Snowywindsky a dit :

YAYAYAYYAYAYAYYAYAY SHARD IS BACK IN TFM -THE CROWD GOES WILD- WHWHOAOAOOAOA HOO!!!!! LOST!!!!!!!! :D :) :3 . ?.? !.!

Ejaffa a dit :

Me gusta

Shardpixel a dit :

Yes. Praise me.
Indeed.

xD

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Omfg guys, I had a great idea for this fanfic...

But it won't arrive until the second "book" in the "series."

Have fun in suspense.

Ejaffa a dit :

Isn't it like 20 chapters until the next one?
*It's first day back at school for me tomorrow so I might not see the next chapter if it's released*

Shardpixel a dit :

*Might release that chapter shortly*

Uhm... Actually, I don't even think 10...

Ejaffa a dit :

I MEAN 20 ALL TOGETHER NOT 20 MORE DX

Snowywindsky a dit :

WHAT NO NO I LOVE U LOST IT CANT BE OVER -cries- U R THE BEST FANFICTION EVER :C I WILL MISS U

Snowywindsky a dit :

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I LOVE MORE O.O STALKS SHARD BRILLANT SHARD BRILLANT.

Birdluv a dit :

Wait in the next book maybe are you adding characters? :O

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Chapter 16: Gone

“Okay, you can let go now.” Foxie finally said, pulling her hand away from Shard's.
“Yeah, yeah, yeah.” he said like she had been nagging to him for hours.
“I hope that knife of yours is really going to make a trai- Hey! Look, it's Dakota! And Piry-O! We found them-”
“But that means the others are the entire opposite direction, ugh.” Shard interrupted.
“Guys! Over here!” Foxie shouted and jumped once or twice in excitement as they turned around to look.”
“Aye, it be Shard-y and Foxie-o!”
“Looks like they found the way out, too.” Dakota said, grinning just the slightest bit.
As the pair walked over, Shard informed them of three missing members. “We can't just leave them; we'll have to find them.” Then he proceeded to point out the trail he was leaving so they wouldn't get lost once more.
As they turned, Foxie's ears perked up and she shushed the others. “Shh! Do you hear that...?”
Shard listened, Dakota and Piry-O, as well.
“Uh oh, it better-y not be another ghost-y!” Piry-O exclaimed with a shrill voice of fear.
“No... That's not it, I know that...” Shard said, tapping his foot at the ground while straining to decipher the noises.
“Wait... That's Snowy!” Dakota said brightly, her whole head lifting high. “They're nearby! That way!” she directed as she pointed a finger to their right and ran towards the talking.
“Finaaaa! Snowyyy! Amandaaa?” Foxie shouted, finally hearing shouts in return.
“Hey guys, wait up! This thing is hard to drag around!” Shard shouted after them, running as fast as he could to keep up.
The final three mice turned and saw the others, all beaming with pride. “You guys!” Serafina shouted happily, glad to see smiles on their faces. “What's going on?”
“Did you find the way out?!” Amanda asked with great curiosity and high hopes.
“Yep! And we left a trail of markings to guide our way back!” Foxie answered happily, gesturing to the panting and sweaty Shard, who finally sluggishly caught up with the six others.
“I hate blades.” he said breathlessly. Everyone only laughed.
“Well, let's go!” Snowy cheered joyfully, and proceeded to follow the trail, along with the others.
Foxie looked at Shard. “Well, it's finally happening. Our escape.”
“Home...” Shard said silently, the word seemingly echoing on and on.
After following a long and twisted trail, the group reached a heavy and deep cut in the ground.
The end.
Where Shard first put his blade.
But there was no light.
There was nothing.
Just a hole.
The seven mice stared at each other, hoping it was just their imagination and that the trail went on further.
But it did not.
“No... We were so close...” Shard said, his misery quickly returning, just like the rest of the group.

Mewisawsome a dit :

oh man i love this fanfic so much holy crap lzskfjhsldj

Shardpixel a dit :

THE END IS NEAR, PREPARE YOURSELVES!

Yes, my friends. The end has drawn incredibly close. This was only the start, however. The adventure will continue, and it will be more suspenseful, shocking, and exciting than this by far.

It's been a pleasure.

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The next chapter is the final one. Prepare yourselves.

Ejaffa a dit :

OMG poor us. :c
#shox o3o