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Chapter 3: A Vision of Nostalgia

A brave-looking, white mouse ran up to the small group and quickly introduced herself. “The name's Foxie J. You can call me Fox, of course.” The brave and witty grin on her face then vanished and she went to more serious matters. “I don't know how we could have been right about this place, and how we could have ended up in it. All I know is that I, and most likely no one else, knows a single thing about how we've all ended up here. And I also found another person who could help...” she motioned for someone to come over and yet another stranded mouse appeared before them all. It was astounding how so many were victims of this occurrence. Were they the only ones?
The new mouse gave a slightly shy wave, then repositioned her hat back in place and introduced herself. “Aye, there. The name's Piry-O.”
Shard didn't reply for a moment to take a few deep breaths, then asked the obvious question, “So... HOW more exactly will we find?” He looked around and still saw a red and black barren field. It was most certainly strange being here, that was for sure.
The others shrugged and doubted there would be more, when a slightly timid-sounding voice spoke out, “I'm here, but I think I'm the only one left.” She took a step forward to be visible. This new mouse had fangs sharp and most certainly dangerous, but still didn't seem too threatening by the looks of it with eye shadow and a flowery necklace. “I'm Amanda...” she said softly and joined the group.
Now staring at them all, all the other victims of appearing in a world of chaos – which really didn't seem too chaotic at the moment – Shard went back to his old self. The one with a huge attitude and temper issue. “Who did this, I demand one of you tell me how we got here now!”
They all looked at each other and shrugged. “No one here can remember a thing. From the looks of things, you seem the most likely to have done this, really.” Dakota replied to him.
“Me...?! ME?! Did you forget I'm just as clueless about this situation as-” he stopped suddenly. He was getting a huge headache now as the others stared at him as if he were a freak. It may has well have been that way, for he was moaning and groaning non-stop like a lunatic.
“I-is he okay...?” Amanda asked, a bit concerned about Shard's sudden change.
He finally stopped and by now beads of sweat rolled down his face, and he was breathing loudly. “Ow...”
“What was that...?” Serafina asked, not sure whether Shard should have been scaring her or making her concern over him.
“...That... That wasn't what I thought it was, was it? Am I losing my mind... No... I couldn't be... But...” he continuously stammered over his own words.
“Well, spit it out already!” Fox shouted, impatient to know what was going on.
“I just had a vision... Of how we all got here.”

Snowywindsky a dit :

0.0 EPIC 0.0 ....what could shard have seen? i shall wait till next chapter 0.0

Snowywindsky a dit :

AMAZING STORY i have NEVER found a story this interesting.

Snowywindsky a dit :

No shard, Thank You For Ths Entertainment Of Your Amazing Story Writing. :D :3

Snowywindsky a dit :

your welcome but its really true. :D :3 also shard? i saw a pic that u drew posted by someone saying that its their art work?

Snowywindsky a dit :

ok i was just checking i thought that they was saying they made the art :D :3

Shardpixel a dit :

Double post -n-

Ejaffa a dit :

"Amanda that's not how you hold a gun"

Anniebuscus a dit :

*notices that you drew THE FLOWER THAT I DIDN'T HAD xD*