Angelflute a dit :

you have an unique style (sorry for my english) *throws apples in the air and runs* EDIT: the fanfiction is awesome

Thank you! ^_^
I kinda did Meifee pretty quick, so that's why it kinda looks sucky.
Anyways, I had made my choice and I'll do the 14th chapter now.

Chapter 14: The Exiled Warrior

Lillithia felt something weird. She felt uneasy. Was it a dark spirit? Close enough. It was a spirit of a lost and an exiled warrior.
"Erm... who is... this?!" Foxie J turned back and saw it.
"I'm Meifee." the spirit answered. This spirit didn't look like those ordinary spirits of darkness. "Don't enter this area. It's cursed. There I died in a very brutal way."
"Slain by spirits?" asked Noell. She was very curious of why this place is cursed.
"Yes. Actually by one. This spirit can come unexpectedly. You can't see it, only other spirits can. You can see it as a humouse, if you open the astral portal." Meifee told her pretty sad story of who killed her when she a loner humouse. "Or. One of you can inherit half of my spiritual power. My keen vision can see it clearly."
Shard volunteered to inherit powers, because he could blend in the shadowy spirits.
10 minutes later, he saw IT. The spirit which Meifee told about. It looked pretty beastly. Much beastlier than all the dark spirits together. "Foxie. You know what to do."
"What?"
"COMBINE." said Shard.
They both combined the elements using Hailey's wand, Lilli's fists, Shard's and Dave's blades and Foxie's gun.
"Alright. There's no turning back now." Shard threw the sword and the spirit was slain. Meifee's death was avenged! Finally, Noell enchanted Shard's blade, Shard revived Meifee. After Meifee got revived, Dave and Samantha had left the team.
"Thank you. I feel... immortal!" Meifee cheered as she was revived and became immortal. "Now I'm not exiled anymore!"
"You're welcome. May The Enlighted Force be with you!" said Lillithia.
But there are more adventures that await our fellow humice team! Will they survive altogether with the exiled warrior or the Lillian region will be taken over?


EDIT: Pageget + not mentioning that dragon spirit in this chapter! :D

lul i dont think #shox isnt going to last long...augh who knows i still love it :D

Angelflute a dit :

lul i dont think #shox isnt going to last long...augh who knows i still love it :D

Okay, I'll try to get some more #shox references.

Now that the "Spirituals" are the old news as being an antagonist team in all chapters, how about I should open slots for new antagonist teams?
Each team will have 5 members, and here's the form of being the antagonist:

Name:
Gender:
Age (human years):
Reference:
Team:
Scout/Warrior/Magician:
Weapon:
Special abilities (optional):

-Team selection-

Exiled Corrupts (0/5)
Silent Souls (0/5)
The All Seeing (0/5)
Insanity (0/5)
Rising Undead (0/5)
Shadow Alliance (0/5)

Angelflute a dit :

lul i dont think #shox isnt going to last long...augh who knows i still love it :D

WE GOTTA BELIEVEEEE.

Anniebuscus a dit :

Okay, I'll try to get some more #shox references.

Now that the "Spirituals" are the old news as being an antagonist team in all chapters, how about I should open slots for new antagonist teams?
Each team will have 5 members, and here's the form of being the antagonist:

Name:
Gender:
Age (human years):
Reference:
Team:
Scout/Warrior/Magician:
Weapon:
Special abilities (optional):

-Team selection-

Exiled Corrupts (0/5)
Silent Souls (0/5)
The All Seeing (0/5)
Insanity (0/5)
Rising Undead (0/5)
Shadow Alliance (0/5)

That's for those who haven't already entered, correct?

Shardpixel a dit :

That's for those who haven't already entered, correct?

Yup. That's right.

can i enter? ..i don't know how to put a pic so..but still?

Angelflute a dit :

can i enter? ..i don't know how to put a pic so..but still?

Yes, you can.
You can do an alternative way - upload your mouse ref to Imgur, and post this

[*url=imgurlink]somekindoftext[*/url]
Remove the stars, copy in the imgur link of your ref in the place of imgurlink and write some kind of text in "somekindoftext" place.

Info about teams:

"The All Seeing" is for magicians only, while "Insanity" is for warriors and "Silent Souls" is for scouts only.
If you join the "Shadow Alliance", you just need to know that in one chapter this team might unite with an other team. Same with the "Exiled Corrupts".
"Rising Undead" is for scouts AND warriors only.

Okay. No one (ok, only Angel but she doesn't know how to put a pic) wants to enter, so here's chapter 15 with the old antagonists. YEP.

Chapter 15: Revenge of the Spirituals

"Well. Isn't that Meifee the exiled, huh?" The Spirituals are here. Again. "I got only one question. Why. Why did you slain our guardian?!" Erin was very angry and wanted to avenge the deadly spirit's death.
"You're just jealous that we DON'T need guardians! Guardians for a team are for sissie teams!" said Meifee. "Oh, and cursed strength shrines too!"
"How do you know that they have a strength shrine, Mei?" asked Hailey.
"I had wandered around the Lillian region as a spirit, seeking for an avenger of my death." answered Meifee.
"TELL ME!" shouted Oliver, took Shard's blade and targetted in on Mei. "Tell me. OR YOU WILL SUFFER."
Mei clenched her teeth, hoping that this madness will end. "Tell us the truth. Tell it. TELL IT." chanted Neatze. "Or I will count down from 5. If you won't tell the truth, we will kill you again. Five..."
"No... This must be a nighmare.." mumbled Meifee.
"Four.."
"Oh my Dragostea, this must be a nightmare, really!"
"Three..."
Lillithia charged her fists for a counter attack with pure wrath. "Two.." Neatze continued to count, until....
Shard quickly grabbed the blade from Oliver's hand and said: "It's no use to kill Mei. She had suffered a long time as being forsaken and exiled. And now she is risen. She rose as an immortal warrior. Her time of being exiled and forgotten has ended and will never start."
Lillithia punched down Oliver, while Shard wanted to threw his blade. His target was Neatze. But Foxie J stopped him.
"Don't do it. Only our love can tell what to do and what not to do. So please. I'm begging you."
"You're right. But that bastard should no longer be in the world." said Shard.
"But please!"
"Alright." said Shard. Foxie J let his hand. Noell was surprised. "Really? How can a scout and a de..." Shard closed her mouth with his hand. "Shhhhh..... Okay, continue."
".... fall in love?!"
In his own mind Shard was safe. If he wasn't, he would have tried to sob and show it to all the team. But he didn't want to show it, even if Noell would call him a demon.
"So long." said Neatze. "Come on, Oliver. We had lost it." All the spirituals went away.

Good job with this.

Zagtail a dit :

Good job with this.

Thanks :3

This is one of the many reasons I love this fanfic
(Because of suspense, and love <3)

oo o3o the shox is strong in this.

shard is a demon the end.

Sirusthemice a dit :

shard is a demon the end.

I know. That's why Shard was like SHHHH when Noell was supposed to call Shard a demon once again.

NOELL DON'T RUIN THE MOMENT

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

NOELL DON'T RUIN THE MOMENT

GOSH DANGIT NOELL. SHADDAP. YA ALMOST RUINED IT, DAMMIT.
*Meifee, Foxie and Shard disapproved of ruining the moment, lol*

EDIT: This thread has got 8 pages and no moderated posts?! O:
It's a miracle! Ya hear me?! It's incredible, lol.
EDIT2: I just got to 15 chapters pretty quick. 35 to go.
EDIT3: I am very bored, and that's why I do so much edits. xD

Sirusthemice a dit :

shard is a demon the end.

Holy shit plot twist.

Anniebuscus a dit :

I know. That's why Shard was like SHHHH when Noell was supposed to call Shard a demon once again.

PLOT TWISSST

Shardpixel a dit :

Holy shit plot twist.
PLOT TWISSST

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i was drawing some humice stuff (once i draw fanart i can never stop) last night and did some dark character stuff and thought of demon shard because I was reading all of the characters and remembered that hailey has a dark side, i started drawing that and yeah

Chapter 16: Book of the Untold and Darkosteu

When going, suddenly Foxie stepped on something. "Hmm, what's this?" She dug a bit down with the help of Hailey and found it.
"A book... This must be a magical relic. Is it a tome? Or a book with some lore?" Renisha was very curious. "It's a book with lore, Reni. I wonder what kind of lore is there?" said Lillithia. Foxie cleaned the dirt from it. She read the title: "The Book of Untold..."
Meifee said: "I think we will get the origins of this madness." Mei opened the book and found a chapter called "The Spirituals". "The Spirituals... let's see."

"Spirituals is a group of humice who want to create a world of everlasting chaos...
...they had worshipped Darkosteu, the opposite of Dragostea....
...the founder had found a cursed crown..."

"Darkosteu? I'm pretty confused...." Noell said. "Then what's with dark Drago? Isn't it the same?!"
"No." answered Shard. "Spirituals are the reason of what happened to Drago. Darkosteu was fully dark, but dark Dragostea - partly." Meifee dissappointingly said: "Let's continue."

"...their shrine is for their strength and for worshipping Darkosteu and his servant - Giovanni...
....Giovanni is a humouse who cursed Selina with his lightsaber...
.....after Selina died, the moment of rising Spirituals had came....
....at start, they were called "Illuminated", but later they changed it to Spirituals..."

Suddenly, Shard felt like someone choked him. "Help! Help me, fellow mates!" His crying out for help every moment sounded deeper and more demonic.
"I-I think... t-that this b-book is c-cursed..." stammered Meifee. "But I'm brave enough to stop this madness." She took her sword, slashed down the book and put the sword back. Shard's horns grew longer, and he looked similiar to Darkosteu...
"Are you sure we will stop him? He's possessed by the lord of chaos." Renisha was worried, scared and confused at the same time.
"If we believe, than we can stop him without even trying. That's what Dragostea taught me." answered Lillithia.
"That's right! We just need to believe that we can!" Meifee cheered. "But.."
"Yes, I know. He's very strong. So here's plan B - combine powers and then start this fight!" Lilli came up with a bright idea. So everyone were ready for the fight.