Ogawd this is a long chapter. Ogawd.

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Chapter 6: Already Over

Each mouse ran as far as they could, as fast as their feet would carry them. It seemed hopeless as the sounds they heard grew louder and louder. Every one of their hearts raced, with no time to stop and catch a breath.
Amanda looked back cautiously and briefly and squealed, “We'll never outrun these things, they're too fast!”
Shard turned now, and Amanda was right. They were too fast, they were nearly upon them. By now they were easier to see, and there seemed to be only three of them, though they were very large.
“Are those... Mice?” Snowy asked through small puffs of breath, still striving to keep up with the others.
“Maybe they were once, but not now.” Shard replied, still looking back at them. They were like shadows, like black flames. The shadows would screech constantly and had the form of a mouse, but most certainly not normal ones. “They look dead... Like-”
“Phantoms! What luck we must have!” Serafina answered, not daring to look back again after taking a brief peek. “We can't outrun those!”
Shard looked at them all and decided it was time to make a tough decision. “We have to split up.”
“Are you insane?! That's the last thing we should do!” Foxie shouted, angry yet desperate for a way to get out of those dead creatures' clutches.
“I think we'd all die that way, Mr. Smart.” Dakota snarled.
Shard growled a bit to himself. “It's better than us all dying here! One of us could escape, if not more! What have we got to lose?”
“I trust Shard, and I don't want anyone else to die... We have to try it, we just have to,” Serafina shouted, trying to speak over the screeches that were so close they made it deafening to listen to.
“Then go!” Shard shouted, straying from the group that quickly broke up, bursting into different directions. They all ran in odd patterns and as swift as they could, and the loud noises soon faded. Each mouse became well aware of this and tried walking back from where they came from, hoping they would meet up with each other again. The problem was that everything looked the same.
Fox wandered around without a clue of where she was going, when she heard a silent moaning sound. She looked around and jumped at the sight of a black figure; it was close, too. She started to walk away from it, afraid it was one of the ghosts when she heard the moaning again- then seem to stop short and still. It hadn't sounded nearly like the sounds the phantoms were making before, and she walked back to take a peek. She nearly squealed at what she saw, then stopped herself.
Shard was lying there, his eyes closed and surrounded by fresh blood, that for some reason didn't blend into the ground as much as it seemed it would have. Fox looked at him for a moment, dumbfounded, and then turned and ran away, tears streaming down her face.

Dem feels, dem feels.

E: #pageget

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SHARD!!!

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SHARD!!!

*Knew you were gonna draw something*

ewe

R.I.P Hollista (Amanda's mother)

I write emotional stuff c:

ewe

AND I HAVE CONFUSING CHAPTER TITLES HUEHUE. (Uses big words like "nostalgia" and phrases that don't make any sense ewe)

THIS FORMATING IS A BUTT.

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Chapter 7: A Reflection Upon Worth

Foxie ran without any thoughts of where she was going, or what she was doing. She finally opened her eyes again after bumping into an object. Somehow the group was back together, or, most of the group.
“I'm not even going to ask how that's possible...” Snowy said, scratching her head at the sight of the whole group having met back together in one place.
“Maybe our senses of direction are really good...?” Amanda said, trying to explain the reason how this was even possible.
Serafina shook her head. “I'm horrible with direction normally. Maybe something in our instincts just drove us all here-”
“Who cares.” Dakota interrupted, impatient at the irrelevant conversation. “I think saving our kind is more important than how we found each other.”
“Aye, Dakota has a point-o, if only she be doin' somethin' like that more.” Piry-O chimed in.
Fox just stood there, quiet in grief, salty tears slowly making their way down her cheeks. She was looking down at the ground, ignoring the meaningless conversation they were all having. The fact that they didn't even seem to realize anything about it made her snap. “Haven't you all noticed someone's missing?!” she blurted out in frustration.
They five other mice stopped and looked around at each other. It wasn't too hard to pick out the one that was missing. “Shard!” Serafina shouted, gasping and looking at the others in panic and dismay. “Wha-what could have happened to-”
“He's dead!” Foxie cried, then silently sobbed for a few moments. “He selflessly saved our lives and you guys don't do anything but wander around talking about stupid and meaningless arguments! We have to focus and get out of here or we basically just killed him just to all die ourselves!” She finally stopped and took a moment to breathe through her often sobs.
“D-Dead...?” Serafina stopped as tears started to form in her eyes. “But... I thought we'd all make it back here alive...”
“He knew that it was all or nothing. He knew if we didn't break up we'd all die, and that if we did only one or two would. I doubt he just ran, he probably taunted them...” Dakota told them, trying to end the sensitive ordeal. “We have to keep going...”
“Not... Not with m-me, you won't...”
Serafina and Foxie looked up from the ground and turned slowly to the voice.

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Hope you like c:

(Piry-O is freaking hard to write dialogue with >_<)

Shardpixel a dit :

I write emotional stuff c:

ewe

AND I HAVE CONFUSING CHAPTER TITLES HUEHUE. (Uses big words like "nostalgia" and phrases that don't make any sense ewe)

THIS FORMATING IS A BUTT.

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Chapter 7: A Reflection Upon Worth

Foxie ran without any thoughts of where she was going, or what she was doing. She finally opened her eyes again after bumping into an object. Somehow the group was back together, or, most of the group.
“I'm not even going to ask how that's possible...” Snowy said, scratching her head at the sight of the whole group having met back together in one place.
“Maybe our senses of direction are really good...?” Amanda said, trying to explain the reason how this was even possible.
Serafina shook her head. “I'm horrible with direction normally. Maybe something in our instincts just drove us all here-”
“Who cares.” Dakota interrupted, impatient at the irrelevant conversation. “I think saving our kind is more important than how we found each other.”
“Aye, Dakota has a point-o, if only she be doin' somethin' like that more.” Piry-O chimed in.
Fox just stood there, quiet in grief, salty tears slowly making their way down her cheeks. She was looking down at the ground, ignoring the meaningless conversation they were all having. The fact that they didn't even seem to realize anything about it made her snap. “Haven't you all noticed someone's missing?!” she blurted out in frustration.
They five other mice stopped and looked around at each other. It wasn't too hard to pick out the one that was missing. “Shard!” Serafina shouted, gasping and looking at the others in panic and dismay. “Wha-what could have happened to-”
“He's dead!” Foxie cried, then silently sobbed for a few moments. “He selflessly saved our lives and you guys don't do anything but wander around talking about stupid and meaningless arguments! We have to focus and get out of here or we basically just killed him just to all die ourselves!” She finally stopped and took a moment to breathe through her often sobs.
“D-Dead...?” Serafina stopped as tears started to form in her eyes. “But... I thought we'd all make it back here alive...”
“He knew that it was all or nothing. He knew if we didn't break up we'd all die, and that if we did only one or two would. I doubt he just ran, he probably taunted them...” Dakota told them, trying to end the sensitive ordeal. “We have to keep going...”
“Not... Not with m-me, you won't...”
Serafina and Foxie looked up from the ground and turned slowly to the voice.

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Hope you like c:

(Piry-O is freaking hard to write dialogue with &gt;_&lt;)

AAAHHHHH I LOVE THIS

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AAAHHHHH I LOVE THIS

Heheh, thank you <3

Doublepostwhoevencaresit'sanewchapterlet'sallbehappybecausethischaptergotridofmydepressionfornow...

Seriously though this chapter... IF YOU DON'T SMILE YOU HAVE ISSUES. I WAS FREAKING DEPRESSED AND NOW I'M SMILING.

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Chapter 8: Forward

A black mouse triumphantly but painfully walked slowly towards the group, limping and using their giant sword as a mere walking cane, then looked up at them. He had a huge and bloody gash in his side, still wet but not as serious as before.
Foxie was speechless. “You... Weren't you...”
“Dead? I was surprised myself, you didn't even check!” Shard gave a pained smile and limped a bit closer to the group. “Better hope we do find any of those things again or I'm completely screwed. They only left because they though I was dead!”
The whole group seemed to brighten up as this sight, even if it was an injured mouse that they didn't even think to tend to. “I think we're all glad you're okay...” Serafina said gleefully, then shook her head. “But we might not have enough time to save the others anymore, they may all be dead at this very moment!”
“It could have been like that years ago, Fina.” Dakota told her, still with a hint of solemn passing through her voice. “But it didn't happen.”
“Yes-o, we be ready-o to fight-y at anything this place throws at us-o!” Piry-O shouted cheerfully, getting the whole rest of the team pumped up.
“We can do this, I know we can! We have hope, the will to go one place and one place only!” Snowy yelled joyously, slightly jumping up and down with reborn excitement.
“Only one place...” Amanda echoed with pleasure in her voice.
“Forward.” Foxie and Shard both said at once, then looked at each other with true smiles.
“Then it's settled, no more doubts.” Shard said, gaining the new ability to stand up straight and hardly need support from his blade anymore.
“No more crying, no more depression!” Snowy shouted happily, her eyes shooting from one mouse to another.
“Let's go the only place we can go...”Serafina told them with great inspiration firing her up.
And then they went. The only place they could go...
Forward.

More to come~ <3

E: FORMATTING STOPPED BEING A BUTT! c: (For now...)

0.0 two days no laptop and i missed all dis? i better get reading!

Shardpixel a dit :

Doublepostwhoevencaresit'sanewchapterlet'sallbehappybecausethischaptergotridofmydepressionfornow...

Seriously though this chapter... IF YOU DON'T SMILE YOU HAVE ISSUES. I WAS FREAKING DEPRESSED AND NOW I'M SMILING.
More to come~ &lt;3

E: FORMATTING STOPPED BEING A BUTT! c: (For now...)

Me and you have such a weird connection in this story.
...I like it CX

Ejaffa a dit :

Me and you have such a weird connection in this story.
...I like it CX

*Totally wasn't trying to make it seem like a connection like how it is but it turned out that way like 5 chapter ago yeah*

xD Me too.

I'll write some more now c:

WAIT U GOING TO FAST!! i never got to read chapter 8 but i have a comment:C I WISH THIS WILL NEVER END ITS THE BEST! also dats why u at dis top of meh art listC:

Snowywindsky a dit :

WAIT U GOING TO FAST!! i never got to read chapter 8 but i have a comment:C I WISH THIS WILL NEVER END ITS THE BEST! also dats why u at dis top of meh art listC:

Heh x3

It will have to end eventually or else it will suck after 100 chapters. Or 50. Or 30. Or 10.

Speaking of art...

*Drew a phantom 'cause I wanted you guys to envision this stuff better c:*



Their body parts aren't attached like a normal mouse, they have spaces n' stuff.

BUT DEY CAN FLY ewe

Hope you guys like it, working on the next chapter now c;

My chapters all suck because they are all stupid and lengthened conversations. T^T

FORMATTING IS BEING A BUTT AGAIN >A<

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Chapter 9: Leave them to Die

And so they walked for endless hours, seeking the destination they seemed they'd never reach with such longing and devotion. Everything here looked the same. The sky and ground were the only things to accompany the lonely group, on its never-ending journey that seemed would last a lifetime – that is, if the lifetime were short as expected when in such a dangerous place.
The proud and joyful inspiration in the group had died down at this point and they had been traveling hours in silence; it was a deep silence that made the place even more eerie and haunted.
Serafina couldn't help but to break this silence and asked, “Shard... Do you think those phantoms... You think they were mice just like us ever?”
“I wouldn't say 'just like us,'” Dakota said to Serafina in great discomfort from the reminder that those dead shadows could strike at any given moment.
“They probably were living mice at one point...” Shard answered.
“You think... They were always this mean?”
Shard took a moment to think about Serafina's question. “Probably not, I bet they don't remember a thing of their past life... Just that now all there is to do is kill anyone who trespasses in their domain.”
“Yeah, like we MEANT to come here,” Foxie said with great sarcasm in her voice.
“How would they end up here though? This mustn't be where all mice go when they die...” Amanda said sheepishly, shivering as she thought of ending up here after death.
“Aye, you have to keep-o in mind-y that we mouses don't die often.” Piry-O reminded them.
“It's true, this could be what happens to those who... die...” Snowy said, scared and wishing that death never came.
“Maybe... Maybe it's just for those who... I don't know...” Shard stammered, trying to end the conversation for good. He didn't like the talk of death, and kept the thought to himself that the phantoms they pass may be deceased relatives of the group members.
“Those who die here?” Amanda worried, getting very anxious now.
“There's got to be a faster way out of here than walking around blindly!” Snowy cried out.
“Shh! The ghosts will hear you!” Shard whispered loudly.
“Let them hear us, maybe we should all give up and just die here!” Dakota shouted angrily, rage stuck in her voice. “If all we do is argue and wander around without hope we'll ever make it out, what's the point of doing anything else but sitting here until we all become cursed ghosts in the hell, also?”
Shard stopped walking, followed by the rest of the group. He looked around at them all.
“There is no point... We shouldn't say a word again if all it's going to do is make us argue and weep.” he said, taking a deep breath and slouching back on his sword, then continued walking on.
“What if one of us dies here, though?” Snowy asked, not helping the situation.
Shard kept his back turned to he group, contemplating what to say.
“If one is about to die, you can choose to try to aid them to your very best, and have them die knowing you tried. If you wish to be cruel and betraying, leave them to die.”

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Dem quotes though.

Hope it's okay o3o

Nice. but what chapter do you think you will go up to? PLZ SAY 40:D :) :3 OR 30?? 20? 10?

wow i really like your fanfic ^-^

Snowywindsky a dit :

Nice. but what chapter do you think you will go up to? PLZ SAY 40:D :) :3 OR 30?? 20? 10?

Notice the thread title says Lost- The beginning. So I think they'll be more parts like a book series.

So maybe 20 or less...

Supastarx a dit :

wow i really like your fanfic ^-^

Thank you <3

That's how I imagine how we are walking

There's so much ARGUING IN THIS.
Needs happier chapters.

Gabreyolo a dit :

That's how I imagine how we are walking

Omfg dis <3

Thank you nwn

(Just to make sure you are envisioning the story more correctly, it's not a forest. It's a black and red wasteland c:)

Ejaffa a dit :

There's so much ARGUING IN THIS.
Needs happier chapters.

Omfgnextchapterisbeingwrittennowlemmetrytoincludethismore.

(ShouldImakerelationshipsxD)

100 posts. Thanks to you all for helping out with making this fanfic a success.