Pineapple Chronicles (Current writing exercise) |
Shinsuu « Citoyen » 1458489360000
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Thanks for Sweetiness for constructive criticism and some editing. Much appreciated :) At first only Nothing existed or possibly it did not. It was Nothing after all. Notably, it was the first creation ever started to gain shape, slowly, but steadily. Thus was the birth of Pine the Builder, God of Gods and The One Who Creates. With his grandeur hands, he made something out of Nothing and was ready to use it as a creation material for Everything, but first he needed someone who could uphold balance because there can not be Something without Nothing. With the last drops of Nothing he created Apple the Destroyer, Eternal Conqueror and The One Who Protects/Destroys, his dark to the eternal light of the Pine. After that, they both went their separate ways and where one created, the other destroyed and vice versa. Galaxies after galaxies, and suns, and star systems were created from Something as according to the divine blueprints of Pine which he also had made out of Something in a blink of an eye (and on which Apple secretly drew the pictures of genitals). While Builder himself used his divine green hands to mold the universe into the shape of its godly visage as we know it today, Conqueror was making plans on how to take over all the galaxies and spread his yellow color throughout all of the known and unknown universe. To this end he used part of himself and infused it with Nothing to create his future right hand and general for his combat force which was his ultimate dream. Decidedly, the Space Cactus was born, extremely cunning and brilliant tactician which Apple deemed worthy to lead his armies to conquer all the universes. While this was happening, Pine finished making most of the universes, thousands and thousands of them (few of them cat shaped), and have built a grand structure which is now known as the Halls of Pinal Eternity in the Centre of All the Universes. Apple at that time was creating his army, the grandest army that ever existed to fulfill his goal. For this he used Essence of Universe which Cactus brought from the Leftest Point of All the cosmos to infuse his army of golems made from meteors and planets with life an unwavering loyalty, and even eye lasers just for the sake of it. Millions of golems stood waiting for word of Apple to charge and destroy everything that stood in their way. Once and for all Conqueror wanted to prove that he was the True God and better than Pine. When Builder himself found out what his brother planned to do, he decided to defend himself and to this end he created a massive army consisting from giant space cats and mechs. Once again with the lovely lasers. They were both ready to fight and even Cactus who seemed loyal had his own plans. He wanted to be the Most Powerful, and the only way to do that (as he thought) was to have one or both artifacts that apparently were the source of godly power of Pine and Apple: Divine Blueprints and Divine Scepter of Metal respectively. From what Apple deemed enough to share with him, Cactus knew that even having one of these could give him amazing god powers such as immortality, ability to bend time and space and others that did not have description in the human tongue. Also the greatest eye lasers of them all, so he decided to set his master plan in motion that would result in both Gods fighting each other, but to do that he needed a mysterious artifact only known as the 'Mirror of Creation'. This artifact exists everywhere and nowhere at the same time if rumors that stars would whisper to be believable. Not wanting to be outdone by Pine before battle even started, Apple decided to also build grand structure for himself shaped as a castle with an excessive amount of sharp and edgy bits and spikes, fire and lasers. After finishing this grand warlike creation he then called it the 'The Appleous Halls of War'. But so it happened that after few days he decided to change it and gave it freedom of movement through the use of massive bat-like wings. Apple was extremely proud of it and now for once felt like he was truly equal with a Pine, his equivalent in Light because wherever he was, Dark his creator, and half brother was Light. ********* At this point Pine was actually starting to be concerned about his half brother and his plans involving the army of space golems and one tactically minded cactus. To this end he decided to track down Apple and try to explain that he will not achieve anything very substantial even if he proceeds with his warlike plans. After all, nothing much was around to win. All the galaxies were pretty much empty and barren except for them, their armies and artifacts which all had one particular trait. They couldn't be explained in any way thus their origins and effects were shrouded by the mist, and even the thickest kind of mist. There was a reason why Pine have not actually created anything else except for his defense force and that was a slight cases of clairvoyance he sometimes had. He predicted that this war will and even had to happen for the sake of both of them and for the sake of the future. It was a grand and godly Catch-22 he got himself into from the very beginning but now he could not do much about it, except maybe stop Cactus from his sort of evil plans. Pine knew that his brother will not even be willing to listen to him because of Apple being created from Nothing which gave him stubbornness and warlike traits in the first place. Pine, the godly Builder was at loss about what to do mainly because his clairvoyance was not working at this moment and because he did not have any clue how to respond to someone who actually wanted to fight him. Then again, Apple wanted to fight anything and all the time, but that was not the main point, and at one moment in time Pine had himself a nice revelation on how he could actually triumph against all odds. But for that he needed to actually start a war. |
Rednin « Citoyen » 1458567060000
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I can't keep up >< |
Sweetiness « Citoyen » 1458681060000
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Can't wait for the next part ~ |
Lurksindark « Citoyen » 1458922680000
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I absolutely love your writing style and comedic sense! Very mature and elegant~ |
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Haha!~ More More! |