headache and fell to her knees, the rest of the group tried to help her, but within seconds, the headache had vanished.
"What was that?", Luna asked. "It's Foxie J... she's trying to communicate with mind power, I think she helped us defeat the phantoms...", Cherry said.
Skylar put two and two together, "That's partly true, I think she can sense our bravery, that could have been the signal for her to help us".
Abrielle blurted out, "That means that Foxie and Shard aren't dead!!" she had a loud voice and it often echoed through the tunnels.
Cream thought about it, "They could very well be alive, but that doesn't mean they're not in danger, Terbian thought they were dead, he's obviously involved in their disappearance"
"I think it's better if we all go in one big group, safety in numbers right?", Cherry suggested. Everyone agreed and nodded.
"Well? What are we waiting for? I suggest we go down the tunnel they went down, we're bound to find something", Abrielle said.
And so they set off for the search of Shard and Foxie.
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Stahp it with your suspense omfg.
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Chapter 10
Deep Trouble

Shard awoke from what seemed to be a deep sleep, but realised he had been cuffed to a wall. He turned his head around to try and spot Foxie.
Foxie had been cuffed to the opposite wall, but a purple aura was surrounded the cuffs she was stuck in, "What's that purple stuff?", Shard asked.
"It's an annoying power block, I can't use power to break out of here", Foxie said, trying to squirm out of the cuffs. She growled with disappointment.
Terbian appeared, floating in front of them, he gave an evil smile, to see the state Foxie was in, pleased him.
"Oh, look at you, helpless Foxie, doesn't feel good to be trapped, does it", Terbian taunted. Foxie struggled even more, she wanted to kill Terbian even more.
"I'll kill you! You monster!", Foxie shouted, enraged. "Well, you won't because I'm going to kill you first...", Terbian laughed in an evil way.
Shard spoke up, "Foxie will deal with you, no one like you will kill her." Terbian turned around and gave Shard a stare, "Oh, you can't survive this then?"
"She's stronger than you, hopefully", Shard hesitated. This made Terbian laugh again, "Looks like you have no faith in your princess after all. Anyway, farewell."
Foxie looked at Shard, "Princess?". Shard blushed, "I, um... that doesn't mean anything".
Foxie became confused, "Terbian can read minds, you're keeping a secret fr-", her words were cut off as the room started to fill with purple water.
Shard panicked, "What are we gonna do?! We got to get out of these cuffs!" Foxie sadly replied, "My powers are useless in this power block, hey wait a minute..."
Foxie looked at the power block, "Power blocks aren't water proof, we have to wait until the water reaches us." Shard could only hope she was right.
As they waited for the water to rise up to free them, they decided to casually chat for a few minutes. They told jokes and kept their spirits up.
"You know Fox, you can be really cute sometimes.", Shard blurted out. His face turned a bright red and so did Foxie's.
"Oh, um, I guess I can say the same about you", Foxie said, slightly smiling. At that, the room fell silent, they both felt awkward.
Finally, the water rose to their feet, Foxie instructed, "The power block is on my wrists, so we might have to hold our breath for a while." she looked up at her wrists, pinned above her head.
Shard nodded, and some more waiting was due, the water reached their necks and when they were about to be submerged, Foxie said, "Hold your breath now!"
Shard and Foxie could barely see each other in the water and when the water reached her wrists, the power block stayed, Foxie couldn't believe it.
Shard saw what was going to happen, but then, he started to glow a deep red, and ripped his wrists out of the cuffs. Foxie had already passed out from running out of breath.
He swam to Foxie and freed her, and then located an exit. Once he was out, he carried Foxie out to safety so she could wake up.
Shard sat next to Foxie, when suddenly she started coughing, she had awoken. She saw Shard, smiled, then hugged him.
"Thanks for saving me, I'm sorry my prediction was incorrect." Foxie wept a little. Shard accepted her apology, "Don't be to hard on yourself." Foxie looked up at him.
Shard stared into her eyes for a while, and then kissed her.
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Ejaffa a dit :
Chapter 10
Deep Trouble

Shard awoke from what seemed to be a deep sleep, but realised he had been cuffed to a wall. He turned his head around to try and spot Foxie.
Foxie had been cuffed to the opposite wall, but a purple aura was surrounded the cuffs she was stuck in, "What's that purple stuff?", Shard asked.
"It's an annoying power block, I can't use power to break out of here", Foxie said, trying to squirm out of the cuffs. She growled with disappointment.
Terbian appeared, floating in front of them, he gave an evil smile, to see the state Foxie was in, pleased him.
"Oh, look at you, helpless Foxie, doesn't feel good to be trapped, does it", Terbian taunted. Foxie struggled even more, she wanted to kill Terbian even more.
"I'll kill you! You monster!", Foxie shouted, enraged. "Well, you won't because I'm going to kill you first...", Terbian laughed in an evil way.
Shard spoke up, "Foxie will deal with you, no one like you will kill her." Terbian turned around and gave Shard a stare, "Oh, you can't survive this then?"
"She's stronger than you, hopefully", Shard hesitated. This made Terbian laugh again, "Looks like you have no faith in your princess after all. Anyway, farewell."
Foxie looked at Shard, "Princess?". Shard blushed, "I, um... that doesn't mean anything".
Foxie became confused, "Terbian can read minds, you're keeping a secret fr-", her words were cut off as the room started to fill with purple water.
Shard panicked, "What are we gonna do?! We got to get out of these cuffs!" Foxie sadly replied, "My powers are useless in this power block, hey wait a minute..."
Foxie looked at the power block, "Power blocks aren't water proof, we have to wait until the water reaches us." Shard could only hope she was right.
As they waited for the water to rise up to free them, they decided to casually chat for a few minutes. They told jokes and kept their spirits up.
"You know Fox, you can be really cute sometimes.", Shard blurted out. His face turned a bright red and so did Foxie's.
"Oh, um, I guess I can say the same about you", Foxie said, slightly smiling. At that, the room fell silent, they both felt awkward.
Finally, the water rose to their feet, Foxie instructed, "The power block is on my wrists, so we might have to hold our breath for a while." she looked up at her wrists, pinned above her head.
Shard nodded, and some more waiting was due, the water reached their necks and when they were about to be submerged, Foxie said, "Hold your breath now!"
Shard and Foxie could barely see each other in the water and when the water reached her wrists, the power block stayed, Foxie couldn't believe it.
Shard saw what was going to happen, but then, he started to glow a deep red, and ripped his wrists out of the cuffs. Foxie had already passed out from running out of breath.
He swam to Foxie and freed her, and then located an exit. Once he was out, he carried Foxie out to safety so she could wake up.
Shard sat next to Foxie, when suddenly she started coughing, she had awoken. She saw Shard, smiled, then hugged him.
"Thanks for saving me, I'm sorry my prediction was incorrect." Foxie wept a little. Shard accepted her apology, "Don't be to hard on yourself." Foxie looked up at him.
Shard stared into her eyes for a while, and then kissed her.

This is fricking epic! ^_^
Including those #shox moments! xD
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Too much #shox...
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*Reading* FOR ONCE I THINK I KNOW WHAT JUST HAPPENE-

*Finishes reading*

._.

NEVERMIIIIIIIIND!
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*makes babys with Jeffrey*
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Anniebuscus a dit :


This is fricking epic! ^_^
Including those #shox moments! xD

hi patrick
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Niceifarted a dit :


hi patrick

...?
I don't get it.
Anyways, can't wait for more! ^_^
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omg i cant wait for more its such a wesome fanfic

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*makes babys with Jeffrey*

can i name one of da babies? lolwat
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ew no there mine
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Chapter 11
Slow Motion

It was like the whole world had slowed down for Shard and Foxie. The kiss felt it could've lasted forever.
They heard voices coming from the distance of the tunnel and broke their kiss immediately, the last thing they wanted was to be spotted.
Both of them recognised the voices, but one boomed above them all, it was obviously Abrielle.
As the rest of the group reached Shard and Foxie's location, they immediately stared with awe. Shard and Foxie looked at each other, confused.
Shard was still holding tight onto Foxie, his arms wrapped around her waist, almost like a koala. Foxie brushed herself off Shard.
"I, um, we...", Foxie stuttered. "She was just thanking me because I saved her", Shard butted in. The rest looked at one another.
"Well, on that note, did you guys find Terbian?", Luna asked. "Actually, we were captured by him and he attempted to drown us", Foxie replied.
Abrielle looked confused, "Why didn't you just bust out with your magic?", she stared at the drips rolling off their fur.
"Foxie was cuffed to a wall, the cuffs were cursed with a power block, her power was totally useless", Shard explained.
Cream became curious, "How did you get out then?" Shard was proud to answer, "I became some kind of brave hero and broke out suddenly, then I saved Foxie before she died. I couldn't watch her die, I had to do something, I was glowing a dark red color when it all happened", when Shard had stopped his explanation, his face had turned red yet again.
Cherry noticed his red face, "I always see you with a red face around Foxie, something happened..." Shards eyes widened. The group stared at him with much curiousity.
Foxie has a hostile look on her face at this point, then, without warning, she shouted, "Stop!!", the group had no idea what was going on.
Foxie turned around, faster than anyone had ever seen. All of a sudden, everything went in slow motion. Foxie was pointing her hand towards the reappeared Terbian.
Terbian had been trying to ambush them, but Foxie had been too quick to notice him. The group were floating in the air, but moving very slowly.
"It's like... there's no gravity", Skylar said, dreamily. Terbian seemed to be attempting to talk, but Foxie had sealed his mouth.
Foxie released her power, blasting Terbian into a wall and dropping the group onto the floor, "Sorry for that sur-" Foxie was about to apologize when Terbian grabbed her neck and attempted to strangle her. Abrielle watched with anger, as she saw Foxie struggling to free herself from Terbians grip. Abrielle started to glow pink, ran towards the chaos and delivered a powerful punch to Terbian.

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Sorry for the long wait ;.;
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Ejaffa a dit :

Sorry for the long wait ;.;

It was worth the wait! Awesome chapter!
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YEEEEYYY
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Chapter 12
The change of everything

Abrielle couldn't believe the sudden burst of strength and energy, the others stared in awe.
Terbian was about to disappear to form another tactic, but not before taking Foxie with him. He grabbed Foxie and turned into purple smoke, vanishing without a trace.
At this, Shard started to panic, "Oh my god, what am I going to do without her, I need to get her back" Luna soon grew agitated by Shards panicking.
"What is it with you? Why can you not live without her?", Luna snapped. Shard sighed, knowing he had to face the embarrassing but beautiful truth.
"Ok... I kissed Foxie", Shard admitted, his face glowed with a rosy haze. "Wow, I guess we were all right.", Skylar muttered.
Cherry started to think, "Hey, Terbian took Foxie but he doesn't take one of us, doesn't that seem a little weird?". The rest of their faces turned into realisation.
Shard looked down, "What if Terbian loves Foxie... I'll never see her again if he does." Abrielle walked up to him, "I don't think he does, he just tried to strangle her..."
Cream noticed a glittering shine reflecting off the floor. She cautiously walked away from the group and saw that the shine was being reflected off a purple gem.
Skylar noticed Cream crouching and walked towards her. She prodded her in the back with a sharp claw. Cream hissed at her in a whisper.
"What?", Cream snapped. "Whatcha looking at?", Skylar said, bending over her shoulder to catch a glimpse of the object.
Cream showed it to her, Skylars eyes widened, "Looks valuable". Cream hissed, "We aren't selling it! Look, it's purple, an obvious sign of Terbian"
While the two were having a conversation about the gem, the rest of the group had fallen into a deep arguement about whether Terbian loved Foxie or not.
Meanwhile, Foxie had found herself in a room, with Terbian standing in front of her, a grim look on his face.
"I have an offer for you, Foxie...", Terbian said, the grim look remained on his face. Foxie didn't want to hear it, she blasted a powerful beam, almost roasting Terbian alive.
Terbian growled, "Let me finish first, I promise this is an offer you cannot resist." Foxie was about to blast again, but then considered the possibilities of the offer.
She frowned, "Ok, fine, let me hear it." Terbian smiled, showing every single one of his sharp teeth, "Join me, and we can rule the world, together."
Foxie opened her mouth, but Terbian continued before she had to say anything, "Me and you, the most powerful mice on earth, we would be unstoppable."
Foxie muttered, "Un-unstoppable..." Terbian knew he had caught her, "Yes! Yes! Me and you! Every mouse has a certain magical aura, we can take it from them!"
"Are you saying we could be even stronger....", Foxie started to like the idea. Terbian nodded, "And we can do this together, imagine, the power just flowing through your veins!"
Foxie looked at her own paws, she reckoned they didn't feel powerful enough, she started to laugh manically.
She knew she would become drunk with power, as Terbian did, but she was too psyched to care.
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FOXIE DON'T BECOME A SHARD FROM LOST.

YOU'RE WAY BETTER THAN THAT.
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I would like to ship Foxie and Terbian but then everybody who ships #Shox would hate me so I'm just going to say that villan and hero moment is cool
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Ye


BEST CHAPTER BESIDES MY HUN HENRY ONE
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Iwuvcheesed a dit :
I would like to ship Foxie and Terbian but then everybody who ships #Shox would hate me so I'm just going to say that villan and hero moment is cool

I'd quite like to ship Foxie and Turbian... It'd be a change, wouldn't it?

BUT DON'T DO IT FOXIE! STAY WITH YOUR REAL FRIENDS!

(These chapters keep getting better and better.)
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