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 Balloonfeet  « Citoyen »
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chumimii a dit : Very nice! I only have some things to say... 1. The lines look very blurred. You need to make them darker next time so I can see the outline of the character. 2. You can see the previous colors before you put a new color there. What I mean: (I pointed at it and cropped the area where this happens)  3. The the piece of hair to her right (ponytail or more hair) looks unattached. |
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Dandelion  « Censeur »
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balloonfeet a dit : thank you so much <3 oh i know that it looks kinda creepy but have a look at the reference... i tried to draw her as closely as i could!  |
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Komuyu Walianna  « Citoyen »
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| please  and this  |
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walianna a dit : I critiqued your last one because headshots are a little more difficult to critique  |
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Zetsuen a dit : I found a couple of refs for how to draw crossed arms, I don't know if you'll find them super helpful, but I have them here!   And these   |
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ebotthegreat a dit : ahhh, those are very helpful thanks!! i just realised it was completely wrong, i wasn't drawing the hand tucked in haha (also, i recognize the first ref as kel's art! :D) |
Begacheesy  « Citoyen »
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| Can someone critique this please?  |
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Zetsuen a dit : You're very welcome! Looking up good references always helps. :) begacheesy a dit : Ok so: -the paw holding the flag looks separated from the rest of the body; try drawing the rest of the arm behind it. -the fluff on the left side of its face is different from the right; try to make them look more similar. -the paw holding the cupcake thing looks very shapeless; try looking up a reference for paws and try to make it look more like a paw. -the facial features are centered on the face, but the head itself isnt facing centered, try to make the face looking the same direction as the head or vice versa -the flag pole isn't straight -maybe also add some shading, otherwise pretty cute! |
| Begacheesy « Citoyen »
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ebotthegreat a dit : Omg, ty! next time i'll try it because i rushed a bit of it, haha <D |
| Walianna « Citoyen »
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Ejaffa a dit : Thanks ) |
| Windmillz « Citoyen »
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| Can anyone critique this? i'm so sorry the picture is dark ;a;  |
Shardpixel  « Consul »
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Doticanny  « Censeur »
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doticanny a dit : I feel like there's something off about it, hmm |
Cadencecool  « Citoyen »
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| can i get some critique pl0x? owo  |
Thefourthone  « Censeur »
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 i would much rather have in depth criticism pls thx |
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| i've posted here several times and still haven't gotten any of my art critiqued  |
