Atelier 801
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Kittenmeowz - @7124572 - The map is nice, the overall structure of the pumpkin is accurate and clean to look at. The use of decorations are also another plus however since the map is fairly basic in creativity, it limits the map's potential. Trufflerux - @7124608 - The map follows all of the guidelines, with a few nice, added touches to the map. I am a fan of the cloud in the top left hand corner, it looks nice! The garden is not very apparent though, nor very nice to look at. Lastly, the play area is really limited. The balls are nice however Philbert may want more toys! Starlightcenturies - @7125708 The map is nice and big, with a very lovely hand-made bed, which is a lot better than the default! The attempt at creativity here is nice, however you are missing some things, or they may not be as apparent to us as they are to you. The judges couldn't really find a play area or garden, unless the bottom right corner is it. Otherwise, good map! Kiddoru - @7126140 - All of the judges loved the aesthetic of this map! Everything follows the guidelines, and the map also offers a decent amount of creativity as well. The color of the pumpkin is a little too bright, however it is not that big of an issue. The map is pretty small, however you were able to implement a lot of creativity in this. Nice touch adding Philbert! Lucysicy - @7126249 - The map is overall decent. The space you offered within the pumpkin is comfortable, as well as nice. The few cons about this map though is that there is no obvious garden, just a few decorations. Also, the background you chose doesn't really fit the theme that well. Unlocker001 - @7125670 - The map is good! The attempt at making original furniture is also a big plus. The play area for Philbert was awesome! Sadly, there was A LOT of empty space in the map, which made the potential of this map decrease. Overall, the map was nice! Bejrzie - @7126975 - The overall structure of the pumpkin was a bit weird, however it was still recognizable as a pumpkin. The overall space within the map was also pretty small, but it was okay. The use of the play area for Philbert was rather small too. Stephspeach - @7129387 - The structure of the pumpkin was accurate and nice to look at, as well as the added vines. The garden and decorations are also a nice touch, and was easily recognizable. The garden was off-screen, and there was a bit of space that was unused in the map. Fuzzyfirsdog - @7124583 - The overall map was very nice! The archway and the couch were both a very nice touch to the map. The judges felt that the vine inside of the map was a little odd, as naturally, vines appear outside of the pumpkin. The play area was a bit limited, we understand the use of the stone however just adding shaman items limit the play area and making it a little bland. V_ntage - @7000104 - The background choice was a nice touch to the map! The overall pumpkin structure was fantastic and accurate, as well as the ground choices outside of the map. Sadly, there are two things that we couldn't find in the map; we couldn't find an obvious garden, unless the entrance was the garden, secondly, we couldn't find a play area for Philbert, which is apart of the guidelines. The choice of colors for the shower and the vase match the pumpkin, which is a poor choice. Imonfiyah - @7131514 - The creativity behind the hand-made objects around the map are definitely a very nice touch. One downfall of the map is the very rough edges, you could've made them a lot smoother, or at least a lot nicer to look at. The garden is not as apparent as we wanted it, because for a while we were confused on whether it was on the left or right side of the map. The use of the vine inside of the pumpkin was an okay idea, but naturally, vines grow on the outside of pumpkins. Overall, everything was nice with the map! Kippoz - @7131595 - The overall map was alright. It doesn't really look like a pumpkin at all sadly, it is way too bright, and the structure doesn't represent a pumpkin that much. We loved the hand-made objects within the map, although they're a little rough, they still look very nice! The play area for Philbert is lacking a lot. We couldn't find one, so we assumed that it was probably the slide off the balcony. The decoration and outside overall, didn't really match the inside, which makes them look very odd to look at. Darinp12 - @7132063 - The map is pretty simple, which isn't a bad thing! There is just a few things that could have been improved to the help the map. The structure of the pumpkin is decent, however everything else is lacking. The garden was very basic, and unappealing to look at. The decorations seem random, and odd. The use of space in the map could have been better too. Hybinkunduz - @7040066 - The judges were very impressed with the artwork in this map. The space used in this map was very nice, as well as the use of the background. The collision is kind of an issue, the judges were a little confused about where they could step and where they couldn't. We just assumed that the garden was the entire left side, and while that's fine, that's more of a background than an actual garden. The swing was basic, and there was so much potential that you didn't use. Overall, the only good thing about this map is the use of art, everything else is very basic. One of the judges said the sign was a nice touch too! Feliciajajaj - @7133856 - The overall map is alright. The structure of the pumpkin isn't the best, but it is recognizable. The use of grounds on the left was very confusing, as they're kind of random and odd from the rest of the map. The use of the inside is not the best either, but you followed everything in the guidelines. -Grimmaro Coming into first place is...
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