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[Fanfic] Lost- The beginning
Shardpixel
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Anniebuscus a dit :
***FANFIC ART TIME!***

I just thought that my character Amanda would have a pet dragon:

(a WIP drawing)

Nice :3

Ejaffa a dit :


OMG HOW COULD HAVE I BEEN ASLEEP WHEN MORE CHAPTERS HAD BEEN RELEASED
-rages-
I love the attitude of my character though CX
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"Amanda that's not how you hold a gun"

xDDD Dat art.

Yay you like your character ouo

I have to get ready for a party I'm having , so I think Lost won;t continue today. Sorry guys ^^;
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a party your having? ?.? OH Happy Birthday Shard Again Happy Birthday To You! :D :3
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Shardpixel a dit :


Nice :3
xDDD Dat art.

Yay you like your character ouo

I have to get ready for a party I'm having , so I think Lost won;t continue today. Sorry guys ^^;

PAR-TAAAAAY
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Ejaffa a dit :


PAR-TAAAAAY

AW YEAAAAH

*I'll start writing the next chapter for you guys c:*
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Shardpixel a dit :


AW YEAAAAH

*I'll start writing the next chapter for you guys c:*

I love you, how many times have I said that.
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Ejaffa a dit :


I love you, how many times have I said that.

Love you too c:

Not sure, how many times have I? xD
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New chapter \o3o/

Chapter 5: Chaotic Turns Chaotic

Shard walked in front of the six mice, his head held high and his mind set on one thing: Forward. Never to look back, but to move on to a more serene place. To save themselves.
To save the world.
Foxie was close next to him. “Any idea where we're going?”
“Not the slightest clue.”
“That's reassuring,” Dakota added in with a bit of a snarl.
“I don't think we should fight over anything.” Shard said, putting his foot down a bit harder than needed and ceasing his walk. “It won't do us any good, now will it?”
“Ah, but what would be any good-o for us, now?” Piry-O asked, a bit concerned that the group had no idea what to really do.
Serafina looked at them all. “Maybe we-”
“-No... It's hopeless, isn't it, Shard?” Fox asked, her face turning gloomy and now loking at the black ground. “There isn't a way out... Is there...”
Shard didn't reply. Instead he continued walking on, without looking at the others. They all walked in silence for a decent amount of time, yet everything around them looked the same as always.
Suddenly, Amanda stopped walking. The others stopped as well and Shard finally turned around. “What's going on?” he asked curiously.
“Did anyone hear something...?” Amanda asked, quivering a bit. Shard listened carefully and intently. He heard noises, too.
“Guys... I think we're about to figure out how chaotic this place is...” He looked behind the group, determining that the noise was coming from that direction. “Run!” he shouted and turned back, running along with the others as fast as they could.
Everyone could hear the noises, now. They were loud and ear-piercing screeches that screamed louder and louder as they got closer and closer.
Perhaps the world would have a little delay to be saved, after all.


Sorry that it's short, I need to stop for suspense.
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Shardpixel a dit :
New chapter \o3o/

Chapter 5: Chaotic Turns Chaotic

Shard walked in front of the six mice, his head held high and his mind set on one thing: Forward. Never to look back, but to move on to a more serene place. To save themselves.
To save the world.
Foxie was close next to him. “Any idea where we're going?”
“Not the slightest clue.”
“That's reassuring,” Dakota added in with a bit of a snarl.
“I don't think we should fight over anything.” Shard said, putting his foot down a bit harder than needed and ceasing his walk. “It won't do us any good, now will it?”
“Ah, but what would be any good-o for us, now?” Piry-O asked, a bit concerned that the group had no idea what to really do.
Serafina looked at them all. “Maybe we-”
“-No... It's hopeless, isn't it, Shard?” Fox asked, her face turning gloomy and now loking at the black ground. “There isn't a way out... Is there...”
Shard didn't reply. Instead he continued walking on, without looking at the others. They all walked in silence for a decent amount of time, yet everything around them looked the same as always.
Suddenly, Amanda stopped walking. The others stopped as well and Shard finally turned around. “What's going on?” he asked curiously.
“Did anyone hear something...?” Amanda asked, quivering a bit. Shard listened carefully and intently. He heard noises, too.
“Guys... I think we're about to figure out how chaotic this place is...” He looked behind the group, determining that the noise was coming from that direction. “Run!” he shouted and turned back, running along with the others as fast as they could.
Everyone could hear the noises, now. They were loud and ear-piercing screeches that screamed louder and louder as they got closer and closer.
Perhaps the world would have a little delay to be saved, after all.


Sorry that it's short, I need to stop for suspense.

~(O3O)~ CLIFFHANGERS THO
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Ejaffa a dit :


~(O3O)~ CLIFFHANGERS THO

ewe
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Not sure if you two get on:

http://i.imgur.com/Zd4BY7t.png
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Ejaffa a dit :
Not sure if you two get on:

*Dying* Oooooh that's hilarious!

xDDD
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Nice chapter 5! so exiting. you should be an author one day i bet your writing would interest many kids.
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Snowywindsky a dit :
Nice chapter 5! so exiting. you should be an author one day i bet your writing would interest many kids.

Each chapter takes 10-20 minutes to write... Not my best works but they are enough to make a good fanfiction c:

My writing is a bit strange and uneven... But I guess it's pretty good x3

Thank you very much though :3
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Pretty good???!?!?! NO ITS EPICLY AMAZING.
but your welcomeC:
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Snowywindsky a dit :
Pretty good???!?!?! NO ITS EPICLY AMAZING.
but your welcomeC:

Alright, if you say so...
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:D :) :3
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Finally finished it! :D


[img] https://i.imgur.com/MHmGoJo.png [/img]
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wow thats a really good picture of the mice. i like it good job!
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Im so excited for le new chapter!

I'm sorry about that too, I can be called impatient XP
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Mewisawsome a dit :
Finally finished it! :D

Oh wow, that's really great. Thank you.

Guys, I don't know when I'll release the next chapter. As you may know I'm going through depression right now... But I'll try my best.

Birdluv a dit :
Name: Skylar (Sky for short)
Age (Human years): 14
Gender: female
Loner?: yes
Bio: Skylar might look like a nice, straight, mouse, but theres more that meets the eye. Once, when at age four, she The scar remains to this day..

Charaters slots closed a long time ago. Please read the OP fully next time.
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