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Welcome to the forever cancelled book of Lost.

Lost was a 1-and-three-quarters series that was supposed to be a 3-book plot.

Feel free to read what remains. Just know that it now makes me cringe. All of it.

ATTENTION- PLEASE READ THE WHOLE STORY OF LOST AT Topic-643178 BEFORE POSTING/READING THIS THREAD'S CONTENT.

PREPARE YOUR BUTTS- IT'S FINALLY HERE! THE SECOND BOOK OF LOST!


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^Best freaking banner in the world by Ejaffa^

So, where the hell did we leave off, Shard?

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Chapter 17: Time's Up

“It can't just be gone!” Shard shouted, not ready to face the bitter truth.
“Shard, it-”
“IT CAN'T BE, IT JUST CAN'T!” Shard blurted out, pulling on his ears and not even acknowledging his interruption with Serafina, then falling to the ground and burying his face in the ground.
“He be losin' his mind-o...” Piry-O mumbled to Dakota.
“I heard that.” he responded with an annoyed tone.
“It's just... Gone.” Amanda said slowly, her voice at a low whisper. “Gone...”
“We'll never get out of here...” Dakota decided, crossing her arms and looking at her feet.
“We won't...” Amanda said with the same hopeless voice as before.
“I... I never thought I'd lose hope like this...” Snowy said, sitting down and hiding her face in her hands, then silently sobbing.
“There's got to be something to d-” Foxie and Shard stared at each other as they realized they had both said the same thing.
“Uh, go ahead...” Shard said, turning back to the ground.
“R-right... Anyway, there's got to be something to do, something to get us out...” She rubbed her face in case she was blushing again.
“Let's just quit while we're ahead.” Serafina pouted.
“Yeah, just stop searching, curl up and die here.” Dakota joined in miserably.
“Great idea...” Snowy said, finally giving up on being the cheery and happy little mouse that she was “born to be.”
“I agree.” Amanda chimed in softly, her facial expression lost in so many emotions.
So that's what the five of them did. Lie down, and pout, waiting to just die here. Shard and Foxie just sat there together, watching the rest.
“We were so close... How could this have happened...”
“I don't know.” Shard mumbled.
Foxie was at a loss of words from such a hopeless situation. She didn't want to die, not yet. And certainly not here, where she could turn into a ruthless shadow.
Shard sat there, staring at the others, when he nearly jumped at the surprise of a hug. Foxie only made soft sobs and a few squeaks while Shard was trying to comprehend what was going on. If he wasn't such a dark color, he would have just invented the blush fur.
“I don't even understand... The way out was huge, a big gaping hole of light right-” Shard stopped as his eyes followed where he had pointed. The one place that was only black and not red as well.
“What is it?” Foxie said, sitting up again and straightening out her wet face.
“That's a hole.”
“You mean...”
Shard got up. “That's the way out.”
All of the six other mice sprang to their feet in excitement.
Shard took a step forward. “It's really here...”
“We made it...” Foxie gasped.
The group slowly approached the hole. Sure enough, it was the same size and same location as it had been when it was light.
“Why's it so dark?” Snowy asked curiously, looking at the massive hole of darkness.
“I'm not sure...” Shard replied, stopping as the group was only a few steps away.
“Here it is...” Foxie whispered, her voice hoarse.
“Finally...” Serafina said in disbelief.
“The way out...” Amanda chimed in.
“The way back to where we belong...” Snowy added on breathlessly.
“Aye, the way-o out-y... to...”
“Home.” Dakota finished, sending the group forward.
Shard walked out and turned to the group. “Here it is, hom-” he stopped at the sight of the horrified faces he saw and turned to what was supposed to be their world. It was just the same as the horrific place they had just escaped from, but had more features like cliffs, and plenty more phantoms.
“We're still trapped in this chaotic world!” Snowy shouted.
“Sort of...” Shard told her.
“What are you talking about, Shard” Foxie asked, desperate for something to cheer her up.
“This is our home.” He pointed down to a black figure and another black figure, one glowing red. It was a mouse being chased by a phantom. He turned back to the group, knowing exactly what was going on.
“We're too late.”

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Now, our heroic 7 mice must race against this chaotic world to take back what's theirs, and several former non-loners are ready to give them a hand.

One of these will be made by me.

Mouse:
http://i.imgur.com/7NHvZdd.png
Name: Slate
Age: 23
Personality: Stubborn, "tough guy," ill-tempered.
Experience: Slate was on his way back from getting some cheese when the sky darkened at an alarming rate. He watched with horror as the black sky turned to black and red swirls, and mysterious black shadows ganged up on him and nearly killed him, if not for him passing out along the way. When he woke up, everyone he knew was dead, no matter where he went. He decided from that day on to hunt down the phantoms and save this world from any more chaos.

Mouse:
http://i.imgur.com/XCAZqtT.png
Name: Skylar (Belongs to Birdluv)
Age: 16
personality:
A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.
can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
extra's: loves cannons, trolling, and someday, dreams of flying.
Experience: It was nothing but sadness after the death of her family and friends. Her life was empty, roaming the streets just as empty. She stood fearless, and did what she could, to protect her empty homeland. One day, as she defencelessly ran from blood-sucking phantoms, she tripped on a rock, but something appeared to be on it. As Skylar turned her head to look at the rock, she saw a bow, probably left behind from one of the villagers. Reluctantly, she picked it up, knowing she was taught not to steal. "Unless they are dead!" she remarked at her own words. She found it fit great in her hands, as she prepared to fight or die. Skylar didn't have much expoerence, but somehow, she made it. Now, everyone as gone, but she didn't want to leave. She would rest in a nearby forest, learning to hunt and care for herself. by less then a week, she was great at it. Almost becoming plump, the food was plentiful. Though she had a passion for nature, she did what she must. now, at 16, she is one of the wild.

Mouse:
http://i.imgur.com/ksH5R9V.png
Name: Anna (Belongs to Erikadeedee)
Age: 18 (I suppose I really like this number so it's perfect, right???)
Personality: A bit rude to newcomers, but protects her friends and is loyal to her friends all the time. She never backs down from fights, and always gets mad at every little thing. She's really bad at keeping calm, but is easily calmed down once she's told.
Experience: Basically, Anna was playing survivor when the world became black dust and complete darkness. She could only hear the sobs of mice, coughing and injured people coming closer. The dust made her pass out and when she awoke she only saw smoke. As the smoke cleared, she could only see people either dead, or people she couldn't help by just her bare self.

Mouse:
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Name: Vasiliy (Belongs to Sirusthemice)
Age: 17 tbh
Personality: Usially quiet but when he opens his mouth he's sassy, rude and makes alot of sarcastic remarks. Though sometimes, he might soften up and say something heart-warming. He's also a bit pushy at times, mostly when he wants things to be done and over with.
Experience: A normal day in Vanilla with everything seemingly normal, when suddenly the sky went pitch black and something knocked Vasiliy over. Falling from the platform he stood on, he hit his head and passed out. Vasiliy didn't know how long he was passed out but when he woke up the world was dark and ruined.

Mouse:
http://i.imgur.com/z9En2Ta.png
Name: Vence (Belongs to Wingedmousie)
Age: 21
Personality: Very talkative, yet strong and brave. Can fight but is sensetive on the inside and depresses a bit. He uses his eyeglass device to locate where to go.
Experience: A cannon smacked him in the face and he bleeded. He had a concussion then woke up being to a destroyed, dark land.

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WHO ARE THE ORIGINAL CHARACTERS?

These 7 mice:


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Name: Shard
Age (Human years): 27
Gender: Male
Loner?: Yes.
Bio: Shard grew up poor. At the age of 5, his parents died mysteriously, both at the same time. This was very rare to happen, to have mice die. (They are almost immortal when it comes to age.) He viewed the world in a depressed and dark way, keeping to himself and never going outside to others. Everyone feared him, and he believed in another world of chaos without a doubt. He now stays home, awaiting the chaotic world to go after him, as well as everyone else.



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Name: Dakota (Belongs to Nekoava)
Age (Human years): 15
Gender: Female
Loner?: Yes
Bio: Dakota had a very rough childhood. Her parents were drug-dealers and almost tried killing her at age 4. She was sent to an orphanage at age 11. She snuck out of the orphanage three days after, with only a gun and the clothes she had on. Dakota learned how to hunt and survive in the wild forest ever since. She's rebellion, and very unfriendly- but she's the most loyal person ever to her friends.


http://i.imgur.com/m2l9wLP.png
Name: Amanda (Belongs to Anniebuscus)
Age (Human years): 14
Gender: Female
Loner?: Yes
Bio: Amanda's childhood was very depressing and sad. She lived with her grandmother when she was 8, because Amanda's parents died in an accident. Two years later her grandmother died too, so Amanda had to go live with her uncle. Three years after that he died too. Then she knew she's bringing the bad luck to her family. So Amanda went to a forest where she learned how to survive. She's loyal to her friends, but not to be trusted when they need help in surviving in forest.


http://i.imgur.com/Fd52muN.png
Name: Serafina (fina for short) (Belongs to mewisawesome)
Age (Human years): 17
Gender: Female
Loner?: Yep
Bio: Serafina had always been the mouse that was outcasted. Her family died in a fire when she was about 6 by her own hand (on accident of course) from then on she learned to live on her own.(oh and shes afraid of fire from the accident) She grew up too quickly and was alienated by other mice because of her differences. She shuts everyone out and doesn't trust anyone. uhm, flashback story? ill delete it if you dont want it. *Flash back* "momma! daddy!" she cried, coughing and scurrying crazily through the burning nest....no response "mom?! dad?!" she runs quickly to her parents room, to find them burnt to a crisp, their fur a black color. Her eyes widen as tears slip down her face, quickly getting out of her flaming home and to a forest (most likely the same forest as amanda's) to live.


http://i.imgur.com/ZG8b2VW.png
Name: Foxie J (Fox for short) (Belongs to Ejaffa)
Age (Human years): 17
Gender: Female
Loner?: Yes
Bio: The most adventurous of the bunch, but she enjoys her own company sometimes. Very energetic and athletic but isn't very bright overall. She dreams of fighting in the wars of Transformice and becoming a great hero to go down in history, she's already planning her tactics for war. Very trustworthy and honest but occasionally tells the white lie to get herself out of trouble. Her parents were heros but they died in one of the biggest wars of Transformice and to this day, she looks up to them and sees them as the greatest heros she ever knew.


http://i.imgur.com/4tXidWil.png
Name: Piry-O (Belongs to Gabreyolo)
Age (Human years): 16
Gender: Female
Loner?: Yes
Bio: She loves adventures , because she believes , that she will find pirates. Piry-O loves pirates. Shes has a parrot called Pitty-E. Her mom used to be a pirate , but she drowned in a ship . Piry-O used to have Piry name , but she added an O , and for her parrot too. She loves to add extra letters to every word , like - Dog-o , Pirate-y ...


http://i.imgur.com/R0pgBbZ.png
Name:Snowy (Belongs to Snowywindsky)
Age (Human years):-
Gender:Female
Loner?:Yes
Bio:Adventuress,has a bright spirit,loves to find out new things,helps others, and always wants to discover new things and wants to fight.She is ready to whatever comes her way.She also loves wall jumping anything in her path.She belives she can help the others being a sham to save their world.

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There are going to be five new characters, Slate being one. So as of now, there are 0/5 slots open.

The form to fill in:

-Removed because it is no longer needed-

Experience is what happened to them after their world was taken over. There is not a 100% chance you'll get in the fanfiction.

Thank you very much for your time, and get ready for a story better than the last!

(Sents can lock my old thread now.)

NOTE: YOU'LL HAVE A BETTER CHANCE OF GETTING A CHAR IN IF IT'S A GUY.

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Mouse:
http://i.imgur.com/XCAZqtT.png
Name: Skylar
Age: 16
personality:
A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.
can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
extra's: loves cannons, trolling, and someday, dreams of flying.
Experience: It was nothing but sadness after the death of her family and friends. Her life was empty, roaming the streets just as empty. She stood fearless, and did what she could, to protect her empty homeland. One day, as she defencelessly ran from blood-sucking phantoms, she tripped on a rock, but something appeared to be on it. As Skylar turned her head to look at the rock, she saw a bow, probably left behind from one of the villagers. Reluctantly, she picked it up, knowing she was taught not to steal. "Unless they are dead!" she remarked at her own words. She found it fit great in her hands, as she prepared to fight or die. Skylar didn't have much expoerence, but somehow, she made it. Now, everyone as gone, but she didn't want to leave. She would rest in a nearby forest, learning to hunt and care for herself. by 14, she was great at it. Almost becoming plump, the food was plentiful. Though she had a passion for nature, she did what she must. now, at 16, she is one of the wild.
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Birdluv a dit :
Reference:
Age: 16
Gender: female
Name: Skylar
About: A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.
Personality (behaviour): can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
extra's: loves cannons, trolling, and someday, dreams of flying.

Wrong form.

That's why you don't prewrite things.

E: Guy characters have bigger chances of getting in.
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Shard, I really your Fan-Fictions. You really have a lot of meaning and dramatic imputs in your writing. I can say I'm surely a fan of Lost and I hope you continue writing a lot about it! I'm going to sign up now. :]
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Erikadeedee a dit :
Shard, I really your Fan-Fictions. You really have a lot of meaning and dramatic imputs in your writing. I can say I'm surely a fan of Lost and I hope you continue writing a lot about it! I'm going to sign up now. :]

Okay! c: And thank you very much :3
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nevermind
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I edited, I just wanted to be first post!

Please overlook :)
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Xxwangelwxx a dit :
Mouse:
Name:ria
Personality:she's very selfish, doesnt care about others,LALALALA
Experience:WHAT DO I WRITE HERE OH MY GOD

Write what happened that made them a loner after chaos took over the freaking world mmkay.

Birdluv a dit :
Mouse:
Name: Skylar
Age: 16
personality:
A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.
can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
extra's: loves cannons, trolling, and someday, dreams of flying.
Experience: after this disaster, Skylar, thought she was alone. Until she found something very small that would change her life.. forever. as she raced though the empty streets, she found a bow, perfectly placed on a rock. from there, she lerned to hunt. Until one day..

mmkay thanks.

Angel I FORGOT to put age in the form so could you just tell me the age and experience and I'll see if you fit in c:
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IM SO ABD AT THE EXPERIENCE IM FREAKIN OUT of What To pUTtTtTtt
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#shox still lives

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Erikadeedee a dit :
IM SO ABD AT THE EXPERIENCE IM FREAKIN OUT of What To pUTtTtTtt

I sense a pattern here everyone is LOST on that one part.

(That was a good one x3)
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Shardpixel a dit :


I sense a pattern here everyone is LOST on that one part.

(That was a good one x3)

-laughs histerically-
(not)
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Shardpixel a dit :


I sense a pattern here everyone is LOST on that one part.

(That was a good one x3)

should i just basically say ''well y'know she was playing in survivor one day and then it just suddenly got dark, and the whole world just felt like it was falling into a deep mud pit.''
im not even creative
im so LOST
e: more like im so stupid
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Erikadeedee a dit :


should i just basically say ''well y'know she was playing in survivor one day and then it just suddenly got dark, and the whole world just felt like it was falling into a deep mud pit.''
im not even creative
im so LOST

I got one....
Wait, no, I don't got one.
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Ejaffa a dit :


-laughs histerically-
(not)

Lol

Erikadeedee a dit :


should i just basically say ''well y'know she was playing in survivor one day and then it just suddenly got dark, and the whole world just felt like it was falling into a deep mud pit.''
im not even creative
im so LOST

;D

YOU GOTTA BE CREATIVE TO BE IN THE FANFIC

E: Omfg guys what do you have against male characters.
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SHARD I RLY NEED TO GET INTO THIS FANFICTION
THIS IS LIKE A LA CLUB THAT ROCKS AND PARTIES SO HARD YOU NEED TO BE A BIG SUPERSTAR
GIVE ME IDEAS, HINTS
SOMETHINGGGG
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Erikadeedee a dit :
SHARD I RLY NEED TO GET INTO THIS FANFICTION
THIS IS LIKE A LA CLUB THAT ROCKS AND PARTIES SO HARD YOU NEED TO BE A BIG SUPERSTAR
GIVE ME IDEAS, HINTS
SOMETHINGGGG

WHAT MADE YOUR CHARACTER A FUC*ING LONER GEE
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LOVE THIS
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Shardpixel a dit :


WHAT MADE YOUR CHARACTER A FUC*ING LONER GEE

I KNOW SHARD BUT HOW THE HECK AM I SUPPOSED TO GET CREATIVE
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Boefie a dit :
LOVE THIS

Lol x3

Erikadeedee a dit :

I KNOW SHARD BUT HOW THE HECK AM I SUPPOSED TO GET CREATIVE

...

....

That, my friend.

Is something I can't answer.

*Poofs into smoke*
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