My new Transformice comic! |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1511000160000
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Intro/Plot Hi! Im going to make a Tfm Fanfiction! The plot is that all the Shamans (and most of the regular mice) have been captured by evil cats. The few remaining mice must save the Shams (and mice) and return Transformice to its normal peaceful state. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Form Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse) Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): Name/Nicknames Eye Color Title(Optional) Personality: Relative/Friends Extras: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Approved Charaters! Akemi_Chan(Will post info) Snoozymouse(Will post info) Pokemonfairy?(Don't really know if she plays anymore) CilentWisp: Appearance: Breed: Mouse Side: Good Name: Cilent Eye Color: Pink Title: Pro you get that at 700 bootcamps Personality: Quick Reflexes, Friendly towards other Good sided characters, will risk anything to protect others Friends: All the good mice Bastlase: Can I have my costamary(spelling fail...) TARDIS? Here's the form: Appearance: Breed: mouse Side: good Name/Nicknames: bastlase/bast Eye Color: dark blue Title(Optional): Time traveller Personality: kind, smart, nerdy, slow to anger, able to analyze situations well, shy at times- confident others, sarcastic when annoyed- prelude to anger, nice to everyone- puts others before himself. Relative/Friends: none/ None at the moment, but willing for friendship. Extras: Time Lord, like from Doctor Who. Tends to live inside the TARDIS, either reading in the huge library, tinkering when bored, or practicing shaman skills (wind master) Rebbecademg: Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse) mouse Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): good, but she was in the bad side a long time ago(? Name/Nicknames: rebeccademg/rebe Eye Color- green Title(Optional) Personality: people say she's nice, and she looks pretty normal, but she's a crazy nerd inside. ok. sorry. also she's usually happy, but don't make her mad. really. don't do it. DON'T. Relative/Friends: basically everyone who is kind Extras: she likes reading and playing Pictionary. Yes, Pictionary. Deaththekid4: Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse): Mouse Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): Good Name/Nicknames: Akari, no nickname Eye Color: Light pink Title(Optional) Souris-chan Personality: She's a happy, cheerful person who tries her hardest to make everyone smile in a bad situation. She tries to be friends with everyone, especially people who need a friend. When people are sad and need help, she's comforting and lets them know she's always there for them. Relative/Friends: Relative She has a mother and father, who both live in Japan. Her father is kind and trustworthy, and her mother is brave and bold. She is an only child. Her parents send her letters a few times each month. Friends Because of her kind and cheerful personality, she's always making new friends. She knows most people and if she doesn't know someone, she'll try to be their friend. Extras: Can speak Japanese -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Enjoy! Also if you have name suggestions or what should happen next chapter plz tell me! (Also my tabs are not working thats why it looks like this, if someone could tell me how to fix it, it would be helpful.) Dernière modification le 1513382820000 |
Cilentwisp « Censeur » 1511117880000
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Appearance: Breed: Mouse Side: Good Name: Cilent Eye Color: Pink Title: Pro you get that at 700 bootcamps Personality: Quick Reflexes, Friendly towards other Good sided characters, will risk anything to protect others Friends: All the good mice Extras: nothing |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1512190620000
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I can start once I have 5 mice. |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1512963720000
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Prologue (Its not gonna be a comic any more :( ) The green feathered shaman turned in her bed, a feeling of dread sinking over her. She stood up and divided to take a walk, walking down the dimly lit street she thought she noticed shadows flickering in the corners of her vision. Suddenly the lights snapped off. Concerned she started to run home only to be confronted by a large shadow,the shadow reached out and snatched her by the tail. A mouse scream pierces the thick night air. Across town Gadget awoke, fear running through her head at the sound of the scream. Something was very wrong. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1512967440000
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Can I have my costamary(spelling fail...) TARDIS? Here's the form: Appearance: Breed: mouse Side: good Name/Nicknames: bastlase/bast Eye Color: dark blue Title(Optional): Time traveller Personality: kind, smart, nerdy, slow to anger, able to analyze situations well, shy at times- confident others, sarcastic when annoyed- prelude to anger, nice to everyone- puts others before himself. Relative/Friends: none/ None at the moment, but willing for friendship. Extras: Time Lord, like from Doctor Who. Tends to live inside the TARDIS, either reading in the huge library, tinkering when bored, or practicing shaman skills (wind master) |
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Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse) mouse Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): good, but she was in the bad side a long time ago(? Name/Nicknames: rebeccademg/rebe Eye Color- green Title(Optional) Personality: people say she's nice, and she looks pretty normal, but she's a crazy nerd inside. ok. sorry. also she's usually happy, but don't make her mad. really. don't do it. DON'T. Relative/Friends: basically everyone who is kind Extras: she likes reading and playing Pictionary. Yes, Pictionary. |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1513026060000
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Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse): Mouse Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): Good Name/Nicknames: Akari, no nickname Eye Color: Light pink Title(Optional) Souris-chan Personality: She's a happy, cheerful person who tries her hardest to make everyone smile in a bad situation. She tries to be friends with everyone, especially people who need a friend. When people are sad and need help, she's comforting and lets them know she's always there for them. Relative/Friends: Relative She has a mother and father, who both live in Japan. Her father is kind and trustworthy, and her mother is brave and bold. She is an only child. Her parents send her letters a few times each month. Friends Because of her kind and cheerful personality, she's always making new friends. She knows most people and if she doesn't know someone, she'll try to be their friend. Extras: Can speak Japanese |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1513038120000
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Yessss! People are posting here! |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1513261500000
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Are we accepted? |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1513316100000
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Yes you are! I will add you to the list tomorrow its late and a school night. The first chapter will be out soon! Winter break starts at the end on school tomorrow, so I will have time to write. Edit: I added you now :) Dernière modification le 1513316340000 |
Koroakabane « Censeur » 1513334280000
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Appearance: Breed: Mouse Side: Bad Nickname/Name:Karma Eyecolor: Red Title: The Reaper Personality: Has done alot of fighting in the past so over the few people is probably the strongest,Looks down on everyone, Doesnt care about anything,Sometimes a bit chaotic even when it comes to his own side, doesn't give up,is especially good at close combat. Extras: Is from japan. Dernière modification le 1513335420000 |
Cilentwisp « Censeur » 1513335000000
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why does everybody spell my name wrong when i clearly said its C I L E N T W I S P ;-; |
Syrius « Consul » 1513341660000
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You can make tabs with [#TabName1][/#TabName1]. Like this: Hi! Im going to make a Tfm Fanfiction! The plot is that all the Shamans (and most of the regular mice) have been captured by evil cats. The few remaining mice must save the Shams (and mice) and return Transformice to its normal peaceful state. Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse) Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): Name/Nicknames Eye Color Title(Optional) Personality: Relative/Friends Extras: Akemi_Chan(Will post info) Snoozymouse(Will post info) Pokemonfairy?(Don't really know if she plays anymore) ClientWisp: Appearance: Breed: Mouse Side: Good Name: Cilent Eye Color: Pink Title: Pro you get that at 700 bootcamps Personality: Quick Reflexes, Friendly towards other Good sided characters, will risk anything to protect others Friends: All the good mice Bastlase: Can I have my costamary(spelling fail...) TARDIS? Here's the form: Appearance: Breed: mouse Side: good Name/Nicknames: bastlase/bast Eye Color: dark blue Title(Optional): Time traveller Personality: kind, smart, nerdy, slow to anger, able to analyze situations well, shy at times- confident others, sarcastic when annoyed- prelude to anger, nice to everyone- puts others before himself. Relative/Friends: none/ None at the moment, but willing for friendship. Extras: Time Lord, like from Doctor Who. Tends to live inside the TARDIS, either reading in the huge library, tinkering when bored, or practicing shaman skills (wind master) Rebbecademg: Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse) mouse Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): good, but she was in the bad side a long time ago(? Name/Nicknames: rebeccademg/rebe Eye Color- green Title(Optional) Personality: people say she's nice, and she looks pretty normal, but she's a crazy nerd inside. ok. sorry. also she's usually happy, but don't make her mad. really. don't do it. DON'T. Relative/Friends: basically everyone who is kind Extras: she likes reading and playing Pictionary. Yes, Pictionary. Deaththekid4: Appearance: Breed(Cat or Mouse): Mouse Side(Some cats can be good, a mouse can be occasionally bad): Good Name/Nicknames: Akari, no nickname Eye Color: Light pink Title(Optional) Souris-chan Personality: She's a happy, cheerful person who tries her hardest to make everyone smile in a bad situation. She tries to be friends with everyone, especially people who need a friend. When people are sad and need help, she's comforting and lets them know she's always there for them. Relative/Friends: Relative She has a mother and father, who both live in Japan. Her father is kind and trustworthy, and her mother is brave and bold. She is an only child. Her parents send her letters a few times each month. Friends Because of her kind and cheerful personality, she's always making new friends. She knows most people and if she doesn't know someone, she'll try to be their friend. Extras: Can speak Japanese Enjoy! Also if you have name suggestions or what should happen next chapter plz tell me! (Also my tabs are not working thats why it looks like this, if someone could tell me how to fix it, it would be helpful.) Dernière modification le 1513341720000 |
Koroakabane « Censeur » 1513345080000
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Tbh you shouldn't let others choose what should happen in the next chapter cus well its your Story! |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1513406340000
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Koroakabane a dit : Who was trying to choose what happened in the story? |
Koroakabane « Censeur » 1513432860000
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No-one but you put in Also if you have name suggestions or what should happen next chapter plz tell me! You should make the story yourself because its your story, unless you make an interactive story. |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1513643880000
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Sorry this is taking forever |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1513993560000
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Chapter 1! "Wow, it quiet today" said Cilent. "Ya, its normally very noisy with all those young shamans hitting each other with cannons in the street." replied Bast. " Must be a busy day at the Academy or something" said Akari. The Academy was the most important building in the whole town. Its beautiful marble walls made it look like a museum but it was really a training place for most of the shamans that help every mouse, normally not all shamans were in class and a lot of the younger ones would practice shaman fighting in the streets. " Its so weird..." said Gadget " There would be at least some adult shamans shopping or something, right?" "Lets go investigate." replied Karma. The five mice walked down to the Academy just to see the door ripped of its hinges. " Who would do that to such an special building?" asked Rebbeca. "No idea, lets go inside" said Bast. The inside was a mess! The marble desk were you could sign your kid up for shamaning lessons had deep gashes in it and the rug and chairs were thrown everywhere. Carefully creeping up the stairs the mice peeked down the hallway to the shaman dorms. A door blew open. "Hello? Anyone there?" asked Gadget. They slowly walked into the room. The beds were turned over and the window had a gigantic hole in it. A young pink feathered sham crawled out from under a bed, her eyes wide in fear. "No, no leave me alone!" she screamed and pointed past them. " Its ok "said Akari "No one else is here." " They took them all" she whisper " Every one. They picked each of my friends up with their claws and put them in a bag. I hid under the bed. It was terrible!" Now they understood, every shaman was gone. They were the only ones left. Yessss! Its done! V Yep, still need to find a way to get your Tardis in here Dernière modification le 1514085900000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1514057460000
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Dun dun dun! *ominous music here* |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1515827340000
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Chapter 2: Clues Bast: Bast knew what to do. Even when he ran out the door, and all the others gave him weird looks he knew what he was doing. Bast looked left and right before stepping into his Tardis. Whoosh! Time and space ran by, soon he was in front of The Academy at dusk the day the shamans went missing. The sky was fading into a dark purple and the shadow grew longer, all normal, in till the shadows stretched higher and higher forming a black silhouette against the sky. |